Tales of Tawu

Looking forward to it, come on, keep updating more

There is a bug in the plot here. If there is surveillance, why will the male protagonist be tortured?

It's a bit weak, and the sense of connection and substitution seems not as strong as in the previous chapters.

This is another turning point. It feels like starting from changing the map, the character's emotional transition is too fast, but there is no foreshadowing and it feels abrupt.

I feel dizzy in the clouds and fog. My brother and I are so ambitious. Have I thought too much?

What should I say? I suddenly changed the map and there was no explanation in the middle. I felt like... The story was torn apart.

I like the suspenseful part

The people in the institute have incredibly low IQs, it's simply terrifying

The character of the sister is very strange. She was very nice to her sister at first, but when she got here, she suddenly... Doesn't she know that the mortality rate in the institute is high?

I feel like the heroine has too many psychological activities, which makes it look a bit monotonous (?-ω-`)