The Final Journey [Quick Transmigration]

It's really good-looking. It's neither a slap in the face nor revenge. It respects everyone's ideas and does things, and the person being helped is not a noob. He repays kindness with kindness and repays grievance directly. There is no excess or regret. It was also very relaxing and enjoyable to read. Thank you to the author for his generous words! !

I still want to watch it. Is there a next one?

Some people just need a chance, that's great

It is indeed a bit sluggish, but not bad. The writing is good. The only problem is that the story about the car wheel can be deleted. A large paragraph can be read two or three times in the same chapter. Whenever the protagonist does something, the reasons are listed in one, two or three, and the psychological process is not analyzed in this way. I remember that this software charges according to the number of words. The author should pay attention to it.

The plot is really too watery, be more compact, the story is really good

Is that so... Actually, I personally think this story is quite well written. Due to the setting of this article, my wife basically has two parallel worlds in each world. In the early stage, it seems that some are more interesting and some are a bit boring; or it may simply revolve around the person who makes a wish, and the protagonist's sense of existence is slightly lower. But the two story lines in this world are both very well balanced, and it can be seen that the wife's control over the plot is constantly strengthening. Looking forward to my wife's updates and new pitfalls (well-behaved)

Ah, this, this is the euphemism of the boss. . .

Chen Lang is so disgusting! Repay kindness with hatred, ungratefulness!

So funny, so tactful

Saying so much with a clear conscience is more to comfort readers, I think