Upcoming novel: The Finished Story of Becoming the Villainess and Getting a Happy Ending with the Male Lead's Brother
As a beloved white moonlight, Zitan's mission was to complete her character's life and then promptly die.
Since completing the mission would let her go home, she dutifully played her role for more than a decade.
But after achieving a perfect death, she never expected to transmigrate back into the story.
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Everyone said the Crown Prince was handsome and majestic, but at twenty-six, he had only one son, born to a concubine. The Empress, his birth mother, was anxious and kept stuffing beautiful women into the Crown Prince's palace.
As one of the beauties brought in to give him heirs, Zitan could only spread her hands. This was some real bullshit. In her previous life, she had stabbed him, and he had sentenced her to death. Their grudge was already that deep, and now she had been sent to him again in a different body. This time, she planned to keep a low profile, stay alive, and never attract a certain person's attention again.
But fate had other plans. At first, she simply couldn't resist indulging her overflowing maternal instincts and playing with the chubby little dumpling.
Then, without meaning to, she caught the child's father's attention too.
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Later, the Crown Prince wrapped an arm around her waist. "I'll cherish you. Don't even think about leaving again."
Theme:
The beginning was actually okay, but after the halfway point the plot started to feel quite inconsistent, and the plot processing in many places was strange. The heroine has extraordinary skills and was raised as a killer since childhood, but in the plot after rebirth, she always looks like a little woman. The heroine's past seems to be just to give her skills, rather than her own experience. Doesn't such a strong experience have any impact on her character? And the heroine, as a former modern person, in many plots, is like a native who has been raised in a boudoir since she was a child. She doesn't understand anything and can't think of anything. (I have commented before that the part where the male protagonist is required to bleed begins to collapse around the fifty-year mark.) Everything serves the plot, and there are a lot of flaws.
The heroine later really made me feel that being kind to your enemies is really good.
The fact that Xue Ran killed her can be left to the finale. I admire it! Didn't the heroine realize that Xue Ran was betraying her when the misunderstanding was resolved earlier? You can expose this and not tell the male protagonist, I'm afraid it's a mental retard! Drama for plot's sake. I feel sorry for myself who stayed up late to cultivate immortality.
So does the heroine really have secret guard training experience? Do you treat a servant like Cuiyu with such a holy heart?
It's a pretty normal article, but why are the first few comments all negative. Some of them have been explained in the follow-up and are still dissing in the first chapter.
The character Qi is so disgusting. He forced him to be the second male lead. I can't stand this ending.
Now the heroine is listening and believing again. . . That sentence: "Who told you to hit my palace maid?" Is too aggressive. It feels like everything is not clear. She is so protective of a palace maid who usually has problems. Even if she has feelings for Xue Ran, as a calm and intelligent character, shouldn't she be calmer? That sentence feels so good.
Ahhhhhhhh this is the end! Woo woo woo
Don't feel pressured. Everyone still likes this article very much. I hope it can be more complete. Zitan thinks that Lu Yuncheng favored those women in the East Palace. Everyone knows that they have a good relationship. Even if they have some misunderstandings, they won't care. But I still hope that there will be no such misunderstandings between each other. I hope there will be a sweet side story!!
There should be extra episodes. . . .