After I Became the Sun

The emotional line is really... Hard to describe in one sentence... The key author is still very persistent and must write the emotional line... Can't we use our strengths and avoid our weaknesses?

Very good, the plot and characters are perfect. The emotional line is so-so

It obviously felt like there could be so many more, but now they are gone. I haven't seen enough of it, but it's very interesting. (?▽`???)

I'm curious about how to doi the prototype of a bird. How many organs does a bird have?

Did the protagonist soak in the golden pool that turned other giant crows into golden crows? From the description, it seemed that there were only ten golden crows in total, and then it was said that ten giant crows could be soaked in the pool. The protagonist should be one of the golden crows, and the protagonist should also evolve by soaking in that golden pool. But he talks about ten giant crows from time to time, and then he doesn't describe the protagonist's feelings and pain when drinking. I feel that this is a chance that the protagonist should drink. If the protagonist doesn't follow the evolution, wouldn't the protagonist disappear from the public? Just being one of the group, not the one with the highest talent, but there is no detailed description Alas

Well! There is no explanation at all about the Firewood Forest's neighbor, the Misty Forest, and various other wild ecosystems! Not even a person with a name like Yuan Shanying has appeared~

It's my second time. Just say a few words. I still like it.

Prototype? ! Wow, I always thought that the chicks of all birds are the same as chickens, but it turns out that's not the case →_→ Gained more knowledge

Although I quite like this style, I can see that the author will suddenly change the settings before and after, and finally create a big scene in order to finish quickly.

I felt like the process sped up a lot in the second half. I originally thought there would be a few extra chapters, but it ended in a bit of a rush.