A Nine-Lifetime Journey to Repay My Debts

The character is childish and old-fashioned, the heroine is a surgeon and is good at martial arts and Sanda [rolls eyes]

Hee hee, I haven't read enough of the author's writing. The plot line is too thin and everything goes too smoothly. It develops too fast. I hope I can write better writing in the future.

Ah, here, the development of the emotional line is a bit inexplicable, and I can't get enough to like it.

So Bai Yinan is the right person who is hit by the arrow and the sword.

He treats a scumbag regardless of his property. Should such a person be merciful? Is it normal to leave the house after getting clean? Now that things are better, if he is still with the mistress, it is still a normal relationship.

I think the heroine's lies can be more reasonable, so that the plot development will not be so embarrassing.

So, love at first sight is nothing more than a lie and a careful calculation. It's just about falling in love with someone's beauty.

Ah ah ah, who did you follow in the end when you were going crazy?

The writing is okay, but the ending of the best is not written, which is a bit unsatisfactory.

So I kind of don't understand