Forbidden Realm [Full-Dive Online Game]
禁界[全息网游]
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 731k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
131Chapters
3.1kFavorites
6.0Score
2.6kNutrient gifts
13.1kClicks per chapter
1kComments
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Reader comments 45
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Good guy, I jumped from chapter 100 to the end, but it's still a bad ending, but it's really good. The subject matter is great, but the writing is crappy.
The layout is grand, but the writing falls apart later on. As soon as the writing is turned, such a super god system was created by one person, which makes it inconsistent. At the same time, the layout plummets, there is too much popular science, it is full of repetitive nonsense, over and over again, it is tiring, there are too many bugs, and there are too many hidden lines at all. Revealing these one by one, the author's extraordinary imagination and so much energy only gave me the feeling of fast forwarding through the text and money wasted. I suggest you overhaul it, or revise the outline, and just keep the framework and rewrite it. This is supposed to be a sacred text, in terms of imagination and settings.
To be honest, the more I write, the more boring and messy it becomes. There are a lot of foreshadowings that I don't understand. In fact, there is no mess at all. If you want to write about infrastructure collection, write it seriously. I don't understand what the hell you added a lot of messy power battles and messy things. What is the heroine's ability to write about sweet feelings without you? I don't know why. It's the one I regret most this year.
I thought it would take a long time to finish. I didn't expect it to be over. I haven't read it yet, but I feel like the space behind it isn't enough to cover what I said earlier. I really like some of the prop settings in this article, they are quite innovative. However, there are still some disappointments in the plot description.
Come on, keep writing till the end and support you
Come on, wait for you to have more, I will continue to chase, don't give up
Come on (???_??)?, I'm waiting for you to finish revising the article, and then I'll read it again
When will the stable update be released?
The fondant is very beautiful, will you find a candy house later?
I don't want Song Zhixu to be the male protagonist, he is not a good match for the female protagonist