+++BG romance! Complete, happy ending! Extra chapters and revisions in progress.+++
After Luo Fu dies unexpectedly, she transmigrates into a high-magic Western fantasy leveling novel with a powerful female protagonist, one she read in her previous life.
She's the heroine's older half-sister, a princess who doesn't appear until the heroine turns eighteen. The king dotes on her, and she is wary of and hostile toward the heroine, who grew up away from home. Resentful that her sister is taking their father's attention away from her, she makes several attempts on the heroine's life. In the end, her schemes are exposed, she is disgraced, and she dies horribly after blowing herself up in captivity.
The good news is that Luo Fu is still a baby. There are plenty of ways she can avoid the fate laid out for her in the novel. The heroine won't appear for twenty years, so even if Luo Fu simply decides to run away, she has time to wait until she's an adult.
The bad news is... since she doesn't appear until twenty years later, the novel offers not a single detail about Grand Princess Luo Fulida's childhood. She has no clues to compare the book's events with the reality she is experiencing.
Luo Fu, who was merely a frail, ordinary girl in her previous life, faces the oppressive atmosphere of the palace, an absurd father who's an absolute jackass, a parade of strangers whose identities she can't keep straight, and a future whose process is unknown even though its ending is certain. Behind her forced smile, she feels a little suffocated.
Even so, she decides to live with a smile. Even if her fate has already been written, doesn't personal effort still count for something?
But...
As time goes by, Luo Fu gradually begins to feel that something is wrong.
...Did these people really appear in Princess Luo Fulida's childhood in the novel? The person who came to my side when I was little and taught me: if he won't abandon me, does that mean he'll die in the future?
...The true gods of this world can see through the future and causality... Do they really know nothing about the transmigrator? If they do, is this still a novel?
...What exactly is the ending written into the original novel?
...Is it really just an ordinary prophecy, something that can be broken and is waiting for someone to break it?
...If not... then what exactly is it?
Many years later, Luo Fu stands at the deepest point of fate's vortex and looks up toward the place she came from. So many people have tried to help her, yet here she stands. Only now does she truly feel the terror of what it means to have a predestined fate.
"I don't know whether I should be grateful that I didn't make this journey alone." She speaks to the young man who has been at her side since childhood. "You said someone can always escape the vortex of fate. I wish so much that this time, it could be me."
The boy, now a young man, lowers his head beside her and gently touches his forehead to hers.
"I held on to you," he tells her, their hands clasped tightly beneath his mage's robe. "Believe in yourself. I'll be with you until the very end."
+++++++++++Complete! Happy ending! Revisions and extra chapters in progress!+++++++++++
Content warnings and notes:
1. The female lead is an ordinary, kind person with strong moral principles and a clear sense of right and wrong. She is reasonable and intelligent, and won't turn evil. Because she's a good person, she cries quite a bit early on.
2. A long, serious epic, with a few side plots and supporting-character scenes in the middle and later parts. The romance develops slowly: the male lead appears around chapter ten, and they reunite two hundred chapters later. No cruel, disgusting plot twists. The story is complete.
3. The female lead can't overwhelm other characters with her combat ability or intelligence, and her cheat abilities are limited. At four years old, she can't leave her father and live on her own. At twenty, she can't outplay a four-thousand-year-old big shot. The indigenous people of a modern, magical civilization won't worship glassmaking and soapmaking as miraculous inventions. The development of social ideology has to account for the limits of productive forces and the actual social conditions of a magical world.
4. The male lead is a big shot, but is frail early on. There is no supreme god. The world has a multiethnic population, several gods, and an enlightened system of shared governance. The setting isn't orthodox, and some ethnic cultures aren't Western fantasy. The author has eaten the half of her brain that was pretending to know sociology.
Theme: Even in a high-magic world, we must build a harmonious society and do our part to help civilization develop peacefully!
Oh, I really hate Chester
(All the following are subjective comments)
The heroine is positioned as living in a very beautiful, harmonious and happy family and society in her previous life. Although her father is unreliable in this life, the people around her are reliable (Laila, Aita and the subsequent supporting characters A, B, B and D), and her living conditions are superior (the royal princess). Therefore, the keywords of the heroine created are: # ordinary little girl #, #cutekind#, # cheerful sunshine #, #MENTAL AGE is too young #, #brave#, # Virgin#. It is precisely because of these qualities that she was able to fulfill the condition and resurrect Xiang Yu after breaking free from the web of fate.
In my opinion, Annie (the half-sister of the heroine) is actually closer to ordinary people. Because she grew up at the bottom, she was not taken seriously by her father when she came back, so she has a lower vision and is easily deceived; after she discovers the plot of the original novel written by the heroine, she will be angry and be deceived by others. She was deceived by lies and selectively forgot the love the heroine once had for her. After making mistakes again and again, she was unwilling to stop her mistakes for various reasons. She would rather bite the bullet and go on and lose-lose. However, when she found that the heroine was so desperate that she committed suicide, she was able to regret her mistakes. In fact, this is the performance of an ordinary girl. She cannot distinguish right from wrong, and she cannot be cruel. Her consequences - deprivation of inheritance rights, actually I think it is acceptable. The only thing that is not acceptable is that she later went out to travel and found a man to marry and have children. She lived a very happy life. It seemed that she had hardly experienced any setbacks. Emmm, I thought society would give her another beating. What a pity.
But I hate Chester! It's because, on the one hand, Chester's performance was really, really bad. I found that the kind of people who have lost their beloved wives have either a very bad attitude towards the children left behind by their wives, treating their daughters as if they were nothing, which is normal practice, or they have a very pampering attitude, which is rarely normal. Although the heroine has grown up quite well with such an unreliable father, to borrow a sentence I have seen before, "We cannot infer behavioral motives from a consequential theory." In the end, the heroine is still the kind, lovely and brave little girl in her previous life. Those were her parents in her previous life and the foundation given to her by modern society. If the heroine has no memory of her past life, can the heroine escape the fate in the real projection with an education model like Chester's? I find it difficult.
So although Chester finally changed from a fool to a severe arrogant under the persuasion of various legendary gods, he is still a fool. Reading through the text, I couldn't sense between the lines his apology for his previous indifference to the heroine. On the contrary, the heroine, from beginning to end, had expectations for him (although she repeatedly told herself not to expect Chester to be a human being, the fact is that the heroine has always had this expectation). At first, she was too young and had no strength, so she had to pretend to be a good girl to coax him. Later, the relationship between father and daughter eased, and she became closer to her biological father. Later, her biological father fell into a dream and could not wake up, so she had to shoulder the burden of Hui Yao. Even though she called him a stinky pig, she still hoped that he would wake up. In the end, Chester finally became a man, and the heroine no longer hated him.
Maybe it's because as a reader, my own father is also a fool, so I can easily relate to this kind of father, and I am particularly angry with this kind of fool. Moreover, Chester basically did not suffer from the father-daughter relationship. Instead, the heroine has been cautious. At first, she thought that she had replaced the original Love, and she was particularly scared. The heroine really loves him, and this fucking makes me so angry!
Ps: In fact, compared to Love, I really like Xiang Yu as portrayed by the author. Although her appearance is far less than that of the heroine, she is really super charming!
The perfect drama about the high-magic world! The world view is complete and grand, the logic is clear, and the story of destiny is also thrilling and makes people feel numb. It took me a few days to read them all. It's so perfect. I hold a banner for the teacher!
I'm going to draw the same person, Yongai (pen refill)
It's good, no children, living in a world of two
"Your efficiency is too slow. Ha Yi and I were together for hundreds of years, and we were already engaged. How could anyone be so ink like you?"
Here, I want to mock Bai for Augustus. Xiangcai and Fufu got married after knowing each other for more than ten years.
It reminds me of my despair when I was doing homework when I was a child and thinking about my mother coming to save me. However, my father extended the time and didn't finish the homework and couldn't see my mother. Hhhhhh
By the way, will this book be published? I really like the thick physical version [Sahua], whether it is published or not, I will read it a hundred million times!
It's super beautiful. I really like the grand and beautiful world view and values in your works, and your explanation of the inheritance of civilization. (I have never been able to read Western fantasy novels before, but this work is definitely one of the top three among all types of novels I have read. I love it so much hahahahaha)
I read it again after almost a year, and I still think it's good. Every time I read it, I hope that I can continue writing this novel, and write about Xiang Yu and their previous stories, about Love and Zi Wu, and about the daily life of parents getting along with each other. I really like it
The ending of "Sa Hua Hua [Star Eyes"] is so good, wow, wow. At first, I thought that the heroine would be very strong as the heir in the future, haha. I didn't expect it to be like this. Although Love doesn't have the ability to confront evil forces, she is actually very good. Like most people, she is warm and kind. She is afraid of death and loss, but she can develop the courage to make a desperate move in desperate situations and live towards death.
Oh, I really hate Chester (All the following are subjective comments) The heroine is positioned as living in a very beautiful, harmonious and happy family and society in her previous life. Although her father is unreliable in this life, the people around her are reliable (Laila, Aita and the subsequent supporting characters A, B, B and D), and her living conditions are superior (the royal princess). Therefore, the keywords of the heroine created are: # ordinary little girl #, #cutekind#, # cheerful sunshine #, #MENTAL AGE is too young #, #brave#, # Virgin#. It is precisely because of these qualities that she was able to fulfill the condition and resurrect Xiang Yu after breaking free from the web of fate. In my opinion, Annie (the half-sister of the heroine) is actually closer to ordinary people. Because she grew up at the bottom, she was not taken seriously by her father when she came back, so she has a lower vision and is easily deceived; after she discovers the plot of the original novel written by the heroine, she will be angry and be deceived by others. She was deceived by lies and selectively forgot the love the heroine once had for her. After making mistakes again and again, she was unwilling to stop her mistakes for various reasons. She would rather bite the bullet and go on and lose-lose. However, when she found that the heroine was so desperate that she committed suicide, she was able to regret her mistakes. In fact, this is the performance of an ordinary girl. She cannot distinguish right from wrong, and she cannot be cruel. Her consequences - deprivation of inheritance rights, actually I think it is acceptable. The only thing that is not acceptable is that she later went out to travel and found a man to marry and have children. She lived a very happy life. It seemed that she had hardly experienced any setbacks. Emmm, I thought society would give her another beating. What a pity. But I hate Chester! It's because, on the one hand, Chester's performance was really, really bad. I found that the kind of people who have lost their beloved wives have either a very bad attitude towards the children left behind by their wives, treating their daughters as if they were nothing, which is normal practice, or they have a very pampering attitude, which is rarely normal. Although the heroine has grown up quite well with such an unreliable father, to borrow a sentence I have seen before, "We cannot infer behavioral motives from a consequential theory." In the end, the heroine is still the kind, lovely and brave little girl in her previous life. Those were her parents in her previous life and the foundation given to her by modern society. If the heroine has no memory of her past life, can the heroine escape the fate in the real projection with an education model like Chester's? I find it difficult. So although Chester finally changed from a fool to a severe arrogant under the persuasion of various legendary gods, he is still a fool. Reading through the text, I couldn't sense between the lines his apology for his previous indifference to the heroine. On the contrary, the heroine, from beginning to end, had expectations for him (although she repeatedly told herself not to expect Chester to be a human being, the fact is that the heroine has always had this expectation). At first, she was too young and had no strength, so she had to pretend to be a good girl to coax him. Later, the relationship between father and daughter eased, and she became closer to her biological father. Later, her biological father fell into a dream and could not wake up, so she had to shoulder the burden of Hui Yao. Even though she called him a stinky pig, she still hoped that he would wake up. In the end, Chester finally became a man, and the heroine no longer hated him. Maybe it's because as a reader, my own father is also a fool, so I can easily relate to this kind of father, and I am particularly angry with this kind of fool. Moreover, Chester basically did not suffer from the father-daughter relationship. Instead, the heroine has been cautious. At first, she thought that she had replaced the original Love, and she was particularly scared. The heroine really loves him, and this fucking makes me so angry! Ps: In fact, compared to Love, I really like Xiang Yu as portrayed by the author. Although her appearance is far less than that of the heroine, she is really super charming!
The perfect drama about the high-magic world! The world view is complete and grand, the logic is clear, and the story of destiny is also thrilling and makes people feel numb. It took me a few days to read them all. It's so perfect. I hold a banner for the teacher!
I'm going to draw the same person, Yongai (pen refill)
It's good, no children, living in a world of two
"Your efficiency is too slow. Ha Yi and I were together for hundreds of years, and we were already engaged. How could anyone be so ink like you?" Here, I want to mock Bai for Augustus. Xiangcai and Fufu got married after knowing each other for more than ten years.
It reminds me of my despair when I was doing homework when I was a child and thinking about my mother coming to save me. However, my father extended the time and didn't finish the homework and couldn't see my mother. Hhhhhh
By the way, will this book be published? I really like the thick physical version [Sahua], whether it is published or not, I will read it a hundred million times!
It's super beautiful. I really like the grand and beautiful world view and values in your works, and your explanation of the inheritance of civilization. (I have never been able to read Western fantasy novels before, but this work is definitely one of the top three among all types of novels I have read. I love it so much hahahahaha)
I read it again after almost a year, and I still think it's good. Every time I read it, I hope that I can continue writing this novel, and write about Xiang Yu and their previous stories, about Love and Zi Wu, and about the daily life of parents getting along with each other. I really like it
The ending of "Sa Hua Hua [Star Eyes"] is so good, wow, wow. At first, I thought that the heroine would be very strong as the heir in the future, haha. I didn't expect it to be like this. Although Love doesn't have the ability to confront evil forces, she is actually very good. Like most people, she is warm and kind. She is afraid of death and loss, but she can develop the courage to make a desperate move in desperate situations and live towards death.