A girl who loves reading Harry Potter makes a wish on her twentieth birthday: she wants to enter the world of Harry Potter and change the fates of those less fortunate. Her wish comes true, and she is born into a powerful family. The family is blessed by phoenixes. Though its numbers are few, every direct descendant is born with a phoenix. They are exceptionally gifted in magic, and the heroine is the most powerful of all time. Her phoenix is the most powerful, too. But her immense magical power has left her frail since birth. To protect her life, her family sealed away her magic. If she wants to master her incredible power, she will have to pay a very great price. Her journey through the magical world begins.
Even a teacher who was going to teach me Defense Against the Dark Arts at Hogwarts came over to shake my hand.
It seems that Quirrell can't touch Harry? Or are you not possessed yet?
Very good~~Why is it no longer available?
Big update!!
I agree that the viewing angle is a bit confusing, but generally it's understandable.
The content of the article is very good! Said very fondly.
Come on
As a diver, I came out to take a dip...
Flipper…
sinking…
A few words floated on the water...
"My support is great every month...
Come on~"
The subject matter is very poor
However, the perspective is too confusing, the first-person and third-person are extremely confusing, and the God's perspective is everywhere.
With his shout that echoed through the sky, the letter in my hand was snatched away by my uncle. He looked at me sarcastically, then shook the letter away with one hand and glanced at it. With just one glance, his face suddenly changed from red to blue, and then from green to black. After a few seconds, his face turned as white as paper.
[The "I" here refers to Harry, but next, a little hint or a change of visual angle is not enough. . . . . ]
Are you happy, Annie? I stroked the phoenix in my arms, and the phoenix gently pecked my hair.
[The "I" here refers to Lilia. Then, again without prompting. . . . . ]
Harry looked at the book list and followed Hagrid into the Broken Ax pub. From the inside, this so-called famous place is really dark and dirty. Several old women were sitting in the corner, drinking sherry from small glasses, and one of them was smoking a long pipe. A little man in a top hat was chatting with a bar owner who had almost no hair and looked like a shriveled walnut. As soon as we entered the door, the chatter suddenly stopped. Everyone here seemed to know Hagrid, they smiled and waved to him. The barkeeper picked up a cup and said, "As usual, Hagrid?"
[Third person perspective. ]
Hagrid's words were not big, but such a light sentence made the originally quiet bar space even more solidified. Everyone stared at me with their eyes wide open, as if they were seeing something incredible.
[First person Harry's point of view. ]
"Welcome," Hagrid smiled mysteriously: "Welcome to Diagon Alley."
At this time, Anne and I also discovered Harry. Anne happily flew towards Harry, and I followed closely. Wherever I went, I caused a huge commotion. After all, phoenixes are not common, and coupled with my beautiful appearance.
Lilia came to her with some panting. It seemed that her body was still too weak.
[There is a strange change here. The previous sentence was clearly from Harry's perspective, but the next sentence immediately changed to Lilia's perspective. It's so tiring to watch like this~~~]
"Hello, Miss Feng... Fengfeisi." Hagrid was a little embarrassed, but he was relieved when he saw Lilia's kind and gentle attitude. The hybrid giant was careless and couldn't see the happy expressions of the two children looking at each other. Harry and Lilia held hands tightly. Although they already knew each other very well, this was the first time they met. Both parties were very happy, especially Harry. Looking at Lilia's thin body, remembering that Lilia suffered from the magic riot for 8 years and endured the pain for so long, deep pity emerged in her heart. This girl suffered much more than herself, and what she gave to herself was also important that she didn't know. If what was most important and desired to Harry before was his parents, now it was Lilia.
"Gringotts has arrived." Hagrid's words interrupted Lilia and I's gaze.
[The same applies here, please fix it. ]
Come on, write hard, and get rid of this confusing perspective.
So few!!!! Updates and updates!!!!
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Come on, come on, it looks good
His fat as a pig cousin beat him again
It's my cousin! ! !
Come on, it's well written.
Even a teacher who was going to teach me Defense Against the Dark Arts at Hogwarts came over to shake my hand. It seems that Quirrell can't touch Harry? Or are you not possessed yet?
Very good~~Why is it no longer available? Big update!!
I agree that the viewing angle is a bit confusing, but generally it's understandable. The content of the article is very good! Said very fondly. Come on
As a diver, I came out to take a dip... Flipper… sinking… A few words floated on the water... "My support is great every month... Come on~"
The subject matter is very poor However, the perspective is too confusing, the first-person and third-person are extremely confusing, and the God's perspective is everywhere. With his shout that echoed through the sky, the letter in my hand was snatched away by my uncle. He looked at me sarcastically, then shook the letter away with one hand and glanced at it. With just one glance, his face suddenly changed from red to blue, and then from green to black. After a few seconds, his face turned as white as paper. [The "I" here refers to Harry, but next, a little hint or a change of visual angle is not enough. . . . . ] Are you happy, Annie? I stroked the phoenix in my arms, and the phoenix gently pecked my hair. [The "I" here refers to Lilia. Then, again without prompting. . . . . ] Harry looked at the book list and followed Hagrid into the Broken Ax pub. From the inside, this so-called famous place is really dark and dirty. Several old women were sitting in the corner, drinking sherry from small glasses, and one of them was smoking a long pipe. A little man in a top hat was chatting with a bar owner who had almost no hair and looked like a shriveled walnut. As soon as we entered the door, the chatter suddenly stopped. Everyone here seemed to know Hagrid, they smiled and waved to him. The barkeeper picked up a cup and said, "As usual, Hagrid?" [Third person perspective. ] Hagrid's words were not big, but such a light sentence made the originally quiet bar space even more solidified. Everyone stared at me with their eyes wide open, as if they were seeing something incredible. [First person Harry's point of view. ] "Welcome," Hagrid smiled mysteriously: "Welcome to Diagon Alley." At this time, Anne and I also discovered Harry. Anne happily flew towards Harry, and I followed closely. Wherever I went, I caused a huge commotion. After all, phoenixes are not common, and coupled with my beautiful appearance. Lilia came to her with some panting. It seemed that her body was still too weak. [There is a strange change here. The previous sentence was clearly from Harry's perspective, but the next sentence immediately changed to Lilia's perspective. It's so tiring to watch like this~~~] "Hello, Miss Feng... Fengfeisi." Hagrid was a little embarrassed, but he was relieved when he saw Lilia's kind and gentle attitude. The hybrid giant was careless and couldn't see the happy expressions of the two children looking at each other. Harry and Lilia held hands tightly. Although they already knew each other very well, this was the first time they met. Both parties were very happy, especially Harry. Looking at Lilia's thin body, remembering that Lilia suffered from the magic riot for 8 years and endured the pain for so long, deep pity emerged in her heart. This girl suffered much more than herself, and what she gave to herself was also important that she didn't know. If what was most important and desired to Harry before was his parents, now it was Lilia. "Gringotts has arrived." Hagrid's words interrupted Lilia and I's gaze. [The same applies here, please fix it. ] Come on, write hard, and get rid of this confusing perspective.
So few!!!! Updates and updates!!!!
Great update◎●○★№☆☆☆☆☆☆☆□◆◆◇◇◎◎※―¤↑▲□_→●℃&_―♂♂♀♀♂♂♂
Come on, come on, it looks good
His fat as a pig cousin beat him again It's my cousin! ! !