
A Hundred Idols at My Command
手下爱豆一百个
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 318k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
85Chapters
2.6kFavorites
8.6Score
1.2kNutrient gifts
12.3kClicks per chapter
765Comments
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Reader comments 49
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Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh dbq!!!! I really thought that this movie was going to be written in such a way that life and death cannot be left in the hands of the male protagonist. Ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah but it did not work out!!!!!!!!!!!
How can I not get married and have a little dragon?!!! Speaking of which, is the Civil Affairs Bureau useful? Do you want to make an oath to heaven?
I'm speechless. Think about it, how could a mayor handle such a supernatural event in reality? And remind me, a city is the leader, but the author may only be in high school.
To be honest, I think this is quite a pity. At the beginning, I felt that the setting was okay. After reading the early stage, I felt that it was a genre that readers would like and it was explosive. After reading the full text, I felt that there was very little content that was really interesting. It was a pity that there was no more development or arrangement of the narrative sequence. Personally, I think the highlight is the show in which my subordinates participate. Everyone likes to watch it: characters with extraordinary talents shine with their abilities. The audience will blow rainbow farts when the show is broadcast. From time to time, some trolling comments and slaps in the face will be added (whether it is live or recorded or in other forms). It is well written, the supporting characters are likeable, and readers are also happy to watch it. But first of all, the comments such as barrage were delayed during the filming of the show and could not give immediate reactions, which was not "cool" enough in itself. In addition, this part of the content was not developed in detail later, and instead focused more on the protagonist's love and the serious but unattractive main plot, which was almost not dealt with. It's not that the protagonist's relationship cannot be written, but the setting of a natural secret love for each other lacks twists and turns. The emotional scene is the main drama and to be honest, it is not written enough to attract people to keep watching. So I think it's a pity, the demon religion and the shi body are really good-looking. I hope the author can keep trying and make progress, and finally find a suitable writing rhythm.
I have been following the author's articles for a long time, and I feel that these articles all have one problem: setting. In fact, almost all the characters appearing in the article can stand alone in terms of setting, but the problem is that the author likes every character in the novel, so the length of the description is somewhat out of focus. It's not that you can't have multiple roles, but once various roles require a lot of effort to describe, the main line of description will easily be distorted. If the article is not long enough, it will be too broad and difficult to end, resulting in an anticlimactic end. Each character has its own cuteness, but for readers, a suitable angle is needed to smoothly understand the story, which requires the author to make painful choices. The above are purely personal thoughts. I hope it will be helpful to the author. Please forgive me if any offense is caused.
... What's going on with your dragon clan? S&M fanatic?!
". You are much more powerful as a mountain spirit." This is a big bug for the author~ You are much more powerful than the mountain spirit
The "object" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ Opponent
I really can't understand this hair color
Changjiang International 18th floor:?