My Husband Is My White Moonlight [Book Transmigration]
老公是白月光[穿书]
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 203k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
70Chapters
3.7kFavorites
9.6Score
1.9kNutrient gifts
21.2kClicks per chapter
714Comments
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Reader comments 37
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Super sweet, not the greasy kind of sweet It's very fresh Still not satisfied??`
The subject matter is very good, but the writing style is hard to describe. Please don't think I am criticizing. I am just giving you suggestions. "To some extent" and "obvious" appear all the time in the article. Sentences like this that are translated from American to Chinese are really uncomfortable, as if they are deliberately trying to create a gentlemanly feeling for the male protagonist. The more times they are used, the worse it will be. Originally, the overall article can be given 70 points, just because these sentences can only be given 50 points. I hope my personal suggestions can bring you some help.
It is recommended that you put the summary of the content on the chapter title in the future.
I finished reading it before I knew it ~ Thank you for your hard work
So beautiful, so sweet
It's amazing. I actually bought the whole book and read it all. It's been a long time since I've bought the whole book.
It's very interesting, although there's a lot that I haven't written out, and I feel like the foreshadowing is not used. However This Mr. Jian really suits my taste,,,, oh my god And the heroine,,,,,,,, the writing is really good
If you plant one, it will produce many updated chapters.
I finished the game in one go. Please work hard for your new work.
Read it, read it, read it! Are there any extras? Will there be branches about children, Beibei and the others?