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Blurb One: Everyone on the team likes Lu Zhiqing, the new arrival. Only Tang Jiaojiao hides whenever she sees him, and she makes sure to keep her distance.
One day, they ran into each other at a bend in the field ridge with nowhere to go. Tang Jiaojiao pointed her fingers at each other, thinking of hopping across the fields...
Lu Zhiqing, beloved by everyone and admired by all, had never been disliked before. "Why are you avoiding me?"
Tang Jiaojiao squeezed her eyes shut, turned her head, and covered her ears. I can't see, I can't hear, I don't know anything.
What was a Lu Zhiqing who'd never laid a hand on a woman to do when he felt like breaking that rule?
Could he pinch her little cheek? Damn, she was adorable.
Blurb Two: Tang Jiaojiao read a historical novel set in a bygone era. It featured a vicious white lotus who first befriended the woman destined to be with the male lead, Lu Zhiqing, then had a local thug rape her and force her into marriage.
Afterward, she cunningly comforted Lu Zhiqing and became his close friend, someone he could talk to about anything.
Lu Zhiqing accidentally learned the truth. After returning to the city, he turned into a powerful figure, took revenge for the female lead, destroyed Tang Jiaojiao's family, and eventually reduced her to prostitution...
The timid Tang Jiaojiao accidentally transmigrated into the book as that white lotus. The sight of the refined, elegant Lu's face made her legs tremble, so she either hid or ran away...
Content notes: An imagined setting, everyday family life, and a warm, healing story.
Coming next: Little Lucky Star of the Nineties
A little crabapple tree in the General's manor of the Great Feng dynasty was struck by heavenly lightning during its final tribulation and sent to a small village in the 1980s. That day, thunder boomed and lightning flashed, the waves rose a thousand feet, and the fishermen said the Ye family's men, who had gone out to fish, were surely lost at sea.
The moment the little crabapple was born, the heavens and earth fell quiet. The sea calmed, and the Ye family men returned safely from fishing, their boats laden with their catch.
The Ye family all thought the little crabapple was a lucky star. They doted on her from the moment she was born, cherishing her as she grew up.
When the little crabapple was eighteen, she nearly drowned at sea. To her surprise, the person who saved her was the young general from the General's manor in her previous life, a man famed throughout the land who had carefully watered her every day.
Her greatest regret from her previous life was that she never got to say a proper goodbye to the general. She lay carefully on his back and whispered, in a voice only she could hear, "It's been a long time, my general..."
Theme: The warm, healing love you long for
I ordered the full text because of the sentence about why the grandson of the Luo family was named Lu, but after reading it, I still don't know. . .
It feels like you have written about several couples, but the emotional scenes of the protagonists are not particularly outstanding, and the whole family is written in too much detail! Some people didn't even mention the ending, which felt a bit perfunctory later on! I have written so many non-protagonist scenes before. But overall I think the story is pretty good, so keep going! I look forward to more good articles from you in the future.
There is a lot that has not been explained, the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are also quite shallow, and there are many subplots. Overall it's okay.
? ? ? ? This is a cool operation? ? ? ? ?
It's actually not good to write this way. Chen Ping gave her a good ending and a good character. People who are poor and have low self-esteem should also be worthy of happiness.
I think the author's description of Jiaojiao's mother's cousin seems pretty good. I wonder if he will be written about later.
After reading it all, I can confirm that the author has no problem with his writing style and logic. As for the plot, it may not be my cup of tea. There are too many subplots that have nothing to do with the male and female protagonists. The writing is complicated and detailed, and even the love story of the female lead takes a lot of time to depict. It is very tiring for readers, especially someone like me who only eats the main plot. If I skip it, I am afraid of missing the plot. If I don't skip it, it is very hard to watch. In addition, the interaction between the male and female protagonists is really not much in the length of 130 chapters. Sometimes I feel it is quite complicated when writing about the male and female protagonists giving out sweets. Sometimes it is even summarized in one sentence. He rubbed her head and looked at her tenderly. I can't remember how many times the male protagonist rubbed the female protagonist's head in the novel. Anyway, he rubbed her head whenever it was time to give out sweets. There is also a lack of intimacy between the male and female protagonists. In my impression, I count. In addition to rubbing the head, the male protagonist once protected the female protagonist in his arms when riding in the car, once kissed the back of the hand, once kissed the cheek, and hugged two or three times. There was only one kiss in the first two chapters of the finale. There was no mention of the wedding night, and the rest were all head rubs. . . . . . Finally, the author's writing style can be good and the story is okay, but I may not read the author's other articles again. I don't like this writing style, so it's over.
Well, this chapter says that the male protagonist cannot cook, but in the previous article it was mentioned that the male protagonist cooks very delicious things like winter melon. Somewhat contradictory
Is this the end? Grandpa Luo didn't even explain anything, he was in such a hurry.
Many people's side stories were left unexplained. What a pity
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I ordered the full text because of the sentence about why the grandson of the Luo family was named Lu, but after reading it, I still don't know. . .
It feels like you have written about several couples, but the emotional scenes of the protagonists are not particularly outstanding, and the whole family is written in too much detail! Some people didn't even mention the ending, which felt a bit perfunctory later on! I have written so many non-protagonist scenes before. But overall I think the story is pretty good, so keep going! I look forward to more good articles from you in the future.
There is a lot that has not been explained, the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are also quite shallow, and there are many subplots. Overall it's okay.
? ? ? ? This is a cool operation? ? ? ? ?
It's actually not good to write this way. Chen Ping gave her a good ending and a good character. People who are poor and have low self-esteem should also be worthy of happiness.
I think the author's description of Jiaojiao's mother's cousin seems pretty good. I wonder if he will be written about later.
After reading it all, I can confirm that the author has no problem with his writing style and logic. As for the plot, it may not be my cup of tea. There are too many subplots that have nothing to do with the male and female protagonists. The writing is complicated and detailed, and even the love story of the female lead takes a lot of time to depict. It is very tiring for readers, especially someone like me who only eats the main plot. If I skip it, I am afraid of missing the plot. If I don't skip it, it is very hard to watch. In addition, the interaction between the male and female protagonists is really not much in the length of 130 chapters. Sometimes I feel it is quite complicated when writing about the male and female protagonists giving out sweets. Sometimes it is even summarized in one sentence. He rubbed her head and looked at her tenderly. I can't remember how many times the male protagonist rubbed the female protagonist's head in the novel. Anyway, he rubbed her head whenever it was time to give out sweets. There is also a lack of intimacy between the male and female protagonists. In my impression, I count. In addition to rubbing the head, the male protagonist once protected the female protagonist in his arms when riding in the car, once kissed the back of the hand, once kissed the cheek, and hugged two or three times. There was only one kiss in the first two chapters of the finale. There was no mention of the wedding night, and the rest were all head rubs. . . . . . Finally, the author's writing style can be good and the story is okay, but I may not read the author's other articles again. I don't like this writing style, so it's over.
Well, this chapter says that the male protagonist cannot cook, but in the previous article it was mentioned that the male protagonist cooks very delicious things like winter melon. Somewhat contradictory
Is this the end? Grandpa Luo didn't even explain anything, he was in such a hurry.
Many people's side stories were left unexplained. What a pity