Please bookmark my upcoming story! "The Comeback of the Beloved Pretty Boy (Entertainment Industry)"
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Upcoming story blurb:
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Ruan Yanqiu, a former TY Entertainment trainee, was outstanding at singing and dancing and had mastered his craft. After being tricked into terminating his contract and signing with a small company, he only wanted to try a different path and hone his acting skills. Instead, the company arranged for him to join a currently popular boy-group survival show.
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Ruan Yanqiu calmly lied: "I actually only know how to act."
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So the company handed him a script titled "I'm the Perfect Pretty Boy Sweetheart." Just play the part! We hope you can debut on your looks alone and bring glory to the company!
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Ruan Yanqiu: "..." It seems I don't have the money to terminate my contract.
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Who could have guessed his acting would be so bad that one disastrous break in character after another would follow?
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Onstage, Ruan Yanqiu had silver hair, red lips, and snow-white skin. His black shirt outlined his perfect figure...and his dark, cool, clear eyes made every gesture radiate the highest form of sex appeal.
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The whole internet got nosebleeds: "Holy crap, where did this big shot come from?"
The company was both thrilled and bewildered: "W-wait...are you sure he took the pretty boy sweetheart script?"
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Later, people discovered that he excelled at singing, dancing, rapping, and looking good, while his skills on the piano, flute, xiao, and violin, not to mention Chinese opera and folk dance, were enough to astonish industry veterans.
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This guy was a freaking treasure trove!
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Ruan Yanqiu's popularity soared, putting him on the heels of Jian Lan, the frontrunner for center.
What did Jian Lan think?
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In front of the cameras, putting on a polite act: "He's very talented. I hope he makes his debut!"
Behind the cameras, yawning: "What do I think? Can't be bothered to think..."
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Yet when no one was around, he would pin Ruan Yanqiu in a corner and breathe suggestively into his ear: "Why do you run away whenever you see me?"
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The sunny, righteous one on the surface, cold and disillusioned underneath, an unshakable center and seductive big shot top VS a talented, hardworking, and even more stunning bottom, whose acting is unfortunately less impressive, who loves money like life itself and cares little for fame
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Story blurb:
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Lin Huan, Huan Nation's top combat instructor, accidentally entered an escape game. He fought to survive only so he could return to the real world and find the killer who had murdered his teammate: the infamous Federation celebrity Xiao Yiyou. On the very first day, he discovered that his nemesis was in the game too.
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Lin Huan: cold smile, quickly loads his gun.
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But...wait a minute. Is something wrong with this sworn enemy of his?
Why did he take a bullet for him? And why did he gaze at him so cheesily as he was dying?
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Baffled, Lin Huan watched Xiao Yiyou, who was already half-buried, leap out of the hole and pin him against a tree. He hooked a finger under Lin Huan's chin. "You really don't know why?"
Lin Huan thought for a moment, then shook his head. "No."
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Then he whacked him back into the hole with a shovel.
A master manipulator, shameless bluffer, and innocent scapegoat top VS a decisive, disciplined, supremely skilled, very serious combat expert bottom
Declaration: This story has the right values. The top is not the killer.
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[Announcement]: This story will go into pay-to-read reverse-V mode on Friday, July 17. The reverse-V chapters are 39-94. If you've already read them, please don't buy them again. Chapter 95 is the author's rambling, so don't buy it! If you accidentally purchase it, leave a message and you'll get a refund. Thank you all for your continued support, and I hope you'll keep supporting the story.
Theme: Cherish life and the present.
Supernatural Case Files (Criminal Investigation)
I Transmigrated into a Book as a Good-for-Nothing in Showbiz, Then Became a Star
The Comeback of the Beloved Potted Plant (Entertainment Industry)
The Days I Was Bullied by My Tyrannical Boss Editor
I Took Down That Godlike Team Captain
The Flower of the Underworld
·Written to "My Enemy Falls in Love at First Sight" [Written in the front] is not a guide to writing. This work is very well written, but I just want to write about some points that I am very troubled about and express some opinions to the author. Thanks to the author for creating this world, and I look forward to meeting the author in other worlds of work. I read this book in one day, because when I first read the paid chapters, I saw that there were only 95 chapters and it was finished, so I bought the book in one go. I have been thinking about it for a while and want to write a long review. Although it may not be very long and I will write it wherever I think of it, I still want to write something for this novel that I have been immersed in for a whole day. 1. About the plot This book feels really compact to me. As a reader who likes to skip and re-spend sweet points in the main drama, I can hardly find the sweet points where the protagonists' writing is slightly longer. From the time Lin Huan entered the game, there was no rest time between each copy. This is probably one of the reasons why this book only has ninety-five chapters. I actually think that some central world or Youxi system settings can be appropriately set, so that the middle time can be set and the follow-up can be written in a relaxed way. From a character point of view, if a person has experienced such a high-intensity dungeon and has to enter the next dungeon without any rest, even if the system can reset the physical state, it is inevitable that there will be some psychological problems. Even if the protagonist can be mentally strong, I think it would be impossible to accept someone like Chi Ruidinghou in the final copy. Including a lot of foreshadowing (but I don't know if it is) that was not filled in. After reading it, I felt that the author really wanted to write a complete world, but only showed us a one-sided feeling qwq Regarding the feelings of the protagonists, I think the author may think that their direct feelings can be revealed in detail, but in fact in such a tense plot, the readers' thoughts are led by the plot, so much so that I was confused when I saw the fake Xiao Yiyou kissed Lin Huan in the witch copy, but I didn't pay much attention and read on. It is also possible that the author wanted to write a novel with a more positive plot, but what I want to say is that the relationship between the protagonists should not be so little. At least, they can write more love chapters during their alone time. I remember that there was a chapter in which Xiao Yiyou hugged Lin Huan at night, and then Lin Huan felt the feelings but did not say anything about it. Based on my experience of reading so many novels, I know that it is Lin's acceptance of this feeling, but this is written too indirectly. It could be written more directly qwq Another reason may also be my own. When I saw the last dungeon, too many people died too quickly, so that I didn't even bother to read the last dungeon carefully. I just skimmed through two pages after reading one page. The author himself also said at the end that the character creation was not perfect enough. I understand that the author said that writing is so painful that he hastily accepted a few characters in the last dungeon. If possible, I still hope to know their follow-up. 2. About the characters I actually like some of the characters in the dungeon, such as the master and her apprentice. Their characters are all vivid and life-like. In fact, the author is very successful in shaping the characters. For example, although Dinghou is a character who appeared later, he was the first one that came to mind when I was writing the character. His image is very complete, like A living person, a capable but timid ordinary person, but for more characters, there is no more space allocated to them. Maybe in this work, they are three-dimensional and complete characters in the world of the work, but the author only gave me a few sides of them. After reading it, I felt that I had finished reading but not completely. 3. About settings In fact, these three points are connected together. I just split it into three points to prevent others from getting too confused. The setting and the plot are actually bound. As for the setting, where does this game system come from? What is the purpose? There is no way to know. If we want to delve into the reason, there is not enough space after all, there are only ninety-five chapters. My mind is empty as I write this book review, and I can't think of any words or opinions. In fact, I felt very depressed and sad when I read the last chapter. Because I think the author has created a parallel world when he created the novel. However, the author has revealed his heart and arrangements for the characters for us to see. I feel that the characters are actually still being controlled. The author who controls the characters cannot control them anymore. He has no extra energy to shape them, so he hastily takes them back. Generally speaking, the writing style of this novel is very mature and smooth, but it is not so smooth in terms of perception. I hope the author can write a better work and look forward to the next one.
"The house is small" is a big bug for the author~
"Two" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ Dumb
Very well written! Come on come on! Continue with the next book!
No! Great writing! Keep up the good work, duck! Chew Mi!
Damn, my heart is broken, the scumbag cheated on my feelings!
?! Just let me believe that the dead players will survive in the dungeon! NPC! If you're lucky, you can return to real life as soon as possible like Lao Fengtou!
Why is the luck so good? Whoever is told to die will die. This is just nonsense, right?
Xiao Yiyou: Buried alive by a chicken ? Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha Is that so?
Great completion of spreading flowers!!! I like both the characters and the plot, but there are a lot of holes that have not been filled in (for example, who killed his teammates, Tong Yan was a bit lacking, I initially thought he would be as "tenacious" as Jiang Yubai, and his death was a bit hasty). I don't understand some games very well, and the language is okay, but I think it can be better. (Personal thoughts, sorry) Cover your face