
My Husband Is a Cloud-Shaped Pastry
夫君是块云片糕
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- Completed
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- 203k Words
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- Danmei (BL)
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- 6y ago
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- JJWXC
Synopsis
68Chapters
145Favorites
9.5Score
98Nutrient gifts
323Clicks per chapter
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Life and death, why are you still working so hard after cultivating immortality?
So what happened to killing him?
55555 Finally got to eat roast lamb! Sprinkle flowers~
Dear wife, after the extra explanation, the plot is indeed much clearer! It turns out that wind chimes measure spiritual power!
Woohoo, wow, how good it is, the sweet love between two cute cats! Just solve the complicated things!
Wow wow wow Confession, madam, this is really my favorite article I have read this year, and it is also top 2 in my many years of online writing career! After reading it last night, I was filled with a mixture of tenderness and excitement. I was suddenly drunk and couldn't fall asleep for a long time. I woke up this morning and was still dizzy. I cried, let me cry, and let my tears drain away some of the overflowing emotions. Woo woo woo. Read it again after you've finished crying. After reading "The Husband is a Cloud Cake" (by the way, the name is not consistent with the overall style of this article, which is as vague as a dream), the first feeling is beauty! My wife's ability to describe the environment and atmosphere is really amazing, she creates the artistic conception well, and the names she chooses are also great! The main place where the story takes place is Liuyun County. This place name is very beautiful! And after seeing it, I thought of Zhang Zhongsu's poem, "Dancing cranes will gather, and the flowing clouds will not move." Ziyang is the crane in the flowing clouds. He has almost all the characteristics of a crane, beautiful and elegant, and has the air of a gentleman, but he does not have the longevity of a crane. My heart hurts. Han Xie also has a poem, "The flowing clouds are melting and the water is long, and the hometown is thousands of miles away." The same is true for Ziyang. After studying in Shangxiaofeng, when he returned to his hometown again, the eggs were overturned and everything was empty. In the water mirror, not only his hometown, but also the world was empty. I also like the name Qingyingcao very much. "Qing" in "Shuowen Jiezi" means "the color of the East. Wood makes fire, and elixirs are made from elixirs. The belief in Danqing is like this. All the attributes of Qing are from Qing." The unique ancient rhyme suddenly came out, and Qing is dark green, which looks gloomy. The fireflies flying around and glowing faintly are also very light (green fireflies and lightness have the same pronunciation as hhhh). The combination of the two adds to the ghostly feeling that fireflies originally have. I was super excited when I saw the green fireflies killing souls at night, and the vines wrapped around the bones. It felt like a good match! The green firefly has white flowers and red fruits. It has a unique aroma that cannot be smelled by people outside the mirror. I think it may have more uses, is there any? The story itself is also very beautiful! The two time and space that should have been parallel lines intersect, the country hates the family and the family comes back to life, but love defeats darkness and death. The world constructed by my wife is so wonderful, with low-magic oriental fantasy, emperors of mountains and seas, endless books, water mirrors connecting two time and space, and astrology plays a big role in the plot (last semester I studied a course on the history of science and technology in the Middle Ages, and one week I taught about alchemy and astrology, which are quite romantic, although not scientific, perhaps because they are unscientific). Many scenes in this article are very beautiful. It would be great if I, a handicapped person like me, could draw. There are many scenes that I really want to draw. In the first chapter, a person in a dream talks about a rainy night, a broken house, a poor ranger in a raincoat and a bamboo hat, and a frail young man in a silver crown and a rich robe, looking at each other in the candlelight, with wine and a mirror; in the fourth chapter, Lu Jing goes to Zhongshan outside the city, among the springs and pines and cypresses, and overlooks the entire Liuyun County from the top of the big tree sticking out from the rock. The city wall is made of white stone, and there is a lake in the center of the city. There are two gold and silver pagodas in the middle of the lake (there are two pagodas in our city, but they are not as grand as gold and silver. They are black and white pagodas, facing each other across the river. It is said that there is a big demon at the bottom of the pagoda. The black pagoda is very close to my middle school, and we also organized group activities there, and the white pagoda is very close to my home); Chapter 7 After successfully collecting incense, the fishermen sang in the waters of Hantan, singing about the past and bitterness. Chu and joy, while the bonfire in the camp is lit, is slightly similar to "the birds are gone and the birds are coming in the mountains, and the people are singing and crying in the water" but much more positive and hopeful; I want to paint the picture of Lu Jing entering the world in the mirror, magnificent and strange; I want to paint the green fire grass binding the bones at night, which is particularly radiant; I want to paint the building trees in the sunset, this big tree that connects the water mirror and reality, let me I thought of the World Tree in Nordic mythology; I wanted to draw Zi Yang summoning the Suzaku. The Suzaku flew across the vast sky. Zi Yang stood on the Suzaku's back and looked down at Liuyun City. Outside the city was the army pressing down, and inside the city was the light of the burning sky. At the intersection, pieces of white jade-like city walls collapsed. At this moment, would Zi Yang's complexion be paler or slightly more bloody? Lu Jing's biggest characteristic is his purity. "Heavy as the sun", "The eyes are very bright, filled with enthusiastic and cheerful light, as if he is not afraid of anything and will not be troubled by anyone", he has a strong sense of youth, but is clean and uncontaminated by dust. But these are secondary. In my opinion, what really constitutes his core is his love for Zi Yang. Lu Jing's love for Zi Yang is touching, deep but without any impurities, so clear that it is touching. There is no negative emotion directed at the lover in his love (I like deep feelings, but I don't like the popular love-hate relationship, which is too turbid for me, the concentration is indeed high, but the purity is too low. Love itself should be a very pure thing), almost does not ask for anything in return, even if there is pain, it is never directed at the lover, it is almost religious, the piety of saints who believe in gods. But Lu Jing's sense of being a believer is very weak, and everything he does is indeed out of love. I highly appreciate Mrs.'S arrangement on this!!! In many of the high-concentration love stories I have read in the past, the author would set some objective restrictions (for example, one party is miserable and pitiful, while the other party is the only light in his life; or the two parties have a hierarchical status difference). This should be due to lack of confidence in love itself, so adding some objective conditions to consolidate or even elevate love is still cliché and weakens the transcendence of love itself. Love is a miracle. The wife set up Lu Jing and Zi Yang as equals, and Lu Jing had many choices objectively from beginning to end, but he chose to love Zi Yang without any regrets or reservations. What determines everything is love itself. On this point, my wife really coincides with what I have been looking for!!! As for Lu Jing's love, I felt it more clearly when I re-read it. Every seemingly ordinary detail that I had ignored before became clear and distinct. In the second chapter, Lu Jing tolerated the jokes made by the younger brothers and remained speechless. He suddenly became angry when he heard that Zi Yang would not live forever and the person he was dating would be a widower sooner or later. He didn't lose his courage in the spelled rope that bound him, but in Zi Yang's bloodless face and stunned eyes. In Chapter 3, Lu Jing didn't have time to think about the sword energy coming towards him, but he protected Ziyang under his body. In Chapter 6, when catching snakes, I was also thinking about the past with Ziyang, and the giant snake invaded my mind and took advantage of it hhhh. Lu Jing seems to be thinking about Zi Yang all the time. In Chapter 15, "Lu Jing suddenly wondered, would that cloud pass through sleep and finally appear in the sky of the living world? If so, he would leave the water mirror one day and think about a cloud in the water mirror that had appeared in the sky. I feel a little comforted." Wuwuwuwu, if it is really Lu Jing who appears on the screen and Zi Yang stays in the water mirror world (actually, I think if the two of them really want to be separated in two worlds, I would be more willing to let Zi Yang appear on the screen and Lu Jing stay on. It feels more dramatic, but it is definitely still a happy ending. ), The ending is also very beautiful, although very sad. This is the case with the strange children's literature "His Dark Materials". For the safety of the world, in the end the male and female protagonists are separated into two parallel worlds and can no longer contact each other. They just take an hour every year to sit silently in the same place in the two worlds as their only connection. In Chapter 22, Lu Jing is particularly "lively" and "turns over almost every blade of grass in Liuyunhou Mansion". Is he afraid that the green firefly grass that attacks the living soul will be detrimental to Zi Yang? Love is restraint. From the noble Ning Guo's legitimate son, he acted like a hero to save the beauty when he first met, and said playful and teasing words, showing his disrespect for others, "I want you to only be good to me from now on, and no one else will touch you" to "I have many things to say in my heart, but I don't dare to make mistakes." How far is the distance and how long does it take? Lu Jing is so gentle to Zi Yang. My favorite scene in Chapter 29 is when Zi Yang fell asleep and Lu Jing was peeling off water chestnuts. Ziyang, who was indifferent and distant, was sweet and gentle after falling asleep, oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo,, the air flow in his breath might be sweet, Lu Jing couldn't help but lean down and kiss him, I really understand it! But kissing will inevitably disturb his sleep. You can look carefully and count his slender eyelashes one by one, but looking at him will also deepen your desire for further contact. You are full of tenderness and excitement, and you just want to kiss him thousands of times. So just peel off the water chestnuts and make him rice porridge. I have never seen water chestnuts, and my impression of water chestnuts is only in ancient poems. Picking water chestnuts and singing water chestnut songs feel very Jiangnan, gentle and lingering. The emotions of those girls in ancient times were while picking water chestnuts, in the midst of the singing of "Singing the Water chestnut Song and Reluctant to Stop". Lu Jing's rich and overflowing emotions were in the time of peeling water chestnuts, in the midst of the fragrant water chestnut rice porridge. If everyone in the world is a book, then Lu Jing must be a love letter. It is a very long love letter, written with endless love, but it is simple and pure. Over and over, it is just a few words: I love Senior Brother Xue and I love Ziyang. Wuwuwuwu, what I seek in the fantasy world of online literature is this love with extremely high concentration and purity. I'm so touched to come across this story! Ziyang is such a nice person. (I would like to ask my wife, does the name Nan Yu come from Cen Shen's "Sending Shi Sima to Cui Xianggong's Curtain"? The majestic Prime Minister's Mansion, Qingqie Phoenix Pond. Xian'er Yaotai crane, perched high on the Qiong branches. Flying back, the sunny day is good, singing and singing in the wind. I am riding Xuanle, when I first learned to dance. Rare birds are in the net, and their lives are as thin as gossamer. I would like to entrust Zhou Nan to Feather, holding the stream of water.) "Elegant and clear, his facial features are also very beautiful, but his face is too pale, and he can't help but look a bit weak." He also has "the fragrance of grass and trees". When he sees this great beauty, he is very moving whether he is gentle and pure or indifferent and gloomy. Zi Yang is really suffering, he has been burdened with a lot since he was a child, he is talented but weak (555555 is taking medicine while eating, it is too miserable, heartache), Liuyun County Chief Young Master (by the way, why should we call Zi Yang the eldest son? Older and younger are relative, since he is an only son, there is no need to add a long word to distinguish, just call him Young Master), he has always adhered to his mission and responsibility, thinking about Liuyun County and thinking about the world. "Every flower, every grass, every insect, every bird, those ordinary living people inside and outside the mirror, are the meaning of what we do." So it doesn't matter if we sacrifice ourselves. Alas, I don't have much love. All I want in life is to enjoy myself in my own little world. I don't bother others, and others don't bother me. But I respect, love and pity people like Zi Yang. Ziyang suffered in the real world, and he also suffered when he was reborn in the water mirror. Why did he still remember the last life when he was reborn? Two similar but different parallel worlds were intertwined. His memory was chaotic, his thinking was chaotic, and he was trapped in a maze. Even if he was me, I would go crazy. The head master said that the moment the soul enters the mirror, it will forget the past. Why hasn't Ziyang forgotten? Is it because of his unique Suzaku bloodline? There are still many mysteries about Ziyang that have not been solved. Ziyang's "voice sounded tired and somewhat disheartened," and the shadow guards were "deeply ashamed of the unfinished business." They must not only be working as social animals, but also love this master in their hearts. Zi Yang was a rebellious minister who rebelled against the imperial court and used forbidden magic to summon the Suzaku, but the head master still opened the Jian Mu Bao Room to save Zi Yang. Ziyang was very popular among his classmates when he was in Shangxiao Peak. Ziyangszd has a very high personality charm. Who doesn't love this beautiful woman who looks cold on the outside but actually treats you well silently? When he was practicing outside, he would use the spirit control technique to warm Lu Jing's fire. He would tell Lu Jing in other ways that there is no prison in the world. He would show disdain but actually just wanted to give Lu Jing medicine quietly. He would take the initiative to kiss Lu Jing but then feel shy after kissing him. He would ask Senior Brother Cui where he is from in advance so that he can prepare meals that suit his taste... Although Zi Yang is objectively so bitter, he is really gentle and gentle in his heart. I was moved by Zi Yang's reason for rejecting Lu Jing. Some discordant positions are nothing and can be overcome, but the destiny of eternal life cannot be overcome. "In order to avoid the end of everything, you rejected all the beginnings." Ziyang was not afraid that he would be sad after the end. After death, he was just a handful of loess. How could he be conscious? If he chooses to be with Lu Jing, Zi Yang can enjoy the joy of life, but Lu Jing will have to bear more pain. The poem Zi Yang used is also my favorite in the Book of Songs! The feathers of mayflies, the clothes are beautiful; the worry in my heart is where I am. Why did Lu Jing fall asleep to the sound of the piano? This is completely answerable! There is a sentence in "Selected Love Letters of Zhu Shenghao" that can give a perfect answer, "Because we and the people we love will break up one day, so we must love each other as much as possible while we are still together. Although our love cannot be extended to eternity, it can be expanded to infinity." Just live in the present and work hard to love. And you can use another poem "Gesheng" in "The Book of Songs"! "The kudzu grows in Mengchu, and the twigs grow in the wild. When I die here, who will be with me? I am alone? The kudzu grows in the thorns, and the twigs are vines in the field. I will die here, who will be with me? I will rest alone? The corner pillow is bright, and the brocade quilt will be rotten. If I die here, who will be with me? Dudan? On a summer day, on a winter night. After a hundred years, I will return to my home." On a winter night, on a summer day, after a hundred years, you return to your home. "You take the first step, and I will follow you and accompany you after many years. What else?" The main perspective of this article is Lu Jing. The character of Lu Jing is very pure and does not require much to stand up. But Zi Yang is a very complicated person, while Xi Jing yearns to experience more different customs. She is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. She is not a flower of the high mountains who stays away from things. Although she is almost always calm, rational and restrained, she is also arrogant and coquettish (the small work is joyful, Zi Yang is so cute when doing it, my heart melts when she acts coquettishly), and has a heroic demeanor. When I feel angry, there are moments of grievance and clinginess (wuwuwu, it's so cute that I unconsciously want to hug him after falling asleep. The curled up sleeping position like a baby before was so distressing. In fact, Ziyang is quite fragile), and I also feel dirty (wuwuwu, I feel so loving and want to hold him in my arms, kiss and comfort him, and tell him that he is the best person in the world). What impresses me so much about Zi Yang is his contradictions, especially the fact that he is both strong and weak at the same time. Strong but physically weak, resolute and indestructible but in a mental predicament, woo woo woo, his strength and weakness excites me, and being both strong and weak almost charms me. Ziyang is "the most outstanding disciple of the Medicine Sect and an extremely skilled spiritual master", but he is physically weak. The core of the plot is Zi Yang. The structure of this article is very large, but it stops abruptly and many things are not unfolded. Therefore, the character of Zi Yang is not very complete, and there is a slight sense of fragmentation in some places. If it is completely written, I believe that the fragmentation will only be vivid and three-dimensional. What a shame. In the world in the mirror, Cai Mo is the spirit of the mirror. He reads so many Fengyue articles because he is interested in people and brings Lu Jing and Zi Yang together. What is Cai Mo in the world outside the mirror? Why bring two people together? According to Caimo and Ziyang, the previous head masters of Shangxiao Peak were the ones responsible for planting building trees, and the head master traveled around for 360 days a year. Was he looking for materials needed for the growth of building trees? Isn't the leader responsible for other affairs of the sect? What should I do if there is something in the sect that I want to contact the leader (for example, Lu Jing wanted to contact the leader)? Previously, Ziyang distributed ruby wind chimes in Liuyun County. What was their use? Resurrecting the Inexhaustible Book will not necessarily destroy the water mirror. What will the Inexhaustible Book do after being resurrected? Doing evil in the real world? What is the connection and relationship between the world in the mirror and the world outside the mirror? If it is basically a re-enactment with only minor differences, such as Zi Yang turning around at a node in his destiny, then why is there no Lu Jing in the Mirror World? Ningguo doesn't have that young master. And I feel that Mrs. Liuyunhou in the mirror world is very different from the world outside the mirror. The lady in the mirror is a very typical witch, but she also loves her children very much and is willing to die for them. What kind of existence is Mrs. Liuyunhou in the world outside the mirror? For the sake of both Ziyang and her? Ziyang's parents have conflicting positions. Whose side does his mother stand on and what did she do? When Ziyang mentioned his mother, he said, "My mother has a strict temperament, which is really a pity for me..." He felt that Mrs. Liuyun was not simple. What kind of Yan Yi is Yan Yi, and what kind of regret has caused Zi Yang? A person is the child of his parents, not a child who jumped out of a stone. It has both genetic influence and nurture. Understanding a person's parents is of great help to understanding him. There are also some descriptions of Ziyang's father, who is vaguely an elegant military commander and a father who loves his children very much, but Ziyang's mother is too mysterious, which is a pity. What does the final ending mean? Why was Ziyang resurrected instead of Wujinshu, and what about Jiang Xue and Li Miao? In the end, were Zi Yang and Lu Jing inside or outside the mirror? How could Lu Jing convince his parents to allow him and Zi Yang to stay together? Finally, I look forward to my wife's next book!
Good! So cute hahaha
Very nice! It's just that the ending is a bit rushed and the ending was caught off guard 555
I actually saw the ending in one go. Thank you, dear, for letting me meet this couple~ I like it very much, but it's a bit short, I haven't seen enough yet~ Mmm~ Looking forward to the next work~
This pairing really works~ I like the emotional line so much