The Rebellious Disciple

The extra chapter is very poorly written and the male protagonist looks disgusting, but I don't know where the whole story went. Why is it written like this when it's a good setting?

It looks great in the front, but it's a pity that it's not unfolded in the back.

I always feel like it's not over yet! What's going on?

I feel that the whole novel is like two different people. The front is quite strong, but the back is a little OOC. The layout has become smaller and a bit childish. The details are not developed and it is abrupt, like a forced romance line and a forced ending. It is a pity. It would be good if the author wrote a single protagonist in the conspiracy genre or a group portrait with less emotional lines.

Alas alas? No? Hmm

There is such a sect with many disciples, all of whom worship God every day and yearn to be called gods. The gods in the sect are also really powerful. They let the king of hell control the bull-headed horse face, and the bull-headed horse face control the little devil. The little devils were naturally obedient and could not make any waves. There is an exception. She was obviously a little devil, but she didn't dare to say anything. The king of hell in each hospital complained that she had a headache. The gods saw her, but they couldn't come up with a good way to deal with her. This person, three belts, lives in the North Courtyard, and his name is Changyun. She is a well-deserved senior sister. No one knows how many years she has been in the Beiyuan. They only know that no one in the Beiyuan dares to offend her, and under her leadership, no one dares to bully the outer disciples of the Beiyuan with low cultivation levels. It is said that Changyun is cold and cruel, and that Changyun is arrogant, and that Changyun is moody and difficult to deal with, but these are just Changyun in the eyes of others. Gu Yu said that Changyun was indeed cruel and cruel, especially when he knocked him unconscious and took him away; he was indeed arrogant. Everyone in the sect had always wanted to change his name, but she refused to change it no matter how shameful they were; he was even more moody and difficult to deal with. Even if he was her male lead, he could only occupy a small part of her life. For the sake of the big plan, she would throw him away at any time, and she herself would run away at any time. Even so, she is still Changyun and has never changed. Changyun has been in a rebellious stage for the first half of his life and has never grown up. What she wanted to prove when she later frightened people in the martial arts world was no different from what she wanted to prove when she was a weakling. She wants to prove that she is a woman. She is a woman who stands at the top of the martial arts world. No matter living or dead, they will be overwhelmed by her. Women can and should be equal to men, and even if they are stronger than men, they should get all the honors that men can have. But Gu Yu didn't know this at the beginning. Maybe Gu Yu has always been a rookie in Changyun's eyes. From a rookie who works harder than others but is full of calculations, has a blood feud, and thinks he can bring down the "gods" step by step, but is just wishful thinking and overestimates his capabilities, he has become a rookie who works harder than others and always wants to challenge his own authority and fight for himself. She couldn't bear to hurt his self-esteem and kept giving in, but he kept chasing after her. Later, she became a rookie who aroused her interest because she was too diligent and hardworking, and she couldn't help but pull him off the pirate ship with a bright future, and he had no choice but to give in. At the end of the story, has Gu Yu changed? Changed, under Changyun's blow, he felt more and more that there was a world outside the world, there were people outside the world, and he was just a little rookie. And Changyun is his favorite vegetable. Has Changyun changed? Nothing has changed. She proved what she wanted to prove, but when she thought about it, she felt that it was just that. It was really cold at high places, and being worshiped as a god in a large sect was far less comfortable than being the owner of an unknown small sect, let alone an unknown sect leader. She once wanted power, fame, gold, silver, flattery, and all the things men in the world pursue, except beauty. But after getting it, she knew, ah, it turns out she doesn't need these. Having it is not the icing on the cake, and it doesn't matter if it is gone. So did her disciples. Rather than becoming famous heroes in the martial arts world, they prefer to fight over disagreements, poison all the edible dishes, and smash all the usable bowls and chopsticks. She always races against time to eat like a vicious dog in order not to starve to death. As their sect leader, it's really a headache to think about. But who were her disciples? One has a martial arts look, is a troublemaker, and is always regarded as the leader of the sect, stealing her limelight with a scarred face and a bad temper. The other has a bad temper but insists on practicing swordsmanship for N and a half years. She is good at acting, pretending to be innocent, and making peace with people (singing, dancing, ahem) (cough) a newbie, a notorious playboy with a suspected double personality, who was applauded by the people in the city when he left, and a dwarf assassin who wandered into evil ways at a young age and never returned. With these few people, it is really difficult to recruit new people. In this world, it is difficult to meet people with similar temperaments. What's more, for other people in the martial arts world, no matter how good their tempers are, their lives are still important. It's simply terrifying that these people can be so cruel to their own people. Therefore, the story of Changyun begins with the senior sister who is a rookie in the outer sect, leading four disciples who all look alike, but are actually so bad that they are so bad that they poison each other. Half a lifetime of chaos and bloodshed, but in the end it was nothing more than this. No matter how much grudges and hatreds you have, they are nothing compared to the company of the people around you. Take one step forward and there will be no recovery; Take a step back and the sky will be brighter. They have not forgotten their persistence, but they have learned to love themselves and love life.

Is this the end??? It feels a bit anticlimactic...

There should be more! What about the male protagonist's deep hatred? And the heroine's goal? How can I let go of everything?

So beautiful!!!!!! I love both the male and female protagonists! Maoer Fu Yaomen also likes it very much! The master also likes it very much! Great writing!

Come on!!! You are really good!!!