[Crossover] Reshaping the Slate in the Age of Quirks

It took me a day to read the entire article, and I had the urge to write a long review. There is no need to go into details about the most superficial problems of this article. After reading it, I looked through everyone's comments. Many people raised the issue of the procrastination of narration and setting in different articles, and the problems with description methods such as # and——, and jpg. Probably because I read faster, I saw a kind smile hanging on the corner of my mouth three times in less than five minutes. Jpg. If used well, the general writing habits of emoticons and comments will naturally make the whole thing easier, but such frequent exchanges, or even more than a dozen sentences in one chapter, seem very redundant. The motivation that keeps me reading is that this article is not very long. It is not unacceptable to just skim over the writing skills issues quickly. However, after reading it, I personally feel that the biggest problem with the article is not that. Once again, I have subscribed to the full text. This long review was typed in Word before being placed under the article, so I am too lazy to click into the last chapter. It has been about 12 years since I entered Jinjiang. During the literary shortage, I also wrote some things, but it was not on Jinjiang. So please don't say that I read pirated articles, or that you are good at it. First of all, the author's selection of materials is very clever and cute. Little heroes are naturally a hot topic. Since last year, the popularity of Conan has gradually increased, and articles about Gin in particular have begun to increase. It is a recognized fact that there are problems with Woying's worldview and that comics authors are slightly weak in controlling long-form comics. Basically, articles written by Woying now always discuss these issues. There is nothing wrong with the author's inclusion of social change. The blackness of his position also makes the mission's actions appear reasonable. Judging from the article as a whole, what the author wanted to write was a smooth and refreshing routine, and the beauty and sophistication of the words made it clear. At the beginning of the article, there is a scene where the heroine and the others directly seduce AFO, which really improves their character. However, until about chapter 20, the setting takes up a lot of space. The government's view of the hero, the protagonist's view of the hero, the government's view of Black, and the arguments between them. The treatment of the original character's subsequent encounters takes up nearly half of the story, and the other half consists of describing the heroine's actions before that point in time. My personal guess is that the author wants to complete some emotional lines and make a reasonable setting for the heroine's strength. However, in the narration, despite all the comments about the author's opinions with jpg, the character creation is still a little thin, at least I don't see the beauty of the heroine. The heroine's early behavior can be said to be to survive under the hands of AFO, but her big goal later is not like her own heart, but because she has powerful powers and does whatever she wants, just like a person who becomes rich overnight and then drifts away. Next comes the preliminary action in about thirty chapters and the sports festival in about thirty chapters. This is also the most depressing chapter for me. The more I read in the later stage, the more depressed I will frown. The author basically did not develop according to the original plot. The plot of Conan ended directly on the timeline. Although the two major events of the little hero were used, only a shell was left. This is not uncommon in my English. As long as it is well written, it will only make people admire the author's imagination. The clues connecting several anime in this article have also appeared in other articles. At least I have seen nearly 10 articles about the combination of K and Woying, and more than 5 articles about the combination of Conan and Woying. The difficulty and cuteness of combining multiple animes lies in the collision of characters and plots. However, the characters in this article are a bit hard to describe. Let's first analyze the characters in My Einchu. The identity setting of Kirishima, who appears most frequently, can be regarded as a private design. After seeing the author's setting, I directly searched for it. At least from the time in July when the author wrote the first chapter, the author's conjecture about Kirishima has been firmly rejected. Uncle Ou has become a tool that embodies the darkness of the government, and Bakugo's view of Midoriya is also very negative. The protagonists of Conan have almost no role except to show the government's evil hand on them, so it doesn't matter if they are deleted. In the scene where Rei Fukiya and Uncle Ou died, they really died for the sake of advancing the plot. Replacing Rei with Tsukauchi or any other police officer or even an original character would have no impact. Uncle Ou's death was also briefly mentioned. The author spent a lot of space describing the impact of his death, but did not put any emphasis on his own shaping. Don't ask for too much, at least don't forget the five-line character... I turned a little faster before and almost missed it. The descriptions of all the teachers, including Uncle Ou, are very flat. Except for a few lines from the original work and accidents, there is almost no difference. Most of the characters' names can play the same role if they are exchanged with each other. The same goes for the character insertions in Yu Yu Hakusho. After describing the current situation of a bunch of meaningless original characters, the only one with ink is the Little King of Hell, and this image can also be brought to any politician, at least after reading it, I feel that it has no connection with the original work. And at the end, the author spent nearly thirty chapters describing a death game in which a large number of original characters died. To be honest, I don't know how the author did it. In these thirty chapters, except for a classic scene of Bakugo's sports festival and Kirishima's necessary promotion as an undercover agent, the rest of the little heroes are basically called by how many people and what groups. In the end, less than a few people were directly said to have died. To be honest, I didn't see any plot in the last thirty chapters. I am completely better than you, so I want to have a higher say. This makes the sports festival almost unnecessary. Since the media can be held hostage, it is not necessary to find a high-exposure scene. Why not just put the image in major squares? There's no way such a big thing wouldn't spread To be honest, I personally don't object to the death of the original characters, and it's not like I haven't read any abuse stories. But as a person who loves fandom, I hope that even if those people die, they will die with value, at least not OOC or reduced to a symbol or tool. And when I saw the end, I really felt that those people's deaths were not worth it. The author almost completely belittled his own side, and almost all the characters were flat. The same is true for the emotional line. Not to mention how familiar Gin's reason for being loyal to the organization is. Anyway, I have used it myself and read it several times in other articles. Basically, if you want to write about Gin's betrayal, this reason is quite common. The adult relationship between the heroine and Gin is actually quite reasonable, but if you really want to say that it is more like a partner in certain things, of course it doesn't hurt. However, the author himself is somewhat contradictory. On the one hand, he describes the relationship between the two people in a pale way, but at the same time, he uses # at the bottom to emphasize Chong Chong Chong... It's too long, so I'll stop here. There's actually a lot more I want to say, but I feel like it's not necessary. I started reading this author's novels from Goddess. I also left a comment on the last article Safi. I always felt that the author lost enthusiasm halfway through the writing and started to perfunctory... Anyway, I finished reading it and bought the whole novel. I wrote a review of more than 2,000 words, whether the author liked it or not. The only thing I hope is that you can have more love for the original characters... Please try to figure out the characters more. Now this article is like Baidu's character settings and then used them directly. Oh my god.

This one looks a bit like Kira Yoshikage

Let's do a side story, for example, how will future generations evaluate the heroines?

I think the content of this book is quite good, but it has some shortcomings, such as too much explanation, which makes people impatient, and the logic is a bit outrageous. I hope that the next book can make some progress and write a more attractive novel.

Decided to go to Baidu to research

The progress is a bit slow. I feel that there are not many highlights after one chapter. It is too streamlined and feels like a delay.

If you want to read the exciting chapters, just skip it. To be honest, the author thinks that the plot is too dragging. I have just started after reading so many chapters. I feel really tired. This is just a small suggestion, huh?

How should I put it, although the leader has been changed now, the black organization really likes bombs hahahahahahaha (the emphasis is wrong)

Yes, without comments, a lot of fun would be lost

The setting is interesting, but the description is draggy. It drags on for several pictures without getting to the point.