This is my first novel. Please leave a comment if you enjoy it!
The author is new to this, so please feel free to speak your mind. If you like it, please add it to your collection. Mwah...
When Gu Zhen was a child, he saved a girl.
"Hey, what's your name!?"
Before Gu Zhen could ask, he was framed by villains and killed.
By a strange coincidence, Miao girl Lan Hualou used a secret art to be reborn, all so she could learn the answer.
In her past life, people coveted her family's heirloom, bringing her to a tragic end.
Lan Hualou was saved by Gu Zhen and escaped disaster.
At long last, she learned his name,
only to watch him be murdered by villains.
Reborn once more,
the two save each other through a plague, become inseparable on the battlefield, and spend their days helping govern a court riddled with danger and their spare time dealing with corrupt officials...
"If I get another chance, I'll make sure you live in peace!"
"Benefactor... he's a treacherous minister," Lan Hualou said, pointing at someone.
"Then we'll get rid of him."
"Benefactor, he must have an ulterior motive for doing that," Lan Hualou said, carefully laying out her reasoning.
"Then we'll get rid of him."
"Benefactor, I think you're acting strange."
"Then we'll get rid of him."
Lan Hualou: ???
The dashing general Gu Zhen × the sweet young lady Hualou
A sweet story of mutual pining!!!!!!
Theme: Enjoying love
Confession, confession!! Ahhhhhhhhh
Confession, confession!! Ahhhhhhhhh
Come on↖(^ω^)↗
Suddenly I remembered that I didn't cast a good mine before, so I'm going to make one today. Come on, ma'am!
The writing is quite good~ If you have an outline, I don't recommend editing it.
My wife's writing is good, but after reading it as a whole, I have two suggestions. 1: The progress is a bit too fast, as if I just woke up from sleep, it is chaotic, and nothing is left in my mind. After I tied it, I felt like this. Looking back, I realized that I didn't remember any of the plot. Two: There are a bit too many dialogues, such as Chapter 1 and Chapter 15. There are too many dialogues, and it seems to me that there are only people talking and nothing else. It's like a dialogue novel, but the wife's other descriptions are also great... It just feels like there are too many dialogues, and those descriptions seem a bit redundant. But my wife's writing is great! I will continue to chase after I am mature enough. I hope my wife will make progress and work hard! The more you write, the better! This is my first long review. It only represents my personal advice. If you don't like it, please don't comment.
The author of Diamondback has begun to discuss literary reviews and collections with everyone. I hope the readers will not be polite, hiccup.
Madam, could you please write more slowly? The writing is pretty good and the story feels okay, but I always felt that the plot ran a bit too fast, and each plot point passed by in a flash. It always feels like you forced it to the end before you finished writing... I apologize if I offended you.