First-Grade Teacher [Interstellar]

This attack is really pitiful. I only caught up with the person at the end. It's promising╭(╯^╰)╮

This year's attack was not very good. It was only in the finale that I caught up with the opponent.

Woohoo, why does it have to end? Will there be a continuation in the next book? Really good looking.

I want to see Jealousy, and the scenes I agreed to are not overwritten.

Gone? Just gone? Not enough??

First of all, you have to portray Shou as a free-spirited, unrestrained, and emotionally ignorant person. But what makes me feel a little disconnected is why Mao Shou was softened so quickly? You are tempted too quickly, Shou was a demon king in his previous life, and there must be no shortage of people like Gong. Could it be that he was moved just because Gong is soft and cute? But it was only in the last chapter that Gong caught up with Shou, even after three years. I couldn't understand the emotional line. There is also the characterization of Gong. I can accept jealousy, but I can't stand being jealous randomly, especially the many scenes where he is jealous of students. It is obvious that the student's feelings for Shou are not love, and he doesn't even do anything. Gong gets jealous, which makes me feel embarrassed. Then when I was writing the competition, I didn't even see how they fought, it was over, and I got first place. I felt like this round was just to give someone a blast. These chapters were so boring, without passion, and not very satisfying. The rest of the plot is like a chronicle. I thought that the word count for this kind of subject would not be too low, but it really started to flow later on. I was looking forward to building the city as promised. However, after a few chapters, a federal line was inserted to build the city. I couldn't see it at all. It was passed over in one stroke. It was really a pity. Then there was the fight between the insect queen and the sect. What should have been highlighted was the tacit cooperation between the attacker and the sect, but it turned out to be a shame. The insect queen disappeared all of a sudden, and then I wrote something about Shou giving his backing to Gong, saying that he was particularly trusting, I'm sorry, I didn't see it at all, and Gong became famous because of this incident, and everyone knew him even though he didn't know it at all. This incident was also incredible, as if he wanted to arrange an opportunity for Gong to make a name for himself, so that the CP could easily fight, but he couldn't find it, so he just pinched it and stuffed it in. It was awkward for me to write about my life experience when I learned about it, so I pulled hard and suddenly exploded, which made me stunned. I took Jiancheng in one stroke, then took the spell card, and then revealed my life experience... Can we write a few more words? Why are you in such a hurry? I don't quite understand. There is also a foreshadowing that was not written. Why did Xia come to help you? Who did it because of his instructions? It is not said after the end. If you want to say that there is no emotional line, I can understand it. We are engaged in a career. But in the end, your career is also written like a flowing stream. I really don't know what to say. My favorite is probably the early chapters. The boy with the problem of subjugation is very interesting to watch. The pacing is also very good, not dragging, and the explosion of the vest is quite funny. It would be great if the rhythm in the later chapters is as steady as the previous ones. The subject matter is obviously very interesting, and the strength is there. It is really too hasty. It is a pity. I even think that the main CP is not as good as the secondary CP. I can watch the last save because I want to eat a bite of the secondary CP. The writing style is quite good, not a noob, and it is indeed very enjoyable, and the writing is very enjoyable, but even if I want to study it in detail, the plot behind it also falls apart. Keeping up with the trend of the times, I started with the max level of Shou. In fact, the character of Shou was very good. If it didn't crash, I felt that it probably didn't crash either. It was just weird. It felt like it was a background board in the wide field of view. I really couldn't hit it. The career line of the protagonist in the front was quite exciting, and it was fun to interact with the students. The career line in the back made me sad. I knew it was fun, but when I thought about its irrationality, I couldn't feel happy. Also, the chapters near the finale are broken, and the number of words seems to be very small. I want to see the scene where the students taught by the protagonist fight against other students during the competition. The fight scenes are full. I want to see the battle of wits and courage with the Federation during the city building. Seriously, are the Federation people that stupid? I still want to read... Forget it, I hope that when I meet the author again next time, I can see you making rapid progress.

First of all, you have to portray Shou as a free-spirited, unrestrained, and emotionally ignorant person. But what makes me feel a little disconnected is why Mao Shou was softened so quickly? You are tempted too quickly, Shou was a demon king in his previous life, and there must be no shortage of people like Gong. Could it be that he was moved just because Gong is soft and cute? But it was only in the last chapter that Gong caught up with Shou, even after three years. I couldn't understand the emotional line. There is also the characterization of Gong. I can accept jealousy, but I can't stand being jealous randomly, especially the many scenes where he is jealous of students. It is obvious that the student's feelings for Shou are not love, and he doesn't even do anything. Gong gets jealous, which makes me feel embarrassed. Then when I was writing the competition, I didn't even see how they fought, it was over, and I got first place. I felt like this round was just to give someone a blast. These chapters were so boring, without passion, and not very satisfying. The rest of the plot is like a chronicle. I thought that the word count for this kind of subject would not be too low, but it really started to flow later on. I was looking forward to building the city as promised. However, after a few chapters, a federal line was inserted to build the city. I couldn't see it at all. It was passed over in one stroke. It was really a pity. Then there was the fight between the insect queen and the sect. What should have been highlighted was the tacit cooperation between the attacker and the sect, but it turned out to be a shame. The insect queen disappeared all of a sudden, and then I wrote something about Shou giving his backing to Gong, saying that he was particularly trusting, I'm sorry, I didn't see it at all, and Gong became famous because of this incident, and everyone knew him even though he didn't know it at all. This incident was also incredible, as if he wanted to arrange an opportunity for Gong to make a name for himself, so that the CP could easily fight, but he couldn't find it, so he just pinched it and stuffed it in. It was awkward for me to write about my life experience when I learned about it, so I pulled hard and suddenly exploded, which made me stunned. I took Jiancheng in one stroke, then took the spell card, and then revealed my life experience... Can we write a few more words? Why are you in such a hurry? I don't quite understand. There is also a foreshadowing that was not written. Why did Xia come to help you? Who did it because of his instructions? It is not said after the end. If you want to say that there is no emotional line, I can understand it. We are engaged in a career. But in the end, your career is also written like a flowing stream. I really don't know what to say. My favorite is probably the early chapters. The boy with the problem of subjugation is very interesting to watch. The pacing is also very good, not dragging, and the explosion of the vest is quite funny. It would be great if the rhythm in the later chapters is as steady as the previous ones. The subject matter is obviously very interesting, and the strength is there. It is really too hasty. It is a pity. I even think that the main CP is not as good as the secondary CP. I can watch the last save because I want to eat a bite of the secondary CP.

Generally speaking, it's okay, but there is one hole that has not been filled. Xia Dong said before that he took an order to protect Ming Yang, but who would spend money to protect him at that time? Even if he only survives for a month, it is considered protection, but he has never mentioned it. There is also the school director who saw something at first glance, but then he didn't mention him at all. If there is really nothing, there is no need. Spending this little ink to write about the director's demeanor, although it is all in the past tense, is really harmless, but it is really uncomfortable to leave such a trap, and Gong is really stupid and childish, and the obsession with Jiutian is actually very embarrassing. It is undoubtedly a clear white text, and there are no other intolerable major problems. Overall, it can be read

It's over, it's over.

Is there any extra? Is there any extra? ? ? ! ? ! I want to see it! ! ! ! ! ! !