After Killing the Protagonist, I Chose to Reload and Start Over

I'm laughing so hard, succubus

It took me more than a day to read it, and I felt that my wife's writing style was very solid, as solid as rice. There was no overstuffing or the immature feeling of having to finish the subject, predicate, and object of a sentence, which made people feel at ease. I was a little confused when I saw the subscription location. First, it was a matter of perspective. I understand that my wife wanted to tell a multi-line narrative, but there was no connection between the perspectives. I was stunned for a moment when I saw another person's name. I thought that the two lines were actually in the same scene because they were about to meet in a teleportation formation or a secret passage, so I changed the scene and told another person. Furthermore, when my wife switches scenes, she likes to write directly to the next action in this line, which also made me a little confused about the timeline and I couldn't tell who was at the same time as whom. Second, what is the focus of this article, love or cultivating immortality. I was very happy when eating Xiao Xie Xiao Rong, just like the feeling I had when I was 18 years old. My wife's writing style is very mature. But if it focuses on love, I saw it was 540,000 words before I clicked on it, and my progress is about 400,000 words. The two of them have just faced the problem of confessing their love. Moreover, Xiao Rong has a bond in modern times. It would be too hasty to worry about the bond between the two worlds while fighting the final battle, and his wife likes multiple lines. In fact, I want to make a digression. Now there is a wife who has written a book and is willing to form a bond in modern times. I understand that it is to save trouble and just arrange to be alone and not have to worry about the ending. But after eating, it is really weak. My wife is still willing to distinguish such delicate feelings. It is very touching. Speaking of focusing on cultivating immortality, I frankly did not see Xiao Rong's clear growth, and when I visually estimated the ending, only half a year had passed. I also thought that Xiao Rong's decision to join the sect and take the initiative was to follow Xiao Xie and follow him to finish the plot and go home. But what he actually did, so far I have seen that his development direction is formation, talisman, and bow. The talisman was taught by Xiao Xie so there is no need to mention it for safety reasons. The problem was that he was bored to solve math problems and was discovered by Bole who wanted to train him, but I only saw a few words to say about him. Gong and Linggen didn't want to hold back Xiao Xie and Xiao Li any longer, so they worked hard to practice. Again, I didn't see a clear context. As a novel about cultivating immortals, I didn't see the growth of the protagonist at all, and I didn't write about his state. I only heard a line about the early stage of foundation building from the mouth of the supporting character. Although it is obviously a spiritual root, it is actually Xiao Xie's spiritual energy sharing, but the spiritual energy sharing gives spiritual power, not realm. There are also obstacles in the article. It cannot mean that having enough spiritual power is equivalent to automatic upgrade when the experience bar is full. Furthermore, from the perspective of an outsider, a mortal has been building a foundation for several months and yet there is no splash at all. Moreover, there is no plot about him taking the initiative to learn to practice, but in the follow-up text, he is naturally allowed to say that he went to practice. He is a self-taught guy. Even if he goes to practice archery, in the context of a novel about cultivating immortals, I should be able to take it for granted that practice is equivalent to meditating and breathing. In addition, the content Xiao Rong learned seemed to have only worked for the one named Zhang, and the others were all open to large accounts. So as a novel about cultivating immortals, I can't see the growth of the protagonist. The third is who Xiao Xie loves. Because of Da Rong, the beginning of the chapter is very good to Xiao Rong. The characters of Xie Rong and Xiao Rong can be said to be two people. Xie Rong's relationship developed during the process of getting along with Xiao Rong, and he fell in love with Xiao Rong. But the key progress every time is because of memories of Da Rong, and it is because of Da Rong that he is good to Xiao Rong. But the problem is that Da Rong and Da Rong have completely different personalities. There are no similarities in their living habits and even their small actions. Xiao Xie is even very nervous about Xiao Rong eating meat because he remembers that Da Rong does not eat meat. It can be said that the big and small sizes are not the same except for their faces. Can you fall in love with another person by recalling one person? But my wife's writing style is so down-to-earth and reassuring, and her way of getting along with her makes me feel at ease. The fourth is the wife's worldview. It's the wife's choice to choose between high demons and low demons. I shouldn't comment too much, but some details make me unclear. Xuan said that it's painful to talk, so he has to write in the void of spiritual power. He has become an immortal, and it is a world of high demons, where there are inescapable and ascension. It was announced that he was programmed to remain silent as much as possible, but he spoke easily. I was stunned for a moment to see if this hurt or not. If he can endure the pain, then there is no need for him to remain silent. He can just practice the sword and practice it (bushi). Then there is the matter of protecting the people. It can be said that there is no foreshadowing in the previous article that Xianmen said that it is necessary to protect the people. It is a bit abrupt to suddenly say that this is your responsibility. If we say that the right path should be like this, I didn't specifically write the default. At the beginning of the chapter, when monks and mortals lived together, there was chaos and no one was there to manage it. Even towards the end, I felt a little at ease, because I didn't see the danger of the demons, or the fire didn't burn Xiaorong. Finally, there is the interpersonal relationship between everyone and Xiao Rong. Except for Xiao Xie and Xiao Li, they are all casual acquaintances. Although the setting is not the same, the readers perceive it that way. 540,000 Words should not be like this, and I feel that many things have not been covered in detail. The real reason in the end is that I am like this because I haven't read a novel in a long time, and this is the first one I read seriously recently. After I ordered it, I was very happy to eat it at first. The clothes were simple and old-fashioned (?) Just kidding, my wife wrote very down-to-earth, as if I had eaten a bowl of rice, and felt at ease. It was also because I liked Xiao Xie Xiao Rong that I spoke a few words from my heart. My words may be a bit unpleasant, so please forgive me. I look forward to my wife's other works.

I've conquered the damn monk and my inner demons and I'm going to chop/chop you all into pieces and feed them to the fish!!!!!!!!

Hahahahaha dog sword

I went, it's so real

Brothers are so loyal!!! [Sunglasses][sunglasses][sunglasses]

Lao Xie will always be waiting for you, Zhouzhou 😣

I thought it was because I couldn't take the male exam 🐶

Ouch ouch ouch hahahahahahahaha it turns out you are setting off fireworks [laughing haha][laughing haha][laughing haha][laughing haha][laughing haha]

Not a buddy, you better be a good person [vomiting blood][vomiting blood][vomiting blood][vomiting blood]