Special Squad: Lemon Fragrance

Sorry, the whole article is written in a novice way. Maybe it's because I'm a newbie. Trainers in the army are very serious things. Keep up the good work.

It looks good, but the pace is a bit fast.

You might as well put it all in one chapter.

Please put the quotation marks, otherwise it will be boring to watch.

It seems good! Taken away. Come on

But it's still compensation~

It's a bit shocking, this ending. I don't know how to say it. RZ~ Is this style of ending popular recently~

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The paragraphs are not very good and the characters are too big, which visually makes it feel like a lot!

The author has something to say: I am a military novice. I have completed the appraisal. She's quite a novice... Identification completed