[Harry Potter] The Snape Girl and the Potter Boy

Weirdly, I can see the effect of a certain joke... I'm sorry, but it's really depressing and scary, especially the chapter about leaving the system. It's like telling me that what I should do has been done by another time-traveling woman, and the beauty she deserves has been lost to her. You will live your whole life in the incomprehension of others. Liba, I don't understand why you don't accept such an excellent mother and father, and I don't understand why you don't want to forget your real parents. If you are good enough, that's what you should do. Once you show unmatched qualities, it's disappointing. It's hard to believe that it's that person's daughter who is despised this way and that way. I am a very courageless person. After reading the chapters about discovering my identity, I found that I would kill myself directly.

Even after so long, I still want to say I don't like the author's original Aboriginal Alphard Black at all. It's so fucking disgusting! ! ! ! ! ! ! I really want him to die now! I don't accept all kinds of whitewashing. I hated him from the moment he appeared on the scene. I really don't want him to be the CP of the little Gryffindor princess. When I saw the gap between the two of them, there was such a big difference! !

From beginning to end, I was speechless.

I came here because of his reputation, and I have to say that the identity plot was arranged very well, and I silently sympathized with the professor for a second. Reading from beginning to end in one breath also shows the author's progress, from quoting the original text at large to consciously writing his own stuff. But to be honest, the ending was a bit abrupt and anticlimactic. Some of the emotional ups and downs that should have been explained in detail were brushed aside, but there was no long feeling for people to savor... (What am I talking about (ー_ー)) In short, it is already commendable among non-V works, but I think the author's ability can definitely go further?

I don't understand why Roch is torn down. Ron is 10,000 times cuter than Alphard. Regulus's child shouldn't be like this.

It has been two chapters since the Horcruxes in those pendants appeared, and the heroine has no idea of ​​dealing with them...

Although the author likes Blake, I just want to see the ending where they don't get back together, and I won't read the next few lines.

I feel like this Voldemort is very powerful hahaha

Damn, I really like the self-designed character Alphard. Can I move it and write a fanfic?

Lina is too pretentious, bah!