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Blurb:
Xue Ming, daughter of the military governor of Fanyang, was as beautiful as a flower, pure and sincere. Anyone who saw her was instantly captivated.
With her fame spreading far and wide, many noble young men in Chang'an set their sights on traveling to Youzhou to catch a glimpse of her.
But the military governor treasured his daughter so dearly that all those young noblemen returned disappointed.
Then an imperial marriage decree arrived.
No matter how much the military governor cherished his daughter, he could not defy the emperor's decree.
But who could have guessed that on the first night after Xue Ming's wedding, her husband would set off for the frontier with his men?
Xue Ming: "..."
Li Chongzhou was moody and gloomy, and no one in his household could control him. What he never expected was to become a political bargaining chip.
With an imperial marriage decree in hand, even if he was unwilling, he could not gamble with the lives of everyone in his household.
On their wedding night, unable to accept a wife he had never met, he made his first-ever flight from duty.
He thought that Xue Ming, raised with every luxury and adored by all, would never tolerate such humiliation.
One day, she would come to him and ask him to write a divorce agreement.
They would go their separate ways and each find happiness.
He had the beginning right, but the ending...
Content notes: Alternate history, dynasties mixed together, both leads are sexually inexperienced, happy ending. The heroine is strong, but the hero is stronger.
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I just said that the male protagonist is disgusting, really. . . Standard scumbag quotes, I can leave you on the wedding night, but you can't stay with me and so on. The female protagonist has always been innocent. She has never offended the male protagonist, right? The male protagonist doesn't have much white moonlight, but he still gets married. So why does this man treat the female protagonist like this? The heroine is good-looking, has an independent personality, loves the country, has a sense of justice, is responsible, and has strict requirements for others and herself. For such a good heroine, Mingming is unique! I'm dry. Scumbag, let's not talk about the crematorium. . .
The emotional scenes later on were so awkward, and I felt like I was constantly abusing the heroine. . Moreover, the inner os of the heroine in this article is that he just didn't like her when he left. In that era, was this kind of behavior just a thing? If I remember correctly, the male protagonist even taught his sister how to speak in order to insult and anger the female protagonist. . Although it was indeed the emperor who ordered him to leave, the heroine didn't do anything bad. Now that she's married and brought home, she told her face to face that I don't like you, so why not leave again? . You have to insult the heroine like this~ Also in the first two chapters, the hero's father said that the heroine gave up her past identity so that she could stay in the British government. In addition, if I understand the description of the heroine's dress correctly, it means that the heroine cannot be filial and cannot take revenge~ Then the heroine didn't have much emotional reaction and the hero was angry because of the heroine's reaction? I wonder why he is angry. Doesn't he feel bad that the heroine is so miserable? . His wife had just lost her father and mother and had not yet taken revenge. Then she was persuaded by him to join their family and she was asked to abandon her former self. Then he only cared about whether she loved me or not? I feel that the male protagonist has given too little, is selfish and irresponsible, and the female protagonist is abusive, stupid and miserable~
The author's writing style is very good, a great article
Let me share a very funny thing. You may not believe it. I had read this book for a short time and had no intention of reading it. I was planning to put it on my bookshelf for collection. But when I saw the red envelope message, I ordered it and prepared to comment on it with the thought of getting 10 coins for free. Then something suddenly occurred to me (I really didn't react at first, thinking that I had earned coins without spending any money). I was really stupidly happy with myself, so I'll just finish reading it. Hahaha
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On May 11th, this chapter will be rated with two points and a red envelope will be given out.
Not enough, the author is great!! Looking forward to your next work~???
I bought two chapters and read them
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ending ending ending-ending glory~ The author must keep writing~ Come on!!!!!!?
Ah, the ending of AA is so sad~ The author must keep writing!! Come on!!