The Next Suspect [Quick Transmigration]

Although I have collected this article for a long time, I have just finished reading it now. I also like the first two stories the most. They are well described and can be easily understood. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

I won't say anything more. I'll give you a final shout-out. I hope the book review will be read.

Okay, I stayed up late to finish reading it, and the book review I mentioned before is here. Let me first talk about why it attracts me. You are expressing your own views and opinions. While reading the story, you can feel that there is something in it. It's quite rare in online articles. After seeing too much of the assembly line on their homepage, I honestly don't want to open Jinjiang if I don't have much to do. (Fortunately, after reading this book, my time was not wasted) The heroine in the first story is very heartbreaking. I have always felt that reading is to see the world through another person's eyes, and the world seen through her eyes is too real and too cruel. I have never had a similar experience, but I feel the same way. I like the first two stories the most, let's compare them. The second story is less realistic than the first story, but the depressing atmosphere is well created, and there are also some dark tones inherited from the first story. I like these two stories better because they are more... Exquisite? In the next few stories, the tone is obviously much brighter. One is because I focus on the male protagonist and write about the love between two people. The other is because I guess it needs to be updated on time. The dark tone of the first and second stories is based on reality. If it is fiction itself and written quickly, it may indeed be... Less heavy (I guess because there is no complexity of reality). (Also, maybe you have taken the initiative to adjust the tone, right?) The story is a good one. Compared with other articles, the heaviness at the beginning may not be easy to hook people. If the tone is not changed and more suspense is left, the data should be better. (Speaking from years of experience reading big guys' online articles) Finally, I would like to make a few suggestions. One is that the transition of the tone before and after can be better. (There are more three people in the latter part, and the perspective of writing is far away, and the sense of substitution is not strong, so it is very flat.) I especially like the angle of the first and second chapters. It is very intuitive and the emotions are in the environment (hahaha, reading comprehension), but this kind of description rarely appears in the latter part, which is a pity. If different stages are written in this way, the contrast effect should be very good. The image of the other male protagonist, hahahahahaha, feels a bit broken in a few places in the middle (the last bit of doomsday), and it always feels like a tool. (I don't even know this kid, how can I fall in love with him.) I think the male protagonist can be a little more in-depth. There are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand people. Aesthetics is a very subjective thing, so it's just my opinion. I hope it can be helpful. Writing so much is just to encourage you. I read it very seriously! Thanks again for this book, it's really good! Write slowly, come on!

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That's right! Happy New Year Hahahahahahahaha

Ah ah ah, I really won't go with you in the next book. I just watched Human World and I felt a little emotional. I really plan to change my mind and study hard. Come on, love you : D Wanted object: The author Da Da. Reason for Wanted: Not transforming into a typewriter. Wanted Bounty:. Stop being silly and transform quickly.

A wonderful pen brings flowers, give one as a reward!

A wonderful pen brings flowers, give one as a reward!

In fact, I have read every chapter that is updated every day, but I have not commented. Fortunately, the author did not abandon the article.

I've finished spreading flowers, so I'll continue to work hard on the next one! Tuhao Tuhao, did you drop this?