Preorder blurb: Historical GL, Green Tiles, Red Walls, and Apricot Blossoms
Shen Hanqing is just like her name: her tender gaze makes people's hearts flutter.
The first time Yuanwei saw her, she thought how beautiful this young woman would look in a bright red bridal crown and robes.
Later, when Shen Hanqing ascended the highest throne,
Yuanwei thought that the black-and-red imperial robes suited her just as well.
Only when she saw Shen Hanqing in a white undergarment, with every inch of skin showing, did Yuanwei understand that Shen Hanqing had never been afraid to do anything, so long as it was what she wanted.
Novel blurb:
In the 120th year of Yongning, Chancellor Chu rebelled, implicating the newly appointed crown princess, Chu Sui, who was thrown into prison. The one who sent her there was none other than Yan Jiu, the imperial guard she herself had promoted.
A month later, after witnessing her father's gruesome death, Chu Sui agreed to marry the crown prince.
On the tall city wall, the young woman in a bright red bridal crown and robes leapt into the air, smashing herself to pieces on the ground.
When she awoke again, Chu Sui donned the secret identity of a winemaker and hid herself in a small border town...
From then on, true and false rumors began to spread through the border town of Yongning.
They said her newly brewed white liquor could lure flower thieves.
They said her lotus wine could help find the missing young lady of the Qian family.
They said her Thousand-Year Elixir could...
As more and more people wondered who this Miss Sui was, Yan Jiu pulled her close and said, word by word, "You are mine."
Theme: With peace reigning over our land, will you watch it with me?
I spent some time reading the full article and wanted to share my personal views. First of all, the author's writing style is relatively smooth and easy to read, but the first chapter has too many characters, which makes it a bit confusing. In fact, it doesn't matter if there are many appearances. There is no need to mention the full names of unimportant characters. I almost gave up when I read the first chapter. Then I read the second chapter. It was okay. Then I continued reading. Well, the emotional line between the male and female protagonists was also revealed. It was not bad. I continued reading! I originally wanted to see how the male and female protagonists would develop next, but ended up talking about the money girl! Here, I would like to tell the author that in fact, you don't have to do this~~ I don't know how the author arranged the situation at the beginning, but I guess the author did not outline the details at the beginning, nor did he think about the progress of the plot, so he just wrote it down willfully, and he also followed the career line as he wrote. In fact, there is nothing wrong with the career line, but it is obvious from the plot that the author is a little cold and overwhelmed about the arrangement of the plot or about the cold and unrewarding work. I understand this. Just from the collection of the article, I think the author should first think about why it was confiscated? It has something to do with recommendations, but actually it also has something to do with your own writing, especially the beginning, which is really important. This does not mean that the beginning must be explosive. There will still be readers who will read the story, but if too many characters appear at the beginning and it is confusing, the readers will not be able to relate to it and will abandon the article. Now let's start with the plot, and let's talk about the plot next. The setting of the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists is also gripping at the beginning, but as the plot progresses, there are too many side branches. Although these side branches also promote the development of the plot, the male and female protagonists are the protagonists. When writing, I accidentally put the cart before the horse. Also, it can be seen that the author did not put much effort into the layout, and the plot is a bit scattered. Although the article is almost finished, but in the first 30 to 50,000 words, the author's arrangement of the plot was a bit confusing. Generally speaking, the author's ability to grasp the overall situation cannot be seen from the content of the article. Personally, I feel that no matter whether the author is writing an old novel or starting a new one, he needs to put more thought into the plot, transitions, and characterization of the characters. For now, the writing is passable, but the plot arrangement still needs some thought. There is no need to read and practice more. Before writing or revising an article, it would be better to think about the plot first before writing. When describing transitions, it is best to think about it from the reader's perspective. If you read the text from the reader's perspective, will it feel abrupt or lack a sense of substitution? Having said so much is just my personal opinion. I wish the author a smoother writing journey!
Unexpectedly, Yanjiu didn't show up at the end
Well, in my eyes, Yanjiu ended up with Suisui.
Two people who fall in love and kill each other
How can the heroine let go? Even if she doesn't hate or seek revenge, she probably doesn't want to see or hear these people again.
It's great. It's the best ancient novel I've read recently.
It's beautiful, come on
I read the comments and most of them said the first chapter was a bit confusing. I didn't find it confusing after reading it. Great writing in capital letters?
Come on for the next one! My wife's writing is very good~
Hahahahahaha, not cheating is already the last tenderness, why no one sees it, it's really strange