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I personally think that this book has a common problem in the author's creation: an inappropriate metaphor is that the CPU cannot keep up with the display screen. The idea is very good, the characters are unique, and the aesthetics are not affected by too many typical Internet writing routines, but the writing style and the ability to build a framework do not match the above, and it is not very good. To express this, in fact, my personal suggestion is that you can start by writing "vulgar" and "routine" stories, and then develop your ability to tell good stories before writing new stories. However, I am still very grateful to the author for his creation. I do get pleasure from reading [Spreading Flowers], and I hope the author has not given up writing [Cat's Claw]
In fact, I am looking forward to my thoughts on writing this book, but obviously the three shocks have a greater impact on the quality of the text.
I didn't see my thoughts after reading the article. I only saw the slightly messy mood under the sudden epidemic, and the impressive loose yolk eggs.
When I read this book, I felt that although the male and female protagonists didn't interact much, the overall simple daily life was quite attractive! It's great that my wife can reflect. It's definitely difficult to make progress so fast. Come on!
Actually, I think it looks pretty good, come on?