I Deliver Takeout in the Underworld

People who don't eat cilantro or onions will be really upset when they see cilantro and onions on food that has been specially ordered not to be put on. The effort of picking it out alone is enough for me to eat two meals.

I feel that the portrayal of the heroine is too thin. It just focuses on her carefree character, but the writing is a bit overdone. I think a good character should have some attractive parts, but there are very few things that attract me about the heroine. Most of the motivation for reading this article is the attraction of the subject matter, and I haven't watched BG for a long time. I just read an article. The author himself said that the character of the heroine is that of a common citizen, but for example, even if she is a certain kind of common citizen, a good character still has certain shining points, such as emphasizing love and righteousness, being resourceful, and being able to take advantage of people's hearts. These seemingly cool points are the factors that embellish the background of a character who is not pleasing to the common people, so that the protagonist can be separated from the ordinary philistine common people group and reflect a different place. The same goes for female characters. Sister Baoer in "Under One Person" is also a common citizen. But after giving her the characteristic of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, she has achieved a part of the fun that the public likes to watch. Coupled with other character creations, she is also distinguished from ordinary common people. However, there is almost nothing interesting about the character of the heroine. The factor that separates her from the common people in the article is the peculiarity of her physique. However, in fact, such settings are everywhere. Without a good character design, it is difficult to make this character likeable. The author's way of portraying the character of the common people ignores many character shaping that should be interspersed, making the article unreasonable. For example, the heroine is a person who can't make ends meet and can't afford the rent. After finding a job delivering food, she will definitely cherish it. In the article, the heroine cares about the ratings, which shows that she cherishes the hard-earned work, but she is fascinated by the boss's attitude... Not to mention the specific politeness issues, she yelled at the boss, and then the tone was also very casual. Is it really okay? ... If you had a petty boss, not to mention dismissal, it would be too much for you to wear small shoes. You have just joined the job and you are not familiar with the boss. You should be more respectful, but you should be polite no matter what you say. Furthermore, I clearly knew that I was going to the underworld to deliver food, but I didn't ask about the prohibited items in advance. Is the heroine really watching too few horror movies to not be scared... But speaking of it, no one else can enter in the early morning. Although this point is unreasonable, it is mainly a foreshadowing of the heroine's uniqueness, which is understandable. Furthermore, the heroine was caught early in the morning, which shows that she is still very afraid of this, so why didn't you ask clearly in advance? Isn't this trying to kill yourself... This plot may be to draw out Chen Chen, but there is obviously a better way to write it, so it seems that the heroine is unreasonable and careless, and also yells at the boss as mentioned before As for the intersection with the male protagonist, if the male protagonist did not save her because of the jade pendant, a lot of the plot would be far-fetched. I hope that the identity of the female protagonist in future plots can make up for this far-fetched... Furthermore, bb, one or two sentences, the free chapters in front of Jinjiang are for testing the waters. The author should be able to portray simple characters in the first twenty chapters, construct a similar world view, introduce one or two distinctive characters, reflect the characteristics of the writing style, lead or allow the male and female protagonists to intersect, and then It happens that you are stuck in the main plot after entering Chapter V, which will attract people to read on, instead of leaving after reading the previous free chapters. However, in these twenty chapters, I only saw the character of the heroine, which the author repeatedly wanted to emphasize, being carefree and a common man, and a little bit of love for money, but there was no shining point in her character. There are a lot of articles like this in Jinjiang. Most of the supernatural-themed articles are only enough to point out character events in the free chapter. Some of the articles also have a mysterious description of the protagonist's identity. This is particularly unacceptable to me, because not only did I not see what I wanted, but I was filled with annoying things. If the identity is not rounded out later, then the quality of the entire article will be very suffocating. There are 36 non-V chapters in this article. It can be roughly seen that after the 30th chapter, the article has gradually improved, but the character description of the heroine is still very rough. What attracts people to read is the plot and foreshadowing rather than the characters. In this case, once the plot slows down, the article will no longer attract people to read. I still hope the author can improve it.

This heroine is really annoying, she has something wrong with her

This heroine is really annoying, she has something wrong with her

It's gone,,, it's gone,,,, it's gone after waiting for so long,,,, it's so sad, ow ow ow ow? ! ! ! !

This heroine is really good enough. She never looks for reasons from herself when things happen. She deserves it for not being able to find a job before.

This heroine really takes being uneducated as her true character, and she also takes stupidity as a compliment. She has a late takeout delivery but a bad attitude, so why can't she leave a negative review? Yelling and gloating in the hotel? This temperament has suffered a lot in reality. It is really unlikable. By the way, the author's attitude is also very good. If you read the comments below and give your opinions, it is a bad attitude. It is not unreasonable for the characters to reflect the author's three views. There is no need to read it. I have already left [The dog head saves life]

The heroine really has a bad outlook on things. She breaks the rules, takes advantage, is shameless, scolds, shirks responsibility, picks up the slack, and is particularly sneaky. She will do anything for money. I understand the hardships of this industry, but I can't understand the heroine's unscrupulousness. She is late chatting with others on the way to deliver food, harasses Shi Heya who is not a customer, and sneaks into the school by climbing over the wall. I think the author is giving a bad influence to the students. Using such means to get into the school, what about the safety of the students? Schools that do not allow takeout are because the school can take responsibility when food safety issues arise. Even if the food is not delicious, at least it can be trusted. The younger students are not us adults and have low self-control and need protection. If you are a parent, if your child has a problem at school, who should you go to? Even if the students order the takeout, the school is still responsible, not to mention that the heroine harasses the idol for her own customers. If I were on the phone, I would not go downstairs to get it, so I would call the police directly, let alone the front desk who gave her the resident's phone number! ! ! If something goes wrong with people like this, can they be held responsible?

Author, there is something wrong with you stopping here.

Could the heroine be the reincarnation of someone?