That's right, this is the story I rewrote three times and still wasn't satisfied with. I refuse to believe I can't finish it in this lifetime.
I'll finish it when I finish it.
Original blurb:
A mysterious swordsman with peerless swordsmanship flies on his sword, traveling thousands of miles in an instant. A mysterious young woman, newly embarked on her journey through the martial world, signs a ten-year employment contract with him for ten thousand taels of silver. Wherever she wants to go, will he follow?
Liu Yu'er and Jian Lihe. Dual leads, friendship-focused, not a romantic pairing.
Theme: May friendship last forever.
I really like the beginning of the scene where Zhu Jiu washes his face by the river. I thought Zhu Jiu was a powerful character, but I didn't expect him to be killed by the boy all at once. What made me even more unexpected was that there was another little girl who appeared in the back and used a trick to hire the boy as a bodyguard. It was really a chain of events. This beginning is very attractive and makes people want to continue watching.