
[Mouse and Cat] The Departed Are Like Water, the Jianghu Is Far Away
[鼠猫]逝者如斯,江湖已远
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 69k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 17y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
17Chapters
207Favorites
10.0Score
3.1kClicks per chapter
26Comments
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Reader comments 21
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Do you dare to write about Lao Guai Mouse without drawing on the original work or Ouyang Chun? Will you die if you want to have a face?
This is my first time writing a comment~ In fact, I have always preferred reading long articles, but I always find short articles unsatisfactory. But this article can be regarded as writing one of my own thoughts. Haha, I have read a lot of articles about Zhan Zhao and Bai Yutang, and many of them say that they ended up in the world. But I always feel that a person with a character like Zhan Zhao who values love and justice is unlikely to give up this piece of blue sky so easily. If he wants to leave with Mouse, there should be only two possibilities. One is that he can no longer protect this piece of blue sky, and the other is that this piece of blue sky no longer needs his protection, which means Qingtian is no longer there. So after reading the beginning, I couldn't help but read it all in one go. The sentence I particularly like is Bai Yutang's sentence: "Know and cherish each other when we are together. Even if there is only one person left in this world, we must live strong and live a life that is twice as wonderful." This is the Zhan Zhao I hope for, and the Bai Yutang I hope for. Very good article^^
Get to know each other and cherish each other when we are together. Even if there is only one person left in this world, we must live strong and live a life that is twice as wonderful. ... A great quote ^^
It was well written and very moving. This, for them, is truly a perfect ending. Although I don't want to admit it, I did cry while watching it. Although it is a bit confusing at times, it is indeed a very good article. Kaifeng Mansion will never fail, it will always be a blue sky for the people. I wonder if the author has such an idea. They are no longer characters in the novel, but real people of flesh and blood. The author is just a narrator. I have always believed in a principle: no matter what the writing style is, as long as you put your heart into it, you can write an article that touches people. So, Gu Yue Qinghan, you have to work hard! Finally, I just want to say something silently. I hope that people in the world will eventually get married, and will not spend their lives worrying about the past, nor will they give up on themselves because of the dim future. . . . . .
Not bad, not bad! No one grows up all at once. It can be seen that the adults have put a lot of thought into creating each person's image and characteristics. I'm not very good at commenting. Personally, I feel that the general framework for adults is already there, but the "baggage" has not been shaken off or it has not been done in detail. I know that in this case, it will come out as soon as the lips are touched, but it does not happen in a short time. It's very difficult~~ So don't be discouraged. As for the gorgeous words, well~ this stuff needs to be accumulated. When I was in school, I pursued these things blindly, but I couldn't do it the right way. My dad joked that I was "frivolous and gaudy" and told me to read more Lu Xun (I was full of confidence), so I admired these powerful adults very much~ (scratches my head) I'm verbose. All in all, keep working hard and we look forward to more outstanding works from you!
The structure is very reasonable, like Zhan Zhao in my mind, unlike in some mouse and cat novels, where the empress'
No one can be offended by working for a family business. Even if he is a prince, he is still a relative of the emperor; ministers are outsiders anyway.
The plot is very attractive, and the dialogues between several people are also very characterful. It's like you can see them talking in front of you, which is very interesting!
Judging from the title, it should be a sad article
I feel sorry for the cat and the white mouse.