I Have a Portable Prison

The setting is very interesting, most of the plots are interesting, a small part of the plots are very romantic, and the overall reading experience is okay. 1 Point is deducted for: 1. The writing is sometimes very jumpy, that is, the author knows what he knows and skips some parts, but the reader seems confused. 2. At a certain stage, he was a super white-eyed wolf attack, and was read as an investment in writing and poverty alleviation. The first volume is the apprenticeship stage, the second volume is the jealous stage, and the third volume is the seduction stage. 3. The plot is very frustrating starting from the middle stage and continues until the entrance. After defeating a certain boss in the middle stage, the tension of the plot has risen to a small peak, but then it fell back into arrogance and seemed a bit boring. 4. After the same mid-term, or after falling off the horse, Shou is more inclined to his true identity, and loses a little bit of the B-king boss feeling when wearing a vest in the early stage. (In front of the attack) There is still a sense of youth in the past, but later it feels more and more passive. But the overall character design is that of Su Shuai, and there are doubts about whether he is happy or not. After all, he can only be hit first and then fight back, but he can't kill. Sometimes it's nice to be a saint in front of others, but sometimes it's very frustrating to be beaten by cannon fodder. The love line is hard to describe, but the family line with my brother and the previous bond with the monster are quite interesting. It's a pity that it's a bit short. After all, it combines Journey to the West and Liaozhai. The setting and character of the protagonist can fully support a million-dollar novel, or even more. Even if the main plot is completed, there can still be many branch plots, and the response arrows are a bit hasty.

2026.7.16.00: 53 Finished reading. A very nice article. I still remember the passage that touched me the most in the whole article. Zhao Xiaoqiu asked Zhao Qiqiu when people would sit on the ground, "when they are tired as a dog, when they are wandering, when they are drunk, when they give up their dignity", but Zhao Qiqiu said: "when they are playing games, when they are dancing, when they fall but are ready to stand up." Zhao Qiqiu has been a great good man for two lifetimes, accumulated countless merits, and imprisoned evil spirits. But the people and ghosts in this article come to life in the author's writings. People also have evil. Lin Dongfu, Xingming Hai, and the old lady are no less evil than evil ghosts; ghosts also have good deeds. Siniang, Huangfuyuan, and Huangfu Xiaoxiang are comparable to many good people. Looking at the bright lights of the market and seeing the joy, anger, sorrow and joy of the world, it is only less than 700,000 words long. After reading it, it seems that the fantasy world, the ups and downs of the stories are still stirring up troubles and cannot calm down for a long time. Those inextricable connections between people and between people and ghosts are still pulling my heart. "Destiny arises, destiny ends, destiny ends, flowers bloom and fall, flowers return to dust." I think this poem is very suitable for the tone of the entire article. If there is any flaw, the author likes to use flashbacks to describe some events. Flashbacks can create suspense and attract readers' interest. In this article, they can also highlight the theme of "karma and fate". At the same time, it is inevitable that readers will not be able to follow the rhythm of the plot. A long chapter is filled with confusion, and it is only at the end that the reader suddenly realizes it. The previous confusing reading experience is really not smooth. A very favorite article! My favorite supporting character is Siniang. When Siniang was reincarnated, her heart was empty and she couldn't bear to leave her. But later she became Bai Xiaoxing and was still with everyone, so she couldn't help but feel happy. Seeing that the love line has been criticized by some people, I prefer this one. The love between Xianminglou and Zhao Qiqiu is not unsincere. For Xianminglou, from teacher, to friend, to lover, Zhao Qiqiu has been throughout his life, and the fate of the two has long been tightly intertwined. The only flaw is that Zhao Qiqiu's arrow is not very obvious, but the various interactions and psychological descriptions in the following chapters may actually make our shy warden also moved! Very interesting, looking forward to seeing you in the next one!

I really, really, really, really like this book! I was reading this book when I was in elementary school. I had no money at the time, so I read it on a pirated version of the Internet. I never forgot it after reading it, but I never remembered his name, so when I wanted to read it again later, I couldn't find it. Now that I am a sophomore in high school and have money, I finally remembered his name. Really love it! Very well written! The image of each character is very full! The plot has twists and turns, and the plot is awesome! Woohoo. It is definitely Bai Yueguang in my heart, absolutely! Although I have used up all my pocket money this month, otherwise I would definitely have to invest some! Woohoo, wait until I get my pocket money next month, I really love it! Balloons are so cool'!!??????

I like this book very much. Although it has some shortcomings, it is really a very good book [Spreading Flowers]. When I saw the balloon picking up Siniang and reminiscing about old times, saying that everyone was waiting for her, I couldn't help but have red eyes. I hope everyone can always be well 🥺

Si Niang! I really like Si Niang [ bursting into tears ] finally back and reunited... In this life span theory of more than a hundred years, I don't know whether those friends and elder brothers in the past are still there, with a warm ending with a little sadness. Thank you to my wife for writing this story! 😭

Alas, it's really hard to find an article with a main plot that's refreshing 😭

I really like the author's articles. I always feel that the author always has a different kind of charm in character creation. I have reread it several times and still like it.

Throw flowers!! Super pretty!!

I love balloons so much, I'm repainting it again 🙏

Good-looking, good-looking, I must be happy in this life