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Having to go to another world every night at midnight, Lin Zhaoyu nearly thought she was a delivery courier.
After all that trouble, she explored, opened a shop, earned gold coins, and learned superpowers.
So she really was a delivery courier after all?
Luckily, she stuck with it, and in the end, the delivery was still made to her own hands.
Only then did she remember: it was a gift from her childhood.
Theme: Personal growth
Wow, that's good. Just have more.
I'm so confused whether to keep one down or not to pull up. I can't help but turn back as I look at it.
A masterpiece covered in dust. I also came in from the author's column - I just finished reading the latest update of the comprehensive comic. The collection of 58 and the word count of 200,000 almost persuaded me to quit, but the sincere comments below the article aroused my curiosity. It took me a short time to finish the entire article, and I am really glad for my decision. Next, I want to express the emotions that arise spontaneously while reading the article, and I also hope that the next reader who accidentally clicks in will click in and take a look. This is really a very rare masterpiece. Compared with a fast-food online article, this story is more like an adventure story I picked up in a bookstore in middle and high school. Compared with an online article that is set in a plot-supplemented style, this is really a fantasy masterpiece composed of a storyline and a tight rhythm. It does not spread out in a grand world view, but allows a glimpse of the turbulent waves from a separate perspective. It's really been a long time since I've felt this kind of story climax/climax that makes me want to stop reading, except for those fantasy story collections I used to secretly read in class. ——This is not a simple online novel, it is an epic adventure, a record of gems blooming in the polishing process, a beautiful dream composed of huge and interesting fantasies, and a great symphony of courage and friendship singing together. Maybe it's a bit overrated, but stories like this are so rare, and I really hate that I lack the vocabulary to fully convey my feelings. Let's talk about the heroine first. She didn't have a complete character at the beginning. Since I don't want to spoil the story in this review, I really want to praise the author's characterization for my good points. Her growth and highlights along the way have not obscured the completely different and outstanding characteristics of her friends from another world. The few characters have created a simple but complex network of relationships with distinct positions and constantly changing according to human nature. The most difficult thing is The good thing is that the heroine's friends have different but very reasonable personalities during and after the crisis. The brilliance of the main characters is not overshadowed by the heroine but shines together with her. The last few common characters are all very fleshed out and interesting, especially Otillet and Alvin. These two are really different characters without being offensive (although the little prince is very annoying at first x) The sense of separation between the other world and the present world is particularly obvious (this is also very reasonable), but there is a subtle intersection in the later period. The absurd encounters of the heroine made her existence feel disconnected from reality for a time - these all disappeared after her "return". After being polished, she is not completely different, but amplifies the advantages of the past and becomes a better self. This article is also very rare in that the "time travel" is not fixed on the heroine alone and makes her a lonely secret keeper, but radiates to her related people. But thank the author for not describing in detail those annoying real-life troubles. An adventure story does not need to have too many conspiracies. Courage and virtue are enough to cope with everything. Let fantasy exist in fantasy. This is the best story. However, there are a few non-relevant people in reality - such as Ling Ning, the male protagonist (maybe not included)... In fact, I don't quite understand it. I will think about it after the second brush (fuck my forehead). But I would like to sincerely thank the author for bringing such a rhythmic and concise novel to the readers. After struggling to reach the completion among dozens of readers, I sincerely admire your persistence. At least I really couldn't do it. Thank you, and thank you to the other angels who commented, otherwise I might really have missed this magnificent adventure epic.
I found this article through Custom Taobao, it's very well written!! Personally, I feel that this novel is more novel, fluent, and has clear characters than many of the articles on the rankings. Of course, the logic is not clear in many places, but the flaws are not hidden. I look forward to other articles~
It's over, let's scatter some flowers first~ This is a very special article. First of all, the adventure plot is very exciting. Several "attractions" are very interesting, especially the settings of the Island of the Dead and the Flame Desert, which have a bit of a puzzle feel, which is very enjoyable to watch. Although there are shortcomings in pacing, these have been mentioned before, so I won't go into details here. The Island of the Dead is probably written in the most detail because it is the starting point, and because the protagonist knows nothing about the details of the time travel, the process of solving the puzzle is particularly exciting. Of course, it may also be because I am a strange person who feels happy. I would be bored if the protagonist is too exciting. Like solving puzzles, the protagonist needs to take certain risks and unknown processes to poke my excitement. Secondly, the plot really has its ups and downs - it's not the Shuangwen-style fake plot where you'll be slapped in the face if something goes wrong in the previous chapter, but it actually allows the protagonist to endure blows and encounter dangers (although it's not life-threatening, it's quite tense). The ending is even more exciting - not the kind of "wonderful" Long Aotian style where the old enemy is wiped out with one punch and the world is destroyed, but it really allows the protagonist to experience growth, making her a better person, and leaving the reader - me - with some sighs. At this point, I have to talk about the characters in this article. In fact, I have been thinking for a long time about where to start. The adventure plot is indeed very interesting and novel, and there are no clichés. But what I want to talk about most is the characters. The characters in this article are really special. Alvin, who has a dark and disgusting psychology, has gone through a process from hating the world to admitting that he is extreme. The realistic version of tsundere is not lovable, it is really annoying, but it is quite real. Otillet's growth is not particularly obvious (and her revenge line seems not to be written?), But she is a likeable and good girl from beginning to end, and she does not need Alvin's level of growth. Her friendship with the protagonist also goes beyond most of the "best friend" characters I've seen. And the little aunt—even though she's an elder, she's also the protagonist's best friend, right? I envy the protagonist for having so many good friends. The point is that these two best friends are not the kind of superficial plastic cannon fodder best friends who "go shopping together and gossip together", "sacrifice the gods before the end of the world", or "get caught having sex with the heroine's boyfriend", but a realistic, normal, ordinary friendship that does not contain any surreal and absurd elements. This is quite rare. The growth of the protagonist in the final ending is what I think is the most eye-catching aspect. No matter how powerful the golden finger is, you still have to rely on your own efforts to reach the top. Isn't Arthur strong? He is incredibly strong. If he practices martial arts diligently, even if Alto gains the power to rejuvenate, he may not be able to beat him. But then again, if Arthur was the kind of person who studied hard and practiced hard, he wouldn't be such a psychotic giant baby. The protagonist relied on the divine fruit to strengthen her body, but because it was too easy, she quickly became immersed in the thrill of adventure and the aura of immortality. Although she was very interested in martial arts, she also studied the secret book carefully, and worked hard in the plot, but in the end she was involved in a series of adventures and was overwhelmed by events, and did not get much room for exercise and growth. This ending may not be liked by everyone (especially readers who like to read cool stories), but I think this is the most perfect ending. I have been reading online articles for many years, and the endings can be roughly divided into several categories: 1. The protagonist uses the Long Aotian template to upgrade like crazy. In the last seconds, no one can stop him, and he becomes a legend with the CP(s). 2. The male protagonist and the female protagonist get married and have children. 3. The goal of the full text was achieved (build the city/bring down XXX/KO the villain/resolve the crisis), and everyone started a peaceful (boring) life. 1 Is the worst ending. In fact, there is no ending, but the author got tired of writing and wanted to change the story to make money, so he let the protagonist go into seclusion. 2 Is the normal ending, but it only applies to love stories. 3 Is the normal ending and applies to all stories. And this article is 4. The main story has come to an end. The villain was KO, leaving irreparable regrets. Everyone swallowed their sadness and unwillingness and returned to a peaceful life. But as soon as the picture changes, the twists and turns take a turn, and the imaginative upgrade adventure seems to have just begun. I may have a lot of complaints about the previous plot (mainly because the adventure plot is too fast-forwarded, and it is gone before it is enough), but the satisfaction brought by the ending immediately makes up for the previous shortcomings. Anyway, come on.
I didn't expect that my previous complaint would turn into a long comment... I'm a little embarrassed Well, I can already smell the ending. To be honest, except for the plan, which is a bit unclear, this section is generally very exciting, and the psychological changes of the heroine are also very interesting. I'll wait until the last chapter to give you a long review.
It feels like the world is in desperate need of psychiatrists, especially these royal families. Look at what they've been forced into.
I didn't understand it very well... It was said at the beginning that it was to deal with Arthur, but before the plan to deal with Arthur was clearly explained, why did the topic shift to something that requires the heroine to sacrifice her power? What does the heroine's loss of power have to do with their fight against Arthur? Didn't she play into Arthur's hands by handing over her power? Prussia did not explain why only Alto and the heroine can deal with Arthur (both of them can't beat Arthur together, so there must be some plan here), nor why the heroine must give her power to the ring, nor how they plan to deal with Arthur. It feels like the whole plan is still unclear, and it suddenly becomes inevitable for the heroine to sacrifice herself to save the world. The jump in this topic makes me a little confused. I think the heroine should at least ask a few questions to figure out the entire plan to kill Arthur and why she has to give her strength, and then start making difficult choices. Since you have to sacrifice, you must at least know why this sacrifice is necessary, right? If the heroine makes a deal with Arthur to save Alto, and dealing with Arthur requires the heroine + Otto, so Otto must be rescued to deal with Arthur, but after the heroine loses her power, she can't do anything. Even whether she will stay in another world or return to her hometown is still unknown. After saving Alto, without the heroine, the condition of heroine + Otto still cannot be achieved. If it wasn't to save Alto... Then why on earth would he give his power to Arthur? To paralyze him? Set a trap for him? So how should this trap be designed? What will the teammates do after the heroine paralyzes Arthur with her power? Can these actions effectively restrain Arthur? Is it possible for Arthur to be restricted? If he has a weakness, and his teammates think that Alto and the heroine have the ability to control him based on this weakness, what is this weakness? Why do you say that the heroine is the only one who can deal with Arthur, but at the same time ask her to hand over her power? What is the necessary connection between the heroine being able to deal with Arthur and the strength the heroine must exert? I think it's better to explain these things clearly. Now really, the situation is still confusing, and the heroine goes home confused and confused. I can understand the difficulty of the choices she faces, but I feel like the emotional foreshadowing needs to be strengthened. And how should I put it, I think as a person who doesn't want to lose his power, when he learned that he would lose even his physical enhancement during the trade with Arthur, his first reaction would definitely not be "I have to make a huge sacrifice, I'm so desperate", but should be "No, it's fake." "Okay, it's true, so I have to stay away from that ring. Is there any other way to solve the problem?" It wasn't until her teammates pointed out that "our plan that is impossible to avoid is ABCD... You must first hand over your strength before we can implement it", then the heroine was greatly shocked. Because if it were me, I would definitely first ask what these people planned, study how feasible their plan was, and whether my sacrifice was necessary and avoidable. If my sacrifice is unavoidable in this plan, is there any other way to solve the problem? I will never immediately accept the choice of self-sacrifice without knowing all the facts. After all, it requires me to give up something I value very much. Then I must ask clearly and make sure that this matter is inevitable before taking the sacrifice into consideration (and then it is not too late to get entangled).
I really want to know when the heroine shed blood, but I am too lazy to read the previous chapter chapter by chapter.
As the old saying goes, luck is also part of strength.