What the Heart Clings To (Revised Edition)

It is a very beautiful ending. The author replied: Haha, thank you for your comment

It's been a long time since I've written a book review, and I feel like I don't know where to start. Yu Yu's "What the Heart Holds on" is as light as the wind throughout, and it gently blows my forehead, giving me an indescribable sense of comfort and joy. It's a good article worth reading. The content of this article is short but rich and exciting. All the protagonists appear in person at the beginning. Xiao Yuan is as gentle as the spring breeze in March, and Hua Tianfang is cold after his ridicule and banter, which makes people see the protagonist of the story. If love goes so smoothly, and princes and princesses get engaged, get married, and live happily, then what else do we have to think about the future? What can you do to enrich this long life? The reason your heart is moved is because you haven't met the right person, and the reason your heart is obsessed is because you are waiting for that person. Xiao Yuan and Lin Long's politeness, alienation and warmth doomed their love to be plain and simple, which also paved the way for Lin Long's subsequent attraction to Hua Tianfang. In laying the foundation for the structure, Yu Yu has done a really good job. Hua Tianfang is cold, has many encounters with Lin Long, and Zhiyuan Company has been repeatedly rubbed. No matter how careful and attentive Hua Tianfang is, it always makes people feel unreal, even scared. Just like these two enemies, a career-minded woman and a cold-hearted man with a purpose, how will they continue to develop? So the revenge story of a traditional wealthy family unfolded. After reading the whole story, I suddenly thought of the bandit's "Hibiscus Mat". Fortunately, Yu Yu was not as cruel as the bandit, and arranged a perfect ending with a prince and princess. This comforted my old heart. This article only has more than 80,000 words, so the plot is compact and the structure is concise and rich, which shows Yu Yu's intentions. There is very little nonsense in the whole story, and it all revolves around this period of love and hate. The theme is clear and the text is concentrated. This is the primary factor for the success of a literary work. It shows that Yu Yu's skills are excellent. In terms of characters, Hua Tianfang's character is very well written. He is sarcastic, rogue, casual, romantic, cold, and deep. These words will always pop up in his mind at the right time and are very vivid and vivid. As for Xiao Yuan who was kicked out, due to the length of the story, there are not many scenes except for the initial tenderness and warmth. Even the entanglement after the breakup was simply settled. It can be said that this The characterization was not successful; the protagonist, Lin Long, was initially positioned as a career-oriented woman. Such a girl will always be flexible and sensitive, but later on her personality became more and more ambiguous. She went to a strange man's house with just a few straightforward sentences, and got close to being romantic for no reason. Overall, I felt that everything was because the story was short and many things were not laid out, so it felt a bit rushed. Bai Ling's role is very lively and interesting, and more realistic. Another supporting character, Li Sisi, I originally had high expectations for her. The previous foreshadowing conveyed her inferiority complex very well, but then the writing changed and she only had such a small thought. I overestimated her scheming and role. Furthermore, Hua Tianqing is almost a background. Apart from her stunning appearance at the beginning, she has almost no chance to appear later, so it is difficult to evaluate. At first, she was said to be a passionate and persistent girl, but her brother's comment about her later made me a little confused about her personality. Overall, as mentioned in the previous chapter, this is a heartwarming story of revenge for a prince, but hatred will eventually turn into a memorable past under the power of love and become a story of the princes and princesses' ordeals. It is precisely because of fairy tales that we have the background of Huatian Fang's poor students being worth hundreds of millions at a young age. This shortcoming is also what we talk about, so we write and read articles and immerse ourselves in fairy tales. In terms of plot, it seems rushed because it is short, and many places are not deeply foreshadowed, making people have no sense of substitution and feel unnatural. Many plots are actually very vague, starting suddenly, ending suddenly, and then moving to the next one suddenly, which seems to be a deliberate arrangement. Especially at the end, the suspicion of haste is obvious. There are also some details that make people feel unreal, such as a plot such as a fall in the bathroom and being hospitalized and unable to walk. I don't know if it's because of my overthinking, but it always feels unreal. Speaking of bathrooms, I have to mention the matching of protagonist Lin Long's character and plot. Lin Long is the general manager of a large group company that manages assets worth hundreds of millions. How could he be so simple-minded as to go to a single man's home to wash his clothes when he doesn't have much affection for Hua Tianfang? This is actually a bit written specifically for the plot. In terms of details, if I remember correctly, Lin Long didn't know Hua Tianqing. How did Xiao Yuan and Hua Tianqing know each other? Of course, all these problems may be attributed to the shortness of the story. The above opinions are purely personal. If there is any inappropriateness, Yu Yu should not be offended. Generally speaking, I still like this article. The happy ending is everyone's outward direction, which is what I love. Life needs happiness. This is produced by Ce Wen Literary Society, no matter how old you are, haha. Author's reply: Thank you, new novel. Thank you for your hard work. I have worked hard to improve the shortcomings you pointed out. As for the advantages you mentioned, I am a bit embarrassed. This is the first article I wrote and it has many shortcomings. Thank you for your hard work, I will try to read it again and maybe write it again if possible.

The writing is good, keep up the good work! Author's reply: Thank you for the author's reply: thank you

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Happy ending! Something to be happy about!

"What the Heart Holds" is as its name suggests. As the name suggests, many characters in the novel are persistent people, whether they are protagonists or supporting characters. When I first read this story, I didn't know why I paid attention to Comrade Xiaohua. I always felt that the purpose was impure. As expected, my intuition was a bit accurate (I am very proud ^_^). At the beginning, I felt that he was frivolous, then he seemed to be kind, and then he seemed to be a playboy. In the end, I felt that he was a puzzling guy with a mysterious color. . But for some reason, I have always been wary of him and never believed that he was kind. Even when he later recalled such a long sad story and the words of the old lady in the orphanage that praised him, I didn't quite believe it. I thought Xiaohua should be a type of person who strives for fame and wealth and does whatever it takes to achieve his goals. Because of a bitter background, people often become more realistic, have more indifference in their hearts, and do not have the habit of being sentimental. I think he is like this. The general direction of his persistence is hatred. His life experience is very pitiful, but because he is just telling it, I always feel that at least he is living a pretty good life now. . . Hey, I feel like I'm a bit harsh on Xiaohua anyway, hehe (*^__^*) The most persistent award should be awarded to Mr. Bai. . This is really a stupid woman who lacks some IQ and some sense. . . The moment she kidnapped the heroine, I was always in a daze, wondering why this woman suddenly did something that surprised me. I feel sorry for her. From the moment she started fighting for clothes with Hua's sister, I felt sorry for her. As a result, the death was so slight, like a puff of smoke. Sigh... The other persistent and sympathetic comrade is none other than that aunt. I can't remember her name, but she didn't react to the heroine and was so excited that she seemed to have seen what she did, especially in front of my eyes. Why bother doing this for love? One died for love, and the other lived alone for most of his life. After all, it is easy for onlookers to say that the pain of the authorities may really be something that is really deep in the quagmire and there is no way to do anything about it. I think the fourth persistent person is Hua Tianqing. I chased him backwards and forwards, and he was not afraid of hard work. Although there was no special description in the novel, when I saw him getting married at the end, I really felt a little admiration at that moment - what a good boy, what a good boy. In addition, the heroine's parents are also persistent people, but I always feel that men are a little selfish and cruel to people they don't love. Look at what the father said, "She will find the right person." It feels very uncomfortable. Although it is true that being irrational will cause pain to all three people, but they have been waiting for you for half their life, how dare you say that you will find the right person? My god! Damn man! On the contrary, the heroine feels that she is more rational and not as persistent as the above-mentioned people. However, people are still irrational in the face of love, and this woman made all kinds of interesting signs from the beginning. Comrade Xiaohua is still quite charming! The man I personally admire in the article is Xiao Zhou. However, Xiao Zhou's name is not included in the supporting roles. Xiao Zhou, I feel sorry for you. I don't want you to accompany the heroine all the way, right? There is no credit but hard work. I see that you are checking for phone clues and following up, and you are almost catching up with the private detective. Xiao Zhou will help you protest strongly! (*^__^*) Hee hee... Who calls you the best? Another man in the supporting role, Comrade Xiao Yuan, is really not worth mentioning. He lacks a bit of character and has no outstanding personality. All I remember is how considerate he was towards the heroine. . . But at one point, I still felt sorry for him. At that moment my heart tightened. To be honest, it hurts a little. Comrade Xiao, I have exhausted all my benevolence and righteousness. Let's talk about something else: I really like the plot of this article, it seems relaxed yet still has a tense atmosphere of suspense. The story setting is top-notch, especially the battle where the heroine wins over the hero later on, which is very beautiful. The only flaw is that the ending is a bit rushed. I always feel that this story should not be finished so quickly. It seems that there is still much more to write, and it is still unfinished. Haha, it's mainly because it's good and I want to read it, which is also a small part of the reason why I feel it's rushed. Overall evaluation, I think the level of this article is obviously higher than "Heart Let Him Hear". Author's reply: Thank you very much. Haha, I will carefully maintain every good thing you said and work hard to improve the bad ones:)

I feel that the ending is a bit connected to the previous chapter and there is a gap. It is best to add some content.

Oops, the beginning of this chapter made me laugh and my stomach hurt, but it got a little heavy later on.

The prince and princess lived a happy life, what a wonderful ending, haha

Really good. . Like this article. .