[Crossover] Pass Me the Fire

After a moment of silence, I felt that the girl was actually a little miserable, especially after being targeted by the black mud. I really hope she can beat the black mud more.

I originally watched it for the tutors and JOJO, but I inevitably fell in love with Qin. Woo woo woo, she is really great, my heart is beating, suki suki~

Can there be another fat bird brother? I love you so much. Ah, I'm out of food. How can I live without you? My Weibo is not updated. At any rate, you are the one who asked me to recharge my first novel software. Please provide some food to feed the poor children who have to re-educate themselves.

It's a bad ending, the plot is messy, and the writing is hasty, but the writing is very good. The heroine obviously feels quite strong, but she is very embarrassed when fighting. While reading the article, I could notice that she was being pushed around in a hazy way. Although she had an inner description, she felt like she had no brain of her own and was an empty shell. In the end, even her beauty, which was so obvious in the first part, was no longer noticeable. Many things felt like the plot changed immediately after it started. I don't understand why it was written in such a hurry. At the end, I felt like I had watched a lot but nothing. It's not as good as the previous one, but the writing is very good, and Nailu's writing is particularly good. There are three chapters missing, so I'll record them here. I'll give it about three stars, one star for the writing, one star for Nairu, and one star for the other well-written characters. The plot is so bad that the heroine doesn't look like a natural dumbass in the end. There are subtle ruptures in the front, middle, and back of the character. The first book was obviously so cute. (This is not a demining sticker. It is my personal opinion. Do not tear it or spray it. It is for reference only)

I always feel that the heroine and the tutor team are more flesh and blood. The second part will definitely take more space to explain completely when taken together. It feels like the author simply wrote wherever he thought and did not set up the plot properly. It's a bit of a pity. It would have been more brilliant if it only focused on the tutoring plot. After all, the emotional lines of some characters in the first film were not continued. The first part really turned out to be White Moonlight [crying]

After watching it, I felt a sense of loss. Sure enough, I didn't finish it without a female vote (hint). Can there be a third part? Your writing is so delicious QAQ

Damn it, chuya, Dazai, defeated dog, defeated dog

The sixth time! A whole sixth time! ! ! Without food, I would really starve to death! ! !

When will the third part be released? Woohoo, beautiful sheath bit

I came here for tutoring. Warm reminder, since the tutoring group was offline after chapter 41, I started to flip through it quickly without reading it carefully. In chapters 67 and 74, only the names of Shiyu Cangyanliu and Yunque appeared. I have not actually been online. Starting from chapter 81 and 270 online, the tutoring group also started to come online ten years ago, so if you just want to read the tutoring group, you can skip chapters 41-80. I read the first book before reading this one. The heroine is indeed not as good as the first one as said in the comment section, but the plot of the first one is better.