Your Majesty Is So Charming

The writing is very good, but the sisters who read the comments are not satisfied. I will summarize a few points. The heroine is emotionally insensitive and doesn't know who she likes or who likes her. But the male protagonist is truly affectionate. The article is relatively long, but I personally feel that the proportion of watering down is still relatively small. The male protagonist imprisons the female protagonist for a period of time, which is very short and very sad. There is a male supporting character who likes the female protagonist but doesn't realize it because the female protagonist is very slow. The male protagonist is not kind and can wipe out his entire family in a single thought. The female protagonist is kinder and has some womanly kindness. In the end, the heroine is still the empress, and the hero is the queen. She helps the heroine handle the affairs of the court but is not in the court.

I feel that your writing is not very good. The characters are not vivid, the writing is not enough, and the details are not in place. The same is true for the plot. If it were not for this type of plot, I would not want to watch it. The author can continue to improve it. You have not expressed the female protagonist's feelings for the male protagonist well.

If you want to see the plot of chasing your wife in the crematorium and falling off the horse, in the back and back, I saw more than 70 chapters. There is no horse falling in the 70s chapter, and there is no Tiantiantian (I actually think Ah Jiu [male second] is very sweet), impatient sisters cautiously enter the pit.

I feel sorry for Chengcheng. I haven't experienced normal parental love in three lifetimes.

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It's so fucking stupid. Everyone except the male protagonist knows the real thing. I thought it was okay at the beginning. But later on, I felt that the male protagonist was written as a fool. It was a waste of time. Everyone around me is smart. I can't even dream about the past life. The drag on this article is disgusting. It's almost over and I don't even realize that the female protagonist has any feelings.

The queen mother committed a crime, but she was unhappy with the old emperor when she saw her third life. The heroine was such a good person, and she suddenly hoped that the old emperor's son would be incompetent. This way, Lu Han would be happy to rebel.

After reading it in one go, I felt a little confused. I hope the protagonists will get together soon and not get entangled in each other, but I also feel that they have hurt some people in the process of being together (I may have read too many cannon fodder counterattack articles). In short, it is a background novel that may appear in the female supporting character's counterattack and cannon fodder turnaround story, such as the fate of Qiqi Ge, and some innocent male supporting clan members (can't remember the name of the clan) which make people feel uncomfortable. The Queen Mother's behavior is also uncomfortable to watch, but from the heroine's point of view, it is difficult to resist. After reading it, I felt that the frustrating plot was too long, the sad parts were too many, and the sweet parts were too short to relieve my boredom. Maybe I am only suitable for reading sweet and refreshing stories. This is my first long review. I only complain about the plot. I am very good at writing (I can't write such words, so don't criticize me. You are right)

This story is awesome! I can't bear to read it, but I can't help it, hahaha

Finished spreading flowers, the writing style needs to be improved