[Harry Potter] A Burning Heart

It's also nice to stop here, Lily and James just got married, and Kresia and Remus happen to be together, so we don't have to relive the pain later.

I really hate the person who made my wife withdraw from the industry. I have read many of my wife's works. She is really a prolific and high-quality author in the HP industry. Thanks for not deleting these works. It's good to stop at this chapter.

(Crying bitterly) Who made my wife quit the industry? I hate them [crying]

It's really good-looking. Even though I knew I was in for a trap, I jumped out without hesitation and it's good-looking. Just like the previous comment said, it's good to stop here. Moreover, the first few chapters also cover the subsequent stories. Although we can't see the ups and downs and daily life in the middle, it's still good.

I finished reading "The Seventh Sacrifice" and "Burning Heart" in one night, and suddenly I understood why a fellow fan earlier said that it stopped abruptly, but the interruption was very appropriate. There is no need to repeat the familiar sadness, and the most important part of the beautiful love story has been covered, and the rest of the plot can be left blank. I also suddenly understood why it was only updated less than 100,000 words. When a lot of people mentioned HP novels with Lupine as the protagonist, they would regard this as a "masterpiece" that "must be read". You know, many V articles with 100,000 words have not yet entered V. Even some of Lujiang's high-scoring HP articles have not yet completed the beginning of the novel in 100,000 words. This great level of language refinement is also second to none among the masterpieces of HP fan fiction. Reading 100,000 words gives people the feeling that there are more than 200,000 words. It is clear where the article should be "fat" and where it should be "thin". To be honest, when I first saw "Burning Heart" and added the comment "a masterpiece with Lupine as the protagonist", I thought it was describing Lupine. I thought it was referring to Lupine, a low-key but brave Gryffindor, who made a righteous act of sacrifice like Regulus (but after thinking about it, since Lupine was also fighting on the front line of justice, this kind of plot did not seem to create any special conflict, and this idea cannot withstand scrutiny). And the key point is that in the two works "The Raven" and "The Seventh Sacrifice", the heroines are very restrained, calm and rational... I really didn't expect that in this book, the low-key male protagonist is, while "Burning Heart" describes the lively, devil-like heroine. Her setting of "bad boy + genius girl", "top-notch explosive power of magic attack vs extremely low physical and magic resistance (powerful but with a sense of fragmentation)", "perverse and world-weary but also a love brain", "mature and pretentious but innocent and bright" is very impactful and her portrayal is very successful. In anime, this character even has the potential to become a hit of the season or even the year. In fact, among the three books, I personally like this one better, even though it is very short and unfinished. After reading the other two books, the heroines are very beautiful, but I really can't picture their expressions in my mind. I can only imagine their body movements based on the text descriptions. But Kresia is so vivid. After reading it, you can even imagine that when she is angry or suddenly attacked, her eyes that were originally empty suddenly tightened, and the candy in her mouth was suddenly crushed in her cheeks. Moreover, the reading experience of this article is also very smooth, and the picture is very fluid and coherent. I feel like, in fact, it would be good to write in such a more lively style. Generally speaking, Dada has great control over writing and a great creative attitude. When writing about the Magic School of the West, I really carefully studied foreign languages, cultures, elf myths and legends and other information (here I am talking about "The Seventh Sacrifice", which is also very interesting). It seems that such stories really happened to such characters, rather than a distorted dream of people outside the wall about the world inside the wall. This is a very particular person.

I discovered a point. Remus didn't understand the German that Kresia spoke in the second half of her confession, but Dumbledore did. GGAD szd! ! !

Dumbledore hid his power and fame, and was very good at the beauty trap.

Wuwuwuwuwu, my wife only retreats from the hp pit, who is it, who is persecuting the author for generating electricity for love?

To be honest, I'm so grateful to write the ending first and then go back to the beginning. After watching so many HPs, am I really fooled?

Alaska's writing is really magical. Even though I know the story line has stopped there, I still can't help but click on it to read the story she wants to tell us. Alas, it's so difficult to write a novel.