[Douluo Dalu + Jian Wang 3] Take My Jade Stone

[A cringeworthy debut, free to read. If it's not your thing, click away. Writing for love is hard, so thank you.] [Read at your own risk! Read at your own risk! Read at your own risk!] [It's really not good!] Added 21.12.19: I can't believe people still don't see all the warnings. Congratulations to me for getting my first negative rating and a troll comment after two and a half years of writing, and on the free story I've spent the most time and written the most words for, too. I know this story is really bad. I admit it. Because of my own insecurity and readers' scolding, I've locked it twice already. I only came to my senses after a reader asked why I had locked it. There are so few Douluo stories to begin with. I shouldn't take away normal readers' right to read it, or our love for this subject. Leaving a bad review after buying something on Taobao is a buyer's right, but this story costs nothing, so there is no buyer-seller relationship here. Read it if you like it. If you don't, leave. Don't put yourself through more than a hundred chapters, then give me a negative rating, argue with me, and insult me. I have no obligation to let you abuse me. I write stories for readers. I never expect gratitude, but at the very least, don't eat my food and then slap the bowl in my face, giving me several hard smacks and making me feel like writing free stories is asking for abuse. Once again, a warning to all new readers: this story really isn't good. Don't read it. I won't lock it, just so the old readers can keep their memories of it. Added 22.6.29: I've received more personal attacks... I had no choice but to close the comments permanently. They can't be reopened, but I'll always be able to see the insults left there in my dashboard. This is the Nth time I've regretted writing this story. The last reader who insulted me also insulted many other Douluo fanfic writers. Although I've closed my comments, I beg readers who enjoy rarepair and niche stories to show some kindness. Don't leave bad reviews on other writers' stories, written for love. Earn yourself some good karma, and leave a little food for the vast majority of normal readers. I also hope that if you see someone leaving nasty comments on a free story's author, you'll comfort the author. It would make them feel better. Thank you! Theme: Patriotism (not really), immortality and death