Onmyoji: Unmoving as Three [Esports]

By chance, I met my hometown chess piece (hereinafter referred to as "Xiaoli") on March 12th, and then started reading this novel. (I had quit the game for a long time at that time. When I came back some time ago, I found that the letters sent by the system were more than 600 days old, almost 700 days old.) It was also this novel that made me come back to the game again and become an Itchy Mouse again. Next, coming to the topic, I want to talk about this novel. When I first started following it, it already had twenty-two chapters, which is actually a bit too much. The development of this novel can be preliminarily inferred from the structure of the whole text. It's a relaxing and sweet article about e-sports + love. (Actually, I still want to add "sweet article". In fact, the author's writing is quite sweet. The interaction between the two protagonists is extremely cute. Although it is not as sweet as other big ones, it is unique.) I think Xiao Ji's little actions are interesting - he is really cute. Although I later heard that he was supposed to be a quiet, taciturn and even a bit sensitive person, he presented us with the impression that he was a cute, soft-spoken person. Also, sometimes this article is a little bit silly, because - Zhou Xiaogong, he is actually not a particularly special person, but he also fits the traditional Jinjiang male protagonist setting. Perhaps because it is a main story, the male protagonist is actually more down-to-earth, because it is often difficult to write evil and scheming characters from the main perspective. So I think Zhou Xiaogong is quite funny, and it's also fun for him to complain and flirt with Xiao Ji in his heart. I think the author can retain this aspect, and even have the opportunity to retain these interesting interactions in the future, which can be regarded as cute little points in the novel. ​And the author is quite clever when it comes to selecting materials. Nowadays, there are too many e-sports, and the competition pressure is also high. But to be honest, this is really the first e-sports novel about Onmyoji that I have ever read. Very, very special. So much so that I had a lot of good feelings about it when I first saw it. This is the first novel that Xiaoli signed a contract for, and it is also the only one that has been completed so far. In fact, it can be regarded as the first novel in the true sense. I don't know how to express my feelings all the way. I can only express my joyful heart by using popular words - the words that readers love to say - "Ah ah ah, congratulations on the ending~ It's over and the flowers are over~ Come on Duck". The author struggled all the way and finally finished serializing this novel. It was not easy. It took me three months to finish writing this novel. But persistence will pay off. I obviously feel that not only is her code faster, but the content of the article, the ambush and the coherence of the plot have improved compared to before, and the perspective switching is more flexible. The most important thing is that the compact structure of her article and the rhythm of the plot are much stronger than at the beginning. I am not a professional reviewer, but I can feel it as a reader. How to describe it? It's just - ah, this article is so interesting, I want to finish reading it now (this feeling gradually emerged later in the article), rather than, this article is so boring, I almost fell asleep while reading it. Of course, this article still has some minor flaws. For example, Zhou Xiaogong is very direct when dealing with family relationships. He can be more rigorous and logical when getting along with his family and bringing Xiao Ji to meet his parents, and he can also add a little foreshadowing. It can be expanded and elongated to make his character more three-dimensional. However, considering that this article is just a cookie, there is nothing wrong with Zhou Gong's behavior. In fact, for an excellent novel, the protagonist's life and death do not have any impact. The most important thing is the characterization. For example, take "Infinite Horror". When Daddy Chong wrote this article, the main character, the Virgin, was a very, very difficult setting for Infinite Flow, but he still succeeded. Because the character description of Chong Daddy is really excellent. Looking forward to great future growth. Also, if the author wants to catch fish, he likes to write about the right topics and forums hhh (a dog's head saves his life). In fact, you can add a little plot into these, so that you can catch fish and promote the plot at the same time. Why not? Just like Chapter 61 of the novel, I feel that the dialogue and plot are now well connected. In addition, the author of this article actually put a lot of effort into the fighting skills content. I saw many routines. (Ps. But sometimes I don't have to use salty fish like me hhh) So sometimes you think a game should be about bald people, but I just look at it and pass it by. So I don't feel that we need to be too obsessed. The plot development is what we want to see more. Regarding the fighting skills, the author can actually write in detail and outline according to the situation. I feel that this novel is more of a light-hearted plot, rather than a story about pure love and details of life. So I'm kind of looking forward to how the author will develop in the future. Will the next book focus on details or plot? However, if I look at the entertainment industry article that I received in advance, I feel that the author may have worked hard on the details, but the setting is a fantasy type, and it feels like it can follow the plot. In short, I am looking forward to it. I really feel like I wanted to say a lot when I heard it was finished, but my logical thinking was confusing when I started writing. Above, I have recorded a few thoughts I want to say, hoping it will be of some help to you. (Come on, sisters~I will always support you~)

This ancient lineup. . . Try it at night

Hahahaha after reading this Read this article Went to play some fighting skills at noon Then I felt the happiness of Europeans_(:з∠)_ Although Kamaitachi only moved 5 times, he started to fire again and again =v= Seeing that the remaining blood was about to be beaten to death, Kamitachi forced himself to come up and kill the opponent. So happy.ヾ(????)?~

Qing Mimi asked who was responsible for the car accident that Xiao Ji's parents encountered until the end. I'm so curious.

Qing Mimi asked who was responsible for the car accident that Xiao Ji's parents encountered until the end. I'm so curious.

Live for the coffee table

Program Yuan is angry! Snort

Sprinkle flowers d(?д??)

Finish spreading flowers This Onmyoji lives for Otakemaru

Sprinkle flowers, the super ghost kings are bald together!