I Opened an Entertainment Company in Ancient Times

Book it all, let me share my humble opinion. The beginning is interesting, but then it ends badly. It would be better to have no emotional line at all, little description, and the final rush to express your feelings is just to hasten the ending. There are still some miscellaneous things, but anyway, all the shortcomings can be attributed to the author's bad writing. The next ten chapters are basically updated every three months. It's really hard work not to understand v.

Yes, I was pleasantly surprised to find that the pit was filled. I thought the same as the readers above. I decided that the setting at the beginning was good, but the rest was too hasty. It could have been a long and good article, but it ended in a hurry. But even so, I still like this article very much. This ending, please have more extra chapters!

In the early reading process, there was something that made me feel inconsistent, that is, the thoughts and behaviors of some characters are obviously the model of modern socialism. But how to put it, it is regarded as a relaxing farming article or a refreshing article, and this article is a fiction, this is still tolerable. If it were written according to the author's normal standards, I would give it five stars. However, there were several times in the middle and later stages where the writing method of the progress bar was forced. I remember in an early article, the author said that he planned to write slowly because he felt that forced acceleration would affect the quality of the article, but apparently the author later decided to force it. Especially the last chapter, it's like a running account. I wish I could fill a hundred chapters in one chapter. It's a pity that the good plot is not detailed. Although the author marked the finale, he did not click on the ending. I don't know if he plans to add extra chapters or for some other reason. But when it is completed and can be rated in the future, I am afraid that I will forget the content of the book, so I will write it in the review to remind myself, and remember to give four stars when the time comes.

Great, it would be better if it were longer

Why don't you start the article by writing about the country's subsequent infrastructure construction? I really want to see the follow-up.

Is this the end? Why do I feel like this extra chapter is not finished yet...

The two emotional developments in this chapter are a little abrupt. It's not that the plot is bad, but if it were written slower and more detailed, the story would be more believable. There were a few chapters like this before. They had no actual plot, dialogue, or action, and relied purely on the character's inner monologue to promote development. This didn't give people a very good impression, like a slightly more detailed outline, rather than a novel with a complete plot. Maybe the author is in a bad state and is in a hurry to finish it. It's a pity. If some content is well written, it still has merit.

I discovered by chance that the pit had been leveled, and I was pleasantly surprised.

It's so pretty, it would be even better if it was longer

Oh my God, look what I found! The author actually filled this hole! Moved to tears