The Eccentric “Young Master”

After buying it, let me talk about my feelings... From the first generation to Yan Yi, I have a relatively big feeling. The traces of the story line are a little too obvious. How to put it, in layman's terms, it is to catch up with the plot. So the problem that comes with it is that the character creation is not clear enough. This kind of problem affects the setting of the novel and the setting of the protagonist. For example, the theme of the first generation is very novel. The birth of the first generation ABO and the adaptation and transformation of society. Cen Zhao's character and story line are all very well written. , Various imaginative settings can also take off. The first generation gave me the feeling that it was very exciting and beautiful, so I stayed at the bottom of the pit and couldn't get up... OTZ... As for Yan Yi, it is a relatively short story, and the character settings are very interesting. Now The women disguise themselves as men, and the various golden finger plots are also very exciting, but when I look at it, I feel that the problem is more obvious, that is, it is a bit too plot-oriented. The story itself is not a setting that can take off like the first generation, so the shortcomings of the plot are more obvious, because it goes too far. The plot line, so the character image is not full enough. To be honest, the image of the female protagonist is not clear, let alone the male protagonist, it is a bit of a trap. In fact, I think my brother can also write a more clear character. After all, why is the female protagonist like this? Isn't it because her brother raised her as a boy? The writing about filming and other things is not clear enough. It doesn't feel like reading about the entertainment industry. Once the scenes are filmed, they are thrown away and the subsequent releases are basically brushed off. I feel that it is a bit missing. I think Dada might try the part about manipulating people's hearts. There are several points related to society, human relationships, and the adult world that give me a very good and eye-catching feeling. Except for the first generation, I haven't read Dada's other books, but I feel that these two emotional dramas are a bit weak... Then I suggest that Dada give it more shape. When it comes to character images, I am not a book writer, but a novelist. I think that one aspect or a few aspects of the character can be highlighted. He or she does not need to be described in every aspect, but the things related to him or her and his or her inner activities should be helpful in shaping the character image. The protagonist is not born just to complete the story line. He or she should be a living person, so there is his or her story, because it is his or her life, full of his or her emotions and choices. Emmmmmmmmm, I feel this, just say it casually, Lao Yu is a bastard! I will still keep chasing the first generation! ! Rush!

After reading it again, I still feel it's a pity that the writing is a bit short.

Eh, so short. Finished with flowers~

Hahaha, my mother was attracted by the copywriting and finished it all at once. Later I found out that it was the wife who wrote "Monster". Yeah, it's very interesting, but I don't know why it's a bit confusing.

Congratulations on the completion and flowers. A little sad, but looking forward to my wife's new posts

Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers

Crying is finally over, looking forward to a new article

Still want to see ( ?? ?? )

Woohoo, why does it end here? I really want to continue watching TUT. Very well written in big letters (?▽?)

There is only one chapter in the extra chapter, which is too little. I should write a few more. With your update frequency, shouldn't it give us a little sweetness if we catch up so far?