Let Him Hear My Heart

Well, not bad, although I can't give a very professional comment, but it's just comfortable~!

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That's it. Woo woo Request extra The ending is a bit hasty

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This is a very realistic world. It is close to reality and also derived from reality. Every scene in it describes the cruelty of reality. The heroine Mu Ziqing is the daughter of a university professor. Her father, Mulin, and her mother, Li Shumin, have been married for many years, maintaining peace on the surface, but secretly they are suspicious of each other and dissatisfied with each other. Ziqing's grandfather and grandmother died in a car accident, and she felt a sense of loneliness and sadness. She lived at the lowest level of society and was constantly working hard for her own life. But this is also a story about Snow White and Prince Charming. Because of the relationship accumulated during the green years of college, when they were employed, they were directly selected by the company's superiors and successfully entered the company. He will rescue him when he is framed and jealous by others intentionally or unintentionally, and he will be a hero to save the beauty when he accidentally falls. It is true that it is close to life, and the fairy tale is romantic. The stories of Snow White and the working class are intertwined in this wonderful article. The author's writing style is mediocre, not gorgeous, but it is quite comfortable to read. He just likes to use pure dialogue, and the details are not detailed enough. It feels very light, and there is not much worth savoring. Let's talk about the plot of this article. From the beginning, the heroine has been hovering around two extremely outstanding men, hesitant. From this we can see that the author's writing style is accustomed to a light lyrical approach, and is accustomed to developing plots in trivial matters. It is mixed with the evil of human nature and the true love between people. It talks about the little things in life, but it can make people feel very warm. However, the author is not good at expanding the plot. One thing often slips away easily in the author's writing, and many stories are often told in the same chapter. It feels very streamlined. The author has described the entire process of a person's life, but you have not picked out the important and unimportant points, so as to select some plots worth writing about, or focus on describing the clean areas that are extremely important to the overall situation of the article. This is one of the flaws of this article, and let's talk about the character of this article. The characters of the protagonists in this article are not outstanding. Whether it is the female protagonist Mu Ziqing, or the male protagonists Fang Nan or Sun Zhanhao, their personalities are very general, not outstanding, and do not have too distinctive character traits. On the contrary, I was deeply impressed by the supporting character Fan Shanshan's daring to love and hate, the gentleness of the heroine's mother Li Shumin, and the forbearance and outburst of the heroine's father Mu Lin. Everyone has a soul. Human beings in reality have their own personalities, experiences and souls. They can do whatever they like. In novels and stories, the author also has to assign characters that are suitable for their life experiences, or the author assigns this or that character characteristic with subjective emotions, so that they can appear on the page by themselves as the article develops, fall into the eyes of readers, and fall into the hearts of readers. This kind of character creation is the most natural and unforgettable. In conclusion, this article still has great potential, but the beginning is a bit bland and the end is too hasty. The middle of the article is not bad. In addition, pay attention to the details and create a good image of the characters, then this article will be more elegant! Author's reply: Well, thank you for your hard work. I feel the same way myself:) Sometimes I feel that my writing is not as good as my heart. I don't want to accumulate enough life, and maybe my observations are not detailed enough. Haha, I will work hard to improve. Thank you again, thank you for your hard work.

This is a very realistic world. It is close to reality and also derived from reality. Every scene in it describes the cruelty of reality. The heroine Mu Ziqing is the daughter of a university professor. Her father, Mulin, and her mother, Li Shumin, have been married for many years, maintaining peace on the surface, but secretly they are suspicious of each other and dissatisfied with each other. Ziqing's grandfather and grandmother died in a car accident, and she felt a sense of loneliness and sadness. She lived at the lowest level of society and was constantly working hard for her own life. But this is also a story about Snow White and Prince Charming. Because of the relationship accumulated during the green years of college, when they were employed, they were directly selected by the company's superiors and successfully entered the company. He will rescue him when he is framed and jealous by others intentionally or unintentionally, and he will be a hero to save the beauty when he accidentally falls. It is true that it is close to life, and the fairy tale is romantic. The stories of Snow White and the working class are intertwined in this wonderful article. The author's writing style is mediocre, not gorgeous, but it is quite comfortable to read. He just likes to use pure dialogue, and the details are not detailed enough. It feels very light, and there is not much worth savoring. Let's talk about the plot of this article. From the beginning, the heroine has been hovering around two extremely outstanding men, hesitant. From this we can see that the author's writing style is accustomed to a light lyrical approach, and is accustomed to developing plots in trivial matters. It is mixed with the evil of human nature and the true love between people. It talks about the little things in life, but it can make people feel very warm. However, the author is not good at expanding the plot. One thing often slips away easily in the author's writing, and many stories are often told in the same chapter. This is one of the flaws of this article, and let's talk about the character of this article. The characters of the protagonists in this article are not outstanding. Whether it is the female protagonist Mu Ziqing, or the male protagonists Fang Nan or Sun Zhanhao, their personalities are very general, not outstanding, and do not have too distinctive character traits. On the contrary, I was deeply impressed by the supporting character Fan Shanshan's daring to love and hate, the gentleness of the heroine's mother Li Shumin, and the forbearance and outburst of the heroine's father Mu Lin. Everyone has a soul. Human beings in reality have their own personalities, experiences and souls. They can do whatever they like. In novels and stories, the author also has to assign characters that are suitable for their life experiences, or the author assigns this or that character characteristic with subjective emotions, so that they can appear on the page by themselves as the article develops, fall into the eyes of readers, and fall into the hearts of readers. This kind of character creation is the most natural and unforgettable. In conclusion, this article still has great potential, but the beginning is a bit bland and the end is too hasty. The middle of the article is not bad. In addition, pay attention to the details and create a good image of the characters, then this article will be more elegant!

Yes, I support it, but the characters and plot feel a bit bland and lack charm. Author's reply: Thank you for your review, we will work hard to improve it

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I have a question. Fang graduated first, so why didn't Sun catch up quickly? Instead, he lost contact. It's so strange. Author's reply: My understanding is that Sun is actually a bit shy, and Ziqing very deliberately keeps her distance. For example, when she works in Sun's company, she tries to avoid it.

Hehe, I don't have much internet access, so I finally finished reading it in one go today, so let's get down to business! This article is like a light ink painting. The article is written euphemistically from beginning to end. From the beginning when the three protagonists meet again to the satisfying ending, everything is calm and smooth. I personally think this article is suitable for people of that age who have some experience. The language description is plain and vivid, which makes people feel very comfortable. There is no special joy or sadness in the process of reading the article, but it is just right, like making a cup of tea, admiring the fragrance of the tea, calming down and slowly sipping the tea. When reading this article, I feel like I am right inside it. It is very intimate. It is very easy to get into the characters and the scenes of the lives of the characters in it. It seems that I am the heroine who has a crush on Comrade Fang. I also seem to be immersed in the office. Although there is a little intrigue, it is not too much. I was more touched and saddened by Xiao Sun's feelings for the heroine. It's always like this. It's not that you are bad, but that you didn't arrive earlier and I didn't meet you at the right time! Comrade Fang's passivity always makes me feel a little helpless. I feel that he is negative and too reserved, which makes me feel a little regretful and feel sorry for the love of the heroine. I quite admire the heroine's personality. She is reasonable and doesn't forgive others, and she doesn't cry in tears when she is defeated. She is occasionally cute and cute, but not too kind, and has a rare generosity and tolerance... As the author himself said, the characters are a little less distinct, and I feel that there are indeed some problems in the layering of the story, which need to be highlighted. Because there is no plot with ups and downs, it is particularly important to highlight the key points. In addition, the description of supporting characters like Fan Shanshan is not outstanding enough. It feels like things are just narrated, lacking some suspense. I personally like the female supporting role, like Yi Ning's description, I really like it, I think it is just right, highlighting her cuteness and fragility and the love of the other party's comrades. However, the grasp of details in life and the vividness and reality of description are places where the author handles it very well. For example, the sentence in the last chapter "The hand holding the fork unconsciously put the fork into the glass of fruit wine. There was a soft "bang" and the glass fell down. The purple wine suddenly soaked the tablecloth and looked like blood." This kind of description is very vivid and has a strong appeal. It's just that some parts of the description in my mind are a little too much. I hope Yu Dada can handle it better in the future. The previous chapter described Xiao Sun at length. Personally, I prefer Comrade Xiao Sun. He is a very good man, humorous and considerate. Although he seems to be passionate, he is actually dedicated, good at cooking and romantic. I prefer men with a personality like Xiao Sun's. As for Comrade Fang, he is a good person but not principled enough, so he always owes him a pat no matter what. Maybe it's because my personality has always been more proactive, so I don't appreciate such a meek man so much. Fortunately, he persisted when he should. In fact, life is like this. We will always hurt some people and be hurt by some people. How can we live up to the Tathagata and the Lord! I feel that the author has handled the transition between texts well. The novel develops very calmly. There is no other feeling of being fast at first and slow at the end, or slow at first and fast at the end. This makes the reader feel very comfortable o(∩_∩)o... Haha. . . . I want to learn and learn hehe! Anyway, thank you Yu Yu for giving us such a warm novel! Seeing them together makes me feel warm in my heart. Especially the final ending, although rushed, is still exciting. At least it lets me know that our grandson is still happy, and that although life is trivial, it is also warm! Author's reply: Thank you very much for your long review, haha, and thank you for reading so carefully from beginning to end. In fact, the heroine chooser may not be able to find any reason. It is inexplicable to like someone, but Sun is indeed very good! I support this too. When I first started writing articles, I felt that my description of characters was still lacking, so I worked hard to improve. Thanks again!