May You Survive Graduation Day

I feel like the characters are all well written, not one-sided, but very three-dimensional. Basically everyone has a story. If the author can write a medium-length novel and write a more complete plot, as well as Shou's character transformation process, I think it will definitely not be a problem to be on the list.

After reading it, I felt that the overall writing rhythm was okay, and the ending was fast. Perhaps because the setting was too high-level, the final writing did not continue the previous expression. In addition, I understand that this is a pure fantasy novel, and it seems that there should be no other ideas to be expressed at the end other than the question of whether personality can be easily erased. But the previous article established Xiao's identity as a good person and Xiu's identity as a pervert. Could it be possible to spend more time describing the conflict between three views? Xiu likes to see heroes fall off the altar in embarrassment. Like many people, he disdains kindness but accepts it calmly. The explanation given in the article for Xiu's change is that people have empathy but don't think about it. I think about Xiao's nine years, shouldn't there also be a struggle between good guys and bad guys? One day, he suddenly thought about the problem of those who died. Why didn't he doubt himself a little when everyone was separated from his relatives? Because judging from Xiao's dependence on Xiu later, Xiao should not be considered a very determined person without relying on the outside mind. I feel that regarding this point, maybe I prefer to read descriptions of human nature. I hope that the novels I read will be written by different authors with their own opinions. There is no meaning in it, I just suddenly wanted to think about it.

I feel that the setting of the article is very good and the plot is okay. My wife's writing is good and fluent. The shortcoming is that I feel that some things are not explained well and the ending is rather confusing (?). The appearance of the villain feels a bit too abrupt, but it is not too disturbing. All in all, this article is quite interesting.

Alas, I don't know why I'm a little upset. Maybe I secretly read an entire article during the study process, which triggered my thinking. Now I can't learn anymore. QAQ To summarize, anything you do while studying is fun.

With all due respect, some parts of this article are really poorly written. For example, there was not much foreshadowing in the early stages of the appearance of the mastermind behind the scenes, as if he just appeared out of nowhere. . . And since you set up so many characters, you should be responsible for them, and you didn't make it clear what happened to them. Alas, the male protagonists have very few emotional scenes, and it is not clear whether they return to their original world in the ending (still incomprehensible (+_+)). The logic is seriously flawed!

Emm... Don't get swallowed again Six consciousnesses: eye consciousness, ear consciousness, nose consciousness, tongue consciousness, body consciousness, consciousness. Together with the six roots and six dusts, they are collectively called the Eighteen Realms.

Finished spreading flowers ~ It's been a long time since I've seen such an endless stream of content that satisfies my appetite. It just feels like some things have been brushed off in one stroke. It would be nice if I could write it a little thinner and longer.

Bro, I really like this book, it would be great if there were more (wipe away tears)

To be honest, I thought it was well written, but I was confused by it.

The writing is so good, the setting is also very good, I cried, I cried