Eldest Sister Qing He
长姐清荷
Synopsis
88Chapters
344Favorites
10.0Score
53Nutrient gifts
987Clicks per chapter
24Comments
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I think the writing is quite good, the writing style is natural and smooth, and the character setting is not awkward. It's just a bit flat, and the psychological portrayal of the characters is not deep enough. Seeing that the reason for giving up now is that the family depends on each other for life, and the cousins were kidnapped, shouldn't they go through all kinds of difficulties to save them? I haven't read it after waiting for several chapters. Why is this plot gone? I just abandoned my family.
The writing style is very good, but the emotional lines are too dull. The emotional lines of several male characters and the female protagonist are all mentioned in one stroke. From their point of view, it is normal for the female protagonist to be beautiful and talented and to like the heroine. From the reader's point of view, this kind of emotional line without succession and transition is not interesting. Moreover, the readers do not discuss knowledge with the heroine, nor can they see the heroine's appearance. The charm of the heroine should be reflected through the interactive plot between the heroine and the character. Currently, the heroine's personal charm cannot be seen
Pei Jiu and Lu Zhaoying both like the beauty and talent of the heroine. Weird
I wanted to watch it, but I saw that the heroine is 7 years older.
Is Lonicera the prince's son?
Is the new song my sister or my brother?
I promised to protect my younger siblings, but after my younger siblings were taken away, I didn't even mention saving them. It seemed like I had forgotten about them later. Hey, I was ready to give up.
The writing of the article is okay, but the pace of the story is a bit fast and a bit contradictory. Especially the heroine quickly accepted the love of her former brother, but she cannot accept Pei Jiu. She thinks that Pei Jiu is a relative. Shouldn't Lonicera be a relative? After all, they have been together as siblings for many years, and Lonicera is much younger than the heroine. Isn't this enough for the heroine to accept for a period of time? No matter how you look at it, he is not of the same age group. He is still a younger brother. It is really more difficult to accept him than to accept Pei Jiu.
Qwq is so beautiful!!
I really like Lonicera qwq