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This is the author's very first book, so it has some potentially upsetting tropes and melodrama. If you don't like it, please don't flame me! To put it simply, this is a story about one person chasing and the other running away. The author has the whole story written in advance, but will update once a day. If you'd like an extra update, leave a comment. The author will add one when they see it, depending entirely on what readers want! Thank you! Four chapters on publication day, then one chapter the following day.
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Why do I feel like I have an ominous premonition from the beginning?
After chasing Jinjiang from Baidu, I think this is the best article I have read recently, because sometimes loving someone is really more paranoid than imagined. It can be seen how much Xu Wannan loves her. It's a very nice ending, although it's not the ending I wanted, but it's very good and I like it very much. I would like to ask if I can follow the author on Weibo?
I think they are so miserable, even in real life they are not as miserable. Obviously... We love each other so much, but... (If there is any rebuttal, please be careful, I will cry) Thank you again, and feel free to ask the author when he will update again (looking forward to it)
Thank you to the author for the extra story.
Author, you are throwing us readers into the sky first and then falling down!
The author is probably a dark person, right? Oh My God
I turned to this side to watch the mess and watched it for several hours. I haven't seen a novel like this in several years, which is very heartbreaking.
So pretty! Thank you to the author for the HE version!
This story is so sad. The author would be very grateful to reduce the swearing, and it would be fine to develop the characters a little bit, but it would not be good if there were too many. Putting aside the somewhat morbid relationship between the two, Xu's choice in the end was too extreme, using poison to induce hallucinations. She might as well just write to death while walking in the land. I don't think she would choose to live for another two months before dying. Because I love you too much, it is impossible to let Lu go alone. Wang Zailu came only a month after Lu's death, and there are some problems here. It doesn't fit the character's personality, and it's very chaotic. Xu lives too carefully, is too tired, makes every compromise, has no temper except for being jealous, and feels that the character is not three-dimensional enough. Please write in the third person from now on. Author, your writing is actually good, but sometimes love and love are not just words. I wonder if you have noticed that your protagonists have been saying how much they love each other and how many things they will do for each other, but in the end these acts of love have turned into make love. It's good to write something, but it's just to sublimate feelings or meet the needs of the audience. I think the relationship between the two depends on details, verbal communication, and plot advancement. Looking at the copy, it seems that the author has just started writing novels. I am looking forward to your future works. The above suggestions are purely personal opinions.
Cough cough cough, getting old, getting old
Why do I feel like I have an ominous premonition from the beginning?
After chasing Jinjiang from Baidu, I think this is the best article I have read recently, because sometimes loving someone is really more paranoid than imagined. It can be seen how much Xu Wannan loves her. It's a very nice ending, although it's not the ending I wanted, but it's very good and I like it very much. I would like to ask if I can follow the author on Weibo?
I think they are so miserable, even in real life they are not as miserable. Obviously... We love each other so much, but... (If there is any rebuttal, please be careful, I will cry) Thank you again, and feel free to ask the author when he will update again (looking forward to it)
Thank you to the author for the extra story.
Author, you are throwing us readers into the sky first and then falling down!
The author is probably a dark person, right? Oh My God
I turned to this side to watch the mess and watched it for several hours. I haven't seen a novel like this in several years, which is very heartbreaking.
So pretty! Thank you to the author for the HE version!
This story is so sad. The author would be very grateful to reduce the swearing, and it would be fine to develop the characters a little bit, but it would not be good if there were too many. Putting aside the somewhat morbid relationship between the two, Xu's choice in the end was too extreme, using poison to induce hallucinations. She might as well just write to death while walking in the land. I don't think she would choose to live for another two months before dying. Because I love you too much, it is impossible to let Lu go alone. Wang Zailu came only a month after Lu's death, and there are some problems here. It doesn't fit the character's personality, and it's very chaotic. Xu lives too carefully, is too tired, makes every compromise, has no temper except for being jealous, and feels that the character is not three-dimensional enough. Please write in the third person from now on. Author, your writing is actually good, but sometimes love and love are not just words. I wonder if you have noticed that your protagonists have been saying how much they love each other and how many things they will do for each other, but in the end these acts of love have turned into make love. It's good to write something, but it's just to sublimate feelings or meet the needs of the audience. I think the relationship between the two depends on details, verbal communication, and plot advancement. Looking at the copy, it seems that the author has just started writing novels. I am looking forward to your future works. The above suggestions are purely personal opinions.