Because people keep asking, "Would you be willing...?" "Would you be willing...?" "Would you be willing...?"
Gloveria can only keep saying:
"I wouldn't."
"I'm not willing."
"I really don't want to."
I sang life's praises, and life gave me a colorful response.
While reviewing the plot of the first few chapters, I thought of Rickshaw Boy, so that's how I came up with the title.
The Supernatural Universe has always been the domain of wish-fulfillment stories. I hope this one can gradually become just as satisfying.
The characterizations are mainly based on the movies. The comics are too heavy, so I can't really have fun with them. (Besides, I can't keep up with them.)
I wrote this before my Code Geass fanfic. If you can read both, I'd love to hear comparative comments. Feel free to say that it was stupid of me to change to that style later...
If anything bothers you or disappoints you, please say so frankly. Don't rush to hit the X. Give me a good scolding before you go, dear reader!
As far as my role as a reader is concerned, I think Lelouch's chapter reads more smoothly, while this one feels too rushed and too compact, making it uncomfortable to read. I still think that as long as the logic of the text is clear and reasonable, the characters are not broken, and the connections are appropriate, then writing according to your own ideas is the smoothest. After you write it, it will read smoothly and readers will not be any worse off. There are so many primary school students in Jinjiang who have written hundreds of chapters of "brainless and idiotic Mary Su Beng" despite being scolded. Most of them don't know that they continue to write when they are attacked by life. Looking at the core of the style in the later and earlier stages, to be honest, it has not changed much. The writing style and cohesion have improved. I can find some reasons, but the overall appearance has improved and is pleasing to the eye, and I have gradually developed it. I don't think it's practical to practice online writing by yourself or just listening to one person's opinion. It's written for many people to read, not just for a certain type of people (of course, those who purely entertain themselves and express themselves are not included in this). After all, the website is for everyone. If you think it makes sense after reading the comments, accept what you don't agree with and stick to yourself. There must be a center for many people, and of course the author himself is the main one. If you want to improve your level or change your style, just find corresponding articles and books to read more and experience more, because everyone has different feelings, and it is not good to deny yourself completely because the boss said something bad. Readers are not his clones. Even if the books you two write have the same subject, the same event, the same character, they may not necessarily have the same idea, angle, and style. It is normal to have differences in expression, just listen to part of it.
Will there be more updates in the future (?_?) It's nice to say
Nice!!! Please update
It really turned into a fish. I thought it was an adjective before. Read one more chapter and go to sleep, good night
My first reaction was that for a child of the God of Wealth to be so miserable, am I going off topic (⌒▽⌒) I'll take the first place first, and I'll watch the rest after I wake up ^_^