(Early Work) I Want to Know If This Is Love

The first few chapters were well written, but the last few chapters felt a bit weak and bloody...

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To be honest, it feels like the author wrote some sadistic stories for the sake of plot, but the context of the text is very inconsistent. The characterization of the characters and the description of inner emotions are not very good. Xiao Jing's initial hatred for Xi changed to his love for him too quickly. There are no foreshadowings in some parts of the article. However, it can be seen that the author also wrote the article carefully, so I still send a bunch of flowers.

I can't see the taste, nor can I see the emotions of the characters. The so-called emotions are just superficial, and the connotation cannot be seen. The plot is not tight enough, and it always feels like it is not connected. Maybe it's a bit exaggerated, but this is how I felt after reading the entire article. The author's reply: Haha, thank you for your advice, I will pay attention to improvement~~O(∩_∩)O

Haha, it's the first time I've seen an appetizing article.

Hey, I've watched more than half of it I feel like this Yu west is really unlucky. It's really heartbreaking to become like this after being depressed. It's hard to imagine how arrogant and domineering he used to be. I like Xiao Jing's infatuation so much. We haven't seen each other for five or six years, but I still like Yu west. Oh, hehe, keep chasing new articles

Finally finished reading it, haha, it's okay, Xiao Rui is too persistent in his love for Xi

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4 1\2 Stars

This story is quite interesting