A Nitpicker from Ancient Times Becomes a Cannon Fodder Female Lead in the Modern Era

After reading this novel, out of responsibility for my lost Jinjiang coins, I would like to seriously express my evaluation of this novel. I personally like ancient times and the present very much. The introduction and title of the novel also mentioned the character of the heroine as an "ancient barbarian poet" many times. Out of curiosity, I clicked in. Turns out it was just a gimmick and there was very little content about the "tag". Moreover, the character of the heroine in this article is very thin, and there are many places where it doesn't stand up. 1. The heroine is an ancient person from the Ming Dynasty but she is not at all incompatible with modern society. Although the author said that he did not want to write "an ancient heroine who is incompatible with modern society", it is fundamentally impossible. 2. Are Mu Nuoyao in the original book and Mu Nuoyao who traveled through time the same person? The author says it's the same person. But the logic behind it doesn't make sense. If they are not the same person, then why does a person from ancient times to the present have such deep feelings for an unknown brother? Why does the brother not feel that something is wrong with his sister? If it is the same person, it is clearly stated in the male protagonist's self-anatomy after his confession that the heroine in his dream is different from the heroine in reality, so whether the original Mu Nuoyao is the current Mu Nuoyao or not. The content of the story is thin. The main plot is the development of the heroine in the entertainment industry, and the undercurrent is the tragic death of the heroine's parents. There are only two main contents, one is the "National Style Show" and the other is the talent show. The undercurrent about the parents' tragedy was okay, but a bit stiff. There is nothing except these three contents. The emotional line makes me very embarrassed and baffled. The male protagonist fell in love with Yuan Mu Nuoyao at first sight, and later recognized her because the current Mu Nuoyao played a piano piece. (By the way, I want to ask the female protagonist why an ancient person could play the piano?) He discovered that Bai Yueguang was by his side. The chasing scenes are cliche, written and not written the same. The male protagonist's character is confusing and unclear. In addition, the author has many other issues that I will not go into details one by one. Fortunately, the author's writing style is relatively good, otherwise I would not be able to finish this kind of article. The author should practice hard, alas, I am tired. Next time, don't sell dog meat to others.

? Why didn't I order all the logos?

Finally finished chasing! Perfection!

The sisters are so handsome! Pentakillyyds!

Ahhhh, I really like the heroine. The handsome female rapper is so handsome. Oooh, it's completely on the tip of my heart.

The chase is over! Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers

I have been waiting for this book for a long time, and then I found out that the author had updated it, so I bought it all. I didn't start reading it until now. The main reason is that before the update was completed, I was forced to stop reading the book two or three times because of the updated chapters. Then after the update was completed, I found that there were very few updated chapters and it was finished. I was a little afraid to read it. It was only now that I read it again from the beginning. It is still quite sweet.

Ahhh, it's such a short cookie, but it's very pretty.

Ahhhhhhhh congratulations!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! No more? ?