[Main story and bonus chapters complete]
After waking up, Xie Li finds himself in a game world as an NPC, tasked with winning over the three male leads of a shojo manga.
His cold, sharp-tongued boss is an upperclassman who once dumped him: "Even if I broke up with you before, you don't have to pretend you don't know me, do you?"
Xie Li: "...?!"
The popular, handsome manga artist is his number one fan. He gazes at Xie Li with deep affection. "Everything I've done was to make you mine."
Xie Li: "...You're too kind."
His junior, a puppy-like guy, fumes with rage. Gritting his teeth, he says, "Don't talk to anyone else! It makes me unhappy!"
Xie Li: "...You're asking the impossible."
System: I put together a love package for you with all the sweet, sour, bitter, and spicy flavors. Moved?
Xie Li: Moved... I wouldn't dare move.
Devoted big boss gong x mysterious NPC shou
Infinite-flow, one-on-one romance. There's only one gong~
Theme:
It's a pity that John's crimes cannot be made public and all the information can only be lost. In the eyes of the world, John is still the successful person in charge of TNT.
Hmm... I actually read this chapter a day ago, and I wanted to comment on it, but I didn't. After thinking about it for a long time, I think I still want to say something. I personally feel that this chapter is not very well written. Maybe the wife just wanted to write a story about childhood sweethearts, but now that Xie Li is only six years old, it is not good to arrange the 14-year-old Shen Dongxin. I read it from my wife's new article. The data in the Alien article is very good, and my wife's writing style is also very good. One day my wife will become famous. However, there are many people who are famous for right and wrong, and there may be some people who are looking for trouble to amplify this plot infinitely, eventually causing bad public opinion. So I suggested to my wife that it is best to revise this plot. Of course, these are all my own thoughts. If my wife thinks it's unnecessary, just pretend I didn't say anything.
Ah, the first few worlds were well written, but the ending felt a bit unfinished.
This is a somewhat novel article, but you can still feel that it was written a few years ago. The style of the protagonist setting and some plot settings are different from now. I feel that the previous articles were more daring to write. For example, the final world is a ridiculous stand-in of mistaken identity, and the setting is suspected of emotional disorder? (I don't know what love is) or non-c ("Although you are a big boss, you can't be c" is a lightning protection point for many people nowadays. Maybe it's because the readers of Danmeiwen are of a younger age??) There are also the following extras, in which Gong doesn't talk about his admiration to the recipient in advance, nor does he talk about proposing marriage. I was so stunned that after being hurt and sad, I realized that 'it turns out that the marriage partner is me', 'it turns out that I like him, and he also likes me'... This kind of plot is really insensitive to me, and it is very frustrating to watch the plot of not opening my mouth. And in the end, the villain John ended up so hastily. The protagonist's anger was blocked by this ending before he could get over it. It made people choke [melt] [melt]. Overall, there are still some minor flaws. The flow of the plot is quite good, but the world view is not very in-depth. After looking at several small worlds, it feels like it is missing something although it is quite smooth to watch. Maybe it's because the plot logic wasn't very well described, but it always felt like it was a bit unfinished in the end (
Hiss, it's very strange. The setting is very novel, but it is not well developed. Some themes are a bit... Nonsensical, and the logic is still flawed (can I say this?)
Xiao Shen didn't propose at all!
Remember what Xiao Xie said before, he is used to waiting
Super cool, especially the extras haha
Wow, it's so beautifully written! Keep up the good work
The ending is a bit unpleasant...