The Deadly Round Table

This book is okay. I still like it very much about the early stage. What follows is a very subjective opinion and pure speculation. I think the story of writing this article has undergone major changes, which resulted in a very strange rhythm in the later period. For example, two or three copies were deleted and then part of the outline was put up in order to catch up with the progress. As a result, the character of Gong was not fully fleshed out. It's not even as rich as Zuo's character. In fact, some people have always said that the main plot is a bit distorted. I think Zuo's character is very normal, and the relationship between him and Jiang is also normal. It just lacks the foreshadowing of the confrontation. This can be highlighted by writing a few more copies. At the end of the game, it felt that the relationship between Jiang and Zuo was rushed, resulting in a top-heavy feeling. Overall, it's pretty good, DaDa is still very powerful. These are just some small suggestions. Of course, the article has been completed for a long time. DaDa must be a lot more mature now. I confess, I still like the copy.

Although the presence of the male protagonist is indeed not that strong, it is rare for the male protagonist to die immediately upon appearance, so the setting is still good! I bought the first two physical copies and haven't waited for the third one. I hope to buy Qi Ba [Star Eyes]

Some individuals' subjective understanding of the text is purely subjective and irrational. Watch carefully. If you want to skip watching, if you can't stand it, just skip to the ending. (I've read a lot, maybe one or two copies are still missing) (I saw the copy of Zuo Die How should I put it, my mood is a bit complicated. The writing in the previous copy was okay, but it also tortured me, so when it ended with a big he, it felt a bit unhandled and a bit fragmented. (Of course I like big he, but I think I should be able to handle it a little better. (I am not providing writing guidance, just feel free to bb But if it weren't for he, I wouldn't be able to stand it anymore. Therefore, it is difficult to evaluate. The ending of Infinite Streaming is quite difficult to write. Even after watching it a lot, I feel like the ending is not very satisfying. I don't think it's okay to look at him who is too realistic, but I think he's already a bit be. I don't think it's okay to be sweet and big, and I don't think it's okay to directly abuse my be. I don't know what I want to express, but I have mixed feelings. When Zuo died, that was the peak of my impression of him. Later, when he was resurrected, en was fine, but (I don't know what ww was, but it was a bit like a red rose that turned gray after being left for a long time). My personal understanding earlier was that Zuo had a good impression of Shou, and I didn't say that I wanted to kowtow. It was just my personal understanding (you can't stop me from liking reading and understanding). Although the author didn't mean this, what I wrote earlier made me feel a little bit, but not much, and I quickly lost it. I don't know what I want to express. I just want to write something. That's it. I'll add it when I have some insights.

The second brush is over. This book is really cold and no one recommends it. Although there are some flaws, the flaws are not hidden. So the author hasn't updated anymore, it's already 2024.

Although this book is cold, happy New Year's Eve!

Chen Jiang's emotional line is already complete, but it feels like he was forced to do something by Zuo. Why is the friendship line designed so much like love? Even when Zuo died, some people thought that Jiang was in love with someone else. Even the extra story didn't mention Chen Jiang's relationship. Every detail, their childhood sweethearts, their visit to Chen's mother, and even Chen's reaction to Chen's father's death were all written with restraint. Well-written, it can obviously make Chen more vivid, but in short, the portrayal of Chen after Zuo's death is very disappointing.

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I feel like the copy is flawed, but the emotional line is great

I have a question. After the round table game regains its power, will it continue to recruit people to play death games... (I skipped a bit at the end of the copy, wondering if I missed this explanation). It's not that I have any advice, but if I don't understand the problem clearly, I will really not be able to sleep (I have been up all night... Sad)

Finished spreading flowers, thank you for accompanying me! 2023.11.19 Group photo