I'm Not a Scum Top (Quick Transmigration)

It's a bit confusing, I can't tell who is who

I feel like the plot is messed up, and there is no dividing line between time jumps. Aren't you having a wedding? Suddenly someone kidnapped a child in the woods? This doesn't fit in with the wedding scene. Also, Mo Qing becomes darker too quickly, and the characters in front of him are not fleshed out either.

Very well written!! The first world is a little confusing, with too many typos... The plot, writing, and character descriptions are all very good.

I can't understand it at all (#-.-). Bad review

It feels a bit discontinuous and chaotic, here and there. Doesn't the protagonist know how to do magic? Why does my skill get better just by writing?

If you want to read the story quickly, I suggest you label each world more clearly (?-ω-`)

In fact, I personally think Qiu Li is pretty cool.

I read it all in one go~ Spread some flowers~

Shock! Isn't Cen Chen a scumbag in the second world? Why is it that the protagonist of this chapter is also said to be Cen Chen!

Collected There are so few people ovo