Master, You Smell So Good [Female Top]

Write a new article quickly, teacher. Please, I will just wait here quietly for food...

It looks good, but where is the "old place"?

After reading it, I really like this book. Overall, the plot feels like it has a big frame in the front, but the plot in the back is a little obsessed with love. The main line is a bit vague and the progress is slow. The love line that creates conflicts is a bit soft and procrastinating. The image of the male protagonist is still very three-dimensional and plump. He is forbearing and upright, clear breeze, bright moon, and high mountains. Flowers and infatuation, but the image of the heroine feels a little rounded. She is infatuated and can give up her life for the person she loves, but she is unwilling to trust the other person wholeheartedly. I can understand the contradiction and conflict that the wife wants to express, but most of this understanding comes from words rather than truth. The writing is the next step that can be improved ~ The heroine's early image description is still very good. She will not be willing to give her full devotion and want to possess the other person, but she will also be too nostalgic and timid to see others. She is unable to parry the master's direct balls... The subsequent character creation is a bit stiff, as if It was tortured just to make the emotional line appear. Overall, the ending of the article is a bit hasty, but the ending is still good. Indeed, the main text is just a family fun, but it is still unfinished until now. The small extra chapter can be regarded as a different kind of comfort to the readers. This kind of article about women does have a small audience. Most of the wives I have read cut their own legs to produce food and generate electricity for love, so 10 million is really a huge support! The writing style is really good, the description of the scenes is excellent, the plot structure is very fascinating at the beginning, but it is a little delayed later, and the characterization is a little weak. I think the wife can increase the amount of dialogue in the writing, which will play a big role in the fullness of the characters, but this is just my opinion. I hope my wife can continue writing and support the genuine version, come on!

Finished with flowers. The characters and plot are both very interesting. I finished it in one go and still have a lot to learn. Column takes off

As soon as I read this article, I went somewhere else.

Really crazy Hahahaha

I think it's pretty good written in big letters. Really, I think someone like Da Da needs to write GB articles, or other different types of articles. Reading articles like silly and sweet makes me really tired

What a pity. I like cultivating immortals because lovers can be together for thousands of years, and they can also be separated for thousands of years. Tsk, tsk, when I read a book about reincarnation and had to wait for thousands of years, I immediately vomited blood. I want to go crazy or change someone else. Oh, melancholy

"Production" is a big bug for the author~ entangled

Finished spreading flowers! By the way, that senior sister was unconscious outside the door and woke up in the forbidden area. Isn't there some reason why she was the only one alive in the entire sect?