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[Blurb]
Gui Jue taught Jingshu to read and cultivate. He concealed her identity and made a grave mistake for her, then atoned for it by being cast into the Abyss.
She had calculated everything, but never expected Jingshu to fall in love with her.
Jingshu was a demon saved by Gui Jue, and her identity was kept secret. Looking up at the lofty Divine Lord, she yearned for her and developed a desire she should never have had.
In the end, when the truth of the past came to light, she became an immortal, only to go straight into the demonic path, all for her Divine Lord.
She stormed the Nine Heavens and trampled the Celestial Court, all for her Divine Lord.
*All right, I've given up on writing blurbs. No matter how I write this thing, it feels wrong...
*Read it if you like. There are plenty of original worldbuilding elements, so please don't flame me if it's not your thing. Thank you.
Premise: Humans, demons, gods, and devils should all be equal. All things follow the cycle of cause and effect.
I always feel like you haven't finished writing yet. Do you want to update it again? ??????
The author's writing itself is indeed very good, and there is basically nothing to fault. But the plot still needs to be improved, and there is great potential if you write more! In addition, I think the "abuse" of this article is more of the abuse of the plot setting, but not the emotional abuse of some articles. In other words, the emotional and psychological descriptions between the characters are a bit thin.
Author, I have agreed with him. Woo woo woo
Haha, a thousand years of imprisonment were not in vain
The author should stop writing...
Does that mean Xiang Liu will become extinct because he is in love with a female phoenix?
You really have to work hard. I thought this article didn't have 200 chapters and I couldn't finish it. Then I accidentally looked at the total number of chapters and it was only 70+. I felt that things were a bit suspense, so I skipped it and read the ending. As expected, my friend, you have abandoned the article again, but it doesn't matter. Keep going. Writing articles also needs to be carefully crafted, KeepRunning!
The writing is pretty good, but the ending is a little rushed.
Isn't it he? Why is it gone?
I always feel like you haven't finished writing yet. Do you want to update it again? ??????
The author's writing itself is indeed very good, and there is basically nothing to fault. But the plot still needs to be improved, and there is great potential if you write more! In addition, I think the "abuse" of this article is more of the abuse of the plot setting, but not the emotional abuse of some articles. In other words, the emotional and psychological descriptions between the characters are a bit thin.
Author, I have agreed with him. Woo woo woo
Haha, a thousand years of imprisonment were not in vain
The author should stop writing...
Does that mean Xiang Liu will become extinct because he is in love with a female phoenix?
You really have to work hard. I thought this article didn't have 200 chapters and I couldn't finish it. Then I accidentally looked at the total number of chapters and it was only 70+. I felt that things were a bit suspense, so I skipped it and read the ending. As expected, my friend, you have abandoned the article again, but it doesn't matter. Keep going. Writing articles also needs to be carefully crafted, KeepRunning!
The writing is pretty good, but the ending is a little rushed.
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