Dark Mage [Full-Dive]

First of all, congratulations on the completion. I haven't been online for a few days and it suddenly ended with the extra chapters. Well, it wasn't that sudden. After all, I had already said in my words that this article was going to end. I'm a lazy orphan reader who doesn't like to leave comments very much. I only glance at the comment section once I catch it, because sometimes the comment section can affect my mood (it only refers to the kind of troublemaker who only reads the beginning and starts the Ginseng Rooster, excluding rational discussions where everyone expresses their own opinions). I will wait until the end to write a long comment, talk about my opinions and suggestions on this article, and reluctantly return some comments. The following only represents my personal feelings (very! For! Subjective! Observation!), I just want to watch it for fun, there will definitely be people who have different opinions, so everyone can leave a message calmly (please don't criticize~ just hold the lid on the pot if you are cowardly). First of all, it's about character creation. This article is a typical heroine novel. The most important thing is actually the heroine Yili. How can I put it, in my opinion, her portrayal is very successful but also a bit of a failure. A perfect character creation must be three-dimensional enough and grow so that people can see her journey. Yili is three-dimensional enough so that everyone can see what kind of person she is. Some people have been saying in the early comment area, "Oh, this article is marked as holographic, but it has no online game flavor at all. It is completely a Western fantasy article." In fact, in my opinion, this is a great success, because Yili is a top mage from the Western fantasy world, because the game No one can tell about the settings of the game. She doesn't know that she is in a game. She is just living her second life seriously, exploring slowly and carefully in a world that is not like the past. She is a dark mage who is calm to the point of being cold. Yili has indeed grown up. In the beginning, she was a loner and made two mages as friends but they did not get along for a long time. Later, she found a lover named Shashi and was willing to slowly integrate into a completely unfamiliar world. But there are no other changes in Yili. Except for Shashi coming into her life, she has no more close people. The dark animal husbandry girl and the nurse girl are relatively close, but the total scenes are only two or three chapters. The teachers, classmates, research collaborators are all in the background, because it is finished directly, we can only make up for those changes. From Yili's behavior after joining the game team and the feelings of the game team manager, we can see that Yili is actually still the dark mage who is proud, confident and even arrogant in the eyes of others. But despite your flaws, I still love you, Yili. (Shashi: gun!) Then let me talk about the biggest flaw of this article in my opinion (it may be a bit unpleasant, but author, you have to believe that I love you too!). When I first said in my essay that it was almost finished, I left a message saying that I felt that there was still a lot to write about and it was almost finished. This was not a lie. Because I have a handicap, I mostly play stand-alone games. I occasionally play online games and can only be a sideshow under the protection of my friends, so I especially like to read online game articles. The fun of online games is nothing more than two things. One is a battle of wits and courage with the game company or game designer, and the other is a battle of wits and courage with the game players. The confrontation with the game company is well written in the article. Yili explores and decrypts the game. The game company has headaches for Yili's rapid growth and artificially increases the difficulty. Yili escapes from death by seeing the tricks. This kind of gameplay and confrontation is very interesting. As for the interaction with the players, it is blunt to say that there is no highlight. A female villain appeared in the early stage, and soon she was cannon fodder; the team that took advantage of the forest was soon turned into cannon fodder, and then kidnapped their priest girl; Shashi's team was a mess in the early and late stages, and the only thing I remember is the mage star; and then it was gone, and Yili was gone. Did she have any major interactions with players? She returned to reality and started playing professionally. She jumped out as a female cannon fodder who was still on the road to relationships. She also liked to fight public opinion battles. She only had a solo at the end, which was not considered a game-based confrontation between players. In the end, teammates were pinned to the ground and rubbed for a while, and then the article ended. The opponent was beaten to the point where he knelt down and sang for conquest. We can only make up our minds. Many large-scale online games level up very quickly, but reaching full level is the beginning of the game, because there will be a lot of interaction and confrontation between players, and Yili also has a team, so I also thought that Yili would integrate into the group and no longer be alone, explore more difficult dungeons together, and compete with other teams. However, in the full text, except for Shashi, Yili communicates the most with NPCs and fights the most with NPCs. She is not playing an online game, but a holographic stand-alone game. Finally, it returns to reality and ends, making people feel that the line is laid out in a big way. When I finished it, I said that the original intention of this article was to practice emotional drama, and it was considered to have achieved the goal. The long-lasting relationship between Shashi and Yili was still very sweet. To sum up, if it is an essay with a perfect score of 60. As a fantasy romance with a female protagonist, I give it 48 points. The plot is quite interesting and the emotional scenes are not too faulty. However, except for the last realistic volume, the man in the front dropped the entire volume without taking the initiative. The ending is hasty. It says there is e-sports content, but in fact it only contains love rivals and not much about e-sports. As an article about a holographic online game with a heroine, I can only give it 20 points, because the online game has become a stand-alone game, the gameplay is insufficient, and the ending is hasty, which is equivalent to a digression and a bad ending. But in the final analysis, an article is like the author's son. We, the spectators, are the aunts next door. The author's wife thinks it would be better for him to go back to work after he graduates from college. We aunts think it would be better to study for a Ph. D., But we can only say that forcing his wife to let him continue his studies is overstepping his bounds. So please come on next time, ma'am, I still love you~

I always thought it was fully booked, but later I realized that I had skipped watching it and watched it again. I still liked it very much.

I like it very much, I like it very much, I like it very much

Stopping halfway can easily cause damage!

The ending was a little rushed, but overall it was pretty good~

After reading it, it jumps directly from the devil world to reality. How can I put it? The writing is very good and the plot design is okay. However, in terms of the heroine's character, I feel that the character described by the author does not match the actual character of the heroine, so it looks very awkward and can easily cause drama. I really couldn't watch the middle part and skipped it, but overall it was good and I still liked it.

At a certain point, I became obsessed with this type of book after reading online game novels such as The Great Thief. After a book shortage, I came to Jinjiang to look for books to read, but I was disappointed. It felt like children playing house here.

I felt that the ending was a bit too hasty. It was so attractive in the early stages, but it ended inexplicably. There is absolutely no need to add this part of e-sports, because it is not written at all. I was still thinking about how the two of them could be so dominant in the game after rewinding, but the result was gone... The emotional line is really good.

So the relationship between the last online game world and Yili's original world is not mentioned either.

A short online game article, crying